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What if...MCU Ned Leed wasn't who he was and New York had two different arachnid theme super human protecting the city?
This is my first work and second attempt at rehashing an already established property to fit my liking. The first attempt is the same story but non edited and rough at some angles and entirely in the wrong genre. If you like this concept, feel free to save this novel and follow my journey of butchering some of my favorite MCU movies and marvel story lines
All intellectual properties belong to their perspective company, this is just for shits and giggles, nothing more.
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Someone tell me if it's worth reading this ff of Ned... I ask because I hate Ned's pj within the mcu, and I'm not talking about the actor but about the character, his personality was too cringe and he didn't really let me enjoy the movies. .. For that, is it worth it or not? 3 star for now.
terrible story. 90% max rating is from celestialshadows1 who keep spamming fake reivew. I dont even know how someone can rate the same novel so many times.
I wasn't gonna right a review but the reviews on this is horrible so here you go. The story is good and I would loooove more chapters yes he abandons his mother but what can he do, he's a powerless human who knows a little martial arts, but this leads to character growth latter on and (my favorite) he gets very powerful wow though I do get kinda bored when he's with peter
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il do a proper review once I start seeing some romance, but other wise the updates seem stable and chapter length is not to long of short and the Grammer is good, but we need romance and not just like 2 chapters of it I mean like development of romance a real character.
Hey, I'm just saying plz make your conversations shorter plz they are like 1 paragraph and try not to put everything in one paragraph. I'm just going to stop reading. I have nothing against you. I just don't like how the state of story is and I hope you recept my decision.
hey man. thanks so much for updating I am at level three so I only get 2 stones a day but I promise man you will get those two stones daily if you update this story constitently
listen man don't listen to the haters hating on this book it is great I will support everyday if no one else does so please update please man this story is one of the best Spiderman fanfiction ever please update man please
yeah man thanks by the way I am unable to give stones for some reason it saying that the stories doesn't support stones
hey it has been 9 days now and I am still faithfully giving all my power stones to you so please update more frequently.
yo bro please update it been like three days now please update I'm giving you all my power stones man
hey man could you update with 2 chapters daily please if that is possible
the story was interesting at start but as he integrated with Avengers he became an simp where he is trying to pull a girl who is sad from loss of her brother and is super bad and I mean Superbad as he is fan zoning on avengers and doesn't have decency like atleast spiderman was useful in civil war he was a fan boy but he was good antman was to a fanboy but he was good too mc is waste he doesn't have any presence and is making it difficult for Avengers by spreading their mistakes video on net bro he is useless
ネタバレを明かす hey man please update and I will give powers stones as long as you do great story man just please update I live it please
卷 1
- 1 Ned-Ass 2 years ago
- 2 End Of The Tunnel 2 years ago
- 3 In The Blink Of An Eye 2 years ago
- 4 Departure 2 years ago
- 5 Fateful Encounter 2 years ago
- 6 Apprenticeship 2 years ago
- 7 Tripping 2 years ago
- 8 Day One 2 years ago
- 9 Day Two Part 1 2 years ago
- 10 Day Two Part 2 2 years ago
- 11 Week One part 1 2 years ago
- 12 Week One Part 2 2 years ago
- 13 Week One Part 3 2 years ago
- 14 Month Seven Part 1 2 years ago
- 15 Month Seven Part 2 2 years ago
- 16 Month Seven Part 3 2 years ago
- 17 Ink of Innovation 2 years ago
- 18 Leonardo di ser Piero da Vinci 2 years ago
- 19 First mission 2 years ago
- 20 Ghost Town 2 years ago
- 21 Ghost Town 2 2 years ago
- 22 Pyre 1 years ago
- 23 Missing Villagers 1 years ago
- 24 Graduation 1 years ago
- 25 Heart Break Anniversary 1 years ago
- 26 Limitations 1 years ago
- 27 Are Meant To Be Broken 1 years ago
- 28 2012 1 years ago
- 29 Bad Timing 1 years ago
- 30 GIRAFFE 1 years ago
- 31 Future Promises 1 years ago
- 32 My Name Is... 1 years ago
- 33 The Bite 1 years ago
- 34 Wrussy 1 years ago
- 35 Test Log 1 years ago
- 36 Costume Design 1 years ago
- 37 First Night Out 1 years ago
- 38 Third Night Out 1 years ago
- 39 Two Weeks In 1 years ago
- 40 Reunion After The Bite? 1 years ago
- 41 The Good The Bad The Sticky 1 years ago
- 42 Witness 1 years ago
- 43 Night Of The Party 1 years ago
- 44 First Impressions 1 years ago
- 45 Mother Fuc 1 years ago
- 46 Seoul Train 1 years ago
- 47 Battle of Sokovia 1 years ago
- 48 What Is Grief? 1 years ago
- 49 Seedlings 1 years ago
- 50 Seedlings 2 1 years ago
- 51 Spider Training 1 years ago
- 52 Here Lies... 1 years ago
- 53 Expo-Si-Tion 1 years ago
- 54 Surprise! 1 years ago
- 55 Back in R&D 1 years ago
- 56 Wolfgang 1 years ago
- 57 Blood In Blood Out 1 years ago
Could have been a really cool idea with him being the Mandarin’s son. However the book is practically ruined when he decides to abandon his family and all the resources they have in order to do his own thing. A poor decision and one that shows the Mc as an unlikable character. Everything else is standard MCU with nothing special. Don’t really recommend reading it, not worth the time