Harry Potter and the Lightning Lord

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Piggy

just check out colt01 on fanfiction. et the work is completed

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Avery025

This fic is utterly ludicrous (story wise) if ure seeking a standard Dumbledore-bash, overpowered /(arrogant) Harry with the family always described as the ‚most ancient house potter‘ then this is ur story

LV 1

asdasdssf

Unfortunately story sucks quite a lot. Everyone but mc and his friends are total idiots and frankly comical villains. Inner monologue for enemies is so childish and ridiculous. Meanwhile everything on mc's side is portrayed as right and moral. Even James bully past was changed so that mc would be in the right. Final straw was when Dursley's were sentenced and somehow Harry just got them to himself and started torturing them like maniac. Honestly mc becoming torturer was enough for me to quit, but situation was stupid anyways, since mc got them on his own private cell instead of them going to azkaban or some other prison. Overall story is written as pure childish power/ego trip with comical villains and stupid characters so mc can shine even with bad writing. Problem with this is that mc is not actually very strong or smart, instead everyone else is nerfed. Basically world/author just makes everything happen in mc's favor. I mean you are not very strong and smart if you can stomp a bug.

LV 1

Adem_Smith

It's the first time i found a "Harry Potter " fanfiction this good . I really enjoyed this and i hope that this amazing work won't be dropped

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Ishak_Jimale

This is by far the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever read.[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Brezer

its really not a bad story but the author goes way way overboard making dumbles out to be evil and hermione to be crazy. I don't like any of the characters ron,herm or dumbles and the hating was much even for me. so go to fanfiction and read all 51 chapters its not bad.

LV 4

Selectials

1) Quality of writing - 3,7. Over time, writing experience will come. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. And he is ‽‽ 4) Character design - 1. It's time to take off the rose-colored glasses, learn about timelines and parallel ones in other worlds. Hard to plan everything and improve yourself as much as possible. 5) background of the world - 3. I don't know how to put it into words. NOT IN A BAD SENSE. 6) Overall rating - 3

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ferferfer2

an extreme bashing story, and normaly i'd hate those types of stories, but d* this story is good! i am extremly sad it ended 😭😭😭😭😭

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GC_GAMING

good one wanted more. is there a sequel to this

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Lucifer951

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Gryphindoros

Very well done. Love the story and character building please 🙏 don't drop.

LV 4

Order66Survivor

One of the Best Harry Potter FF I've read in a very long time. Highly Recommended. I hope the author continues this story until the very end.

LV 4

Marco_Levi

best Harry Potter Fanfiction ever must read

LV 15

Godmakerxx

A really great story better than original for sure

LV 3

ZenGod21

Pretty decent story. Could have been written better to work in more plot twists, but for 50 chapters it wasn't that bad. Looking forward to more Harry Potter fanfics!

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MaximumRed47

Very interesting, but is this the end? Who knows.

LV 14

TBJ5K

trust, long chapters, good chapters, literally no complaints

LV 14

fatesknight

please read this it is worth the time. you will enjoy it immensely.