Mark of the Multiversal Pretender

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SlimeSage

What can I say? Only an idiot would not rate his own fanfic for 5 stars whether it is good or not.

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The_Envious_One

WHAT IS BRO GONNA DO IN WALL-E TELL ME.

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Billy_Joul

I hope he doesn’t give Helen Parr a stealth abortion this time

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Dao_of_laziness420

It felt too much like a mid-tier Chinese translation I couldn't keep going. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

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GodOfLight

I think the author is forgetting the backstory of the main character because his personality is moving further and further away from that of the great pretender and turning into a typical beta anime protagonist

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_DEKIM_

Meh.😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

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AlwaysHasBeen

It seems interesting to me at least. I'll stock up some chapters for now and hopefully, this will be different than the other story of yours author goodluck! Anyway here's a random meme of mine

I really like the story, but knowing your previous work, I'm afraid that the protagonist likes furries. If that time comes, I will stop reading it. One more thing, the protagonist is not of African descent, right? I've always imagined him as a white boy with brown hair.

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Iteq24_24

i have to change the review , this story started out strong but right now it seems like we are crawling forward , it became boring and incredibly slow

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Gustavo_Chura

It's worth giving it a chance, since in my opinion the fanfic will cover the "Disney" universe in depth compared to other fanfics in that you only go through that world once, complete the quest and then leave. so try darma chane it's worth it.

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Phan_777

for now, because I like the old story. and this is a re-write, hopefully it's better. read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read,read.

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CandyChopper

Mark of the Multiversal Idiot more like Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - Awesome Story Development ⭐⭐⭐ - It's okay Character Design ⭐ - horrible or negative World Background ⭐⭐⭐ - It's okay The more you read the more stupid story gets. At the beginning it was normal but the more you read more it hurts.

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Ep_E_X

Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters , Lame

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Alex3DxD

It is seen that he put effort into the work and that is why he fails. The introduction (chapter 20) is very slow, it is summarized in training to obey the system and some talks that are not interesting at all, he obtains the ability to travel between worlds and returns to train again, now being an extra behind the protagonist. . You give a lot of weight to the boring plots and the system, it basically carries the entire plot.

LV 15

SYNAX

Writing Quality is pretty good, author pays attention to detail and he also makes sure there are no typos, there will be a few here and there though but nothing major. Great and Stable updates. Development is at a pretty nice pace right now, I have no complaints. World Backround is pretty good too, overall this is a great read, check it out!

Did you know that a tiger's tongue can cause damage with just a touch? So it is better to avoid choosing her as a partner to the tigress for the MC.

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stray_bullet

I must know that. Its always you

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Random_Entity

This is great! My only request is to pair viper or tigress together. I mean you can’t dislike viper

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Rimuru_2412

no es mala pero tampoco es buena, el único problema esque para ser el "estafador" más grande es basten inocente .

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Penguin_M

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