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The starting of the novel is very interesting and the more you read it, the more you are about what will happen next and the one thing which I must include that the writing quality is amazing...KEEP IT Up!
I might have not read the novel yet but seeing it is a system novel I can already see Compass carburetor (aka the System Slayer) coming to destroy the system and if the protagonist is a cliche I can also see Yoo Seodam (aka the Protagonist Slayer) coming too
🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝 the synopsis has got me hooked up to the book. the character design and story development is supercool. keep it up.cheers to the great work.
This book is amazing 😍😍 From the writing quality to the story development and world background, everything got me hooked 😌 Nice job author, keep it up☺️
I love everything about your book, it's amazing and thrilling. I can't wait for more chapters..................................................
I have to be honest, this novel is actually interesting the novel have a nice story plot and character development. I read many novels based on system genres but this novel is one of the interesting ones that captured my mind all the way from the synopsis to the chapters.
I read the first six chapters and so far it has been amazing. Well I did find one thing cocky lol I commented about it. I think that needs work. Apart from that it’s lovely story keep it up author
For starters I like the way the story goes. Quite interesting though it need some work at the early stage. I like the way your writing got better as you wrote it shows you learn from your mistakes. Keep it up don’t let anyone talk you down
Well for starters the book is good. Though I have a bad habit of comparing system novels to the first system novel I read sorry. Compared to that I’ll give your book a six out of ten
I will be honest the first chapter lost me But after getting to the mutant system chapter I got intrigued. The storyline is nice, I just think the first chapters need some work.
Nice story Author. I don't know what to say, I know you're trying hard as an Author but you should put more effort to it. I hope you could improve more... Waiting for more creativity from you.
Hey guys, Author here. It looks really weird for the author to review his own novel but I'm going to do it anyway. Here are my reasons for rating my own novel 4.0 1. I once thought the writing quality was great, to me but now that I've gotten some honest reviews, I've realized its not that great. This novel is certainly the best I've ever written. Don't believe me, check Guardian of the Forest. However, my writing quality really has to improve, and I'm working on that. 2. The updating stability isn't as god as I hoped but this is the best that I can do for now. I'm a Grade 11 student so balancing between school, my novel and my art isn't easy so FOR NOW I'll stick to four chapters a week 3. I rated story development four stars because I think the story is very interesting. If your the type of reader who's not interested in reading for long but only wants to read interesting stuff, then this novel is one you should try. I warn you though, the first 25 chapters are laying down the foundation of the story so the remaining ones become more interesting as you go on. As I conclude, I want to state that this novel was mainly written for young teenagers and young adults but if you are not under that category, you are welcome to join the club, just keep an open mind and enjoy. Please do enjoy the novel and leave an honest review and vote, it helps a bunch.
It seems similar to werewolf system, I didn't like it so I won't like this. dododldoldldldldlldkdkd dld,dldldl dldkdld ddkdkd dkdd d dkdk
good story..............................good story..............................good story..............................good story..............................
Wonderful, just wonderful... I don't know what to say but it is just wonderful, you should read it and see... like this comment after reading it
ネタバレを明かす The starting of the novel is very interesting and the more you read it, the more you are about what will happen next and the one thing which I must include that the writing quality is amazing...KEEP IT Up!
I might have not read the novel yet but seeing it is a system novel I can already see Compass carburetor (aka the System Slayer) coming to destroy the system and if the protagonist is a cliche I can also see Yoo Seodam (aka the Protagonist Slayer) coming too
🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝🤝 the synopsis has got me hooked up to the book. the character design and story development is supercool. keep it up.cheers to the great work.
This book is amazing 😍😍 From the writing quality to the story development and world background, everything got me hooked 😌 Nice job author, keep it up☺️
I love everything about your book, it's amazing and thrilling. I can't wait for more chapters..................................................
I have to be honest, this novel is actually interesting the novel have a nice story plot and character development. I read many novels based on system genres but this novel is one of the interesting ones that captured my mind all the way from the synopsis to the chapters.
I read the first six chapters and so far it has been amazing. Well I did find one thing cocky lol I commented about it. I think that needs work. Apart from that it’s lovely story keep it up author
For starters I like the way the story goes. Quite interesting though it need some work at the early stage. I like the way your writing got better as you wrote it shows you learn from your mistakes. Keep it up don’t let anyone talk you down
Well for starters the book is good. Though I have a bad habit of comparing system novels to the first system novel I read sorry. Compared to that I’ll give your book a six out of ten
I will be honest the first chapter lost me But after getting to the mutant system chapter I got intrigued. The storyline is nice, I just think the first chapters need some work.
Nice story Author. I don't know what to say, I know you're trying hard as an Author but you should put more effort to it. I hope you could improve more... Waiting for more creativity from you.
Hey guys, Author here. It looks really weird for the author to review his own novel but I'm going to do it anyway. Here are my reasons for rating my own novel 4.0 1. I once thought the writing quality was great, to me but now that I've gotten some honest reviews, I've realized its not that great. This novel is certainly the best I've ever written. Don't believe me, check Guardian of the Forest. However, my writing quality really has to improve, and I'm working on that. 2. The updating stability isn't as god as I hoped but this is the best that I can do for now. I'm a Grade 11 student so balancing between school, my novel and my art isn't easy so FOR NOW I'll stick to four chapters a week 3. I rated story development four stars because I think the story is very interesting. If your the type of reader who's not interested in reading for long but only wants to read interesting stuff, then this novel is one you should try. I warn you though, the first 25 chapters are laying down the foundation of the story so the remaining ones become more interesting as you go on. As I conclude, I want to state that this novel was mainly written for young teenagers and young adults but if you are not under that category, you are welcome to join the club, just keep an open mind and enjoy. Please do enjoy the novel and leave an honest review and vote, it helps a bunch.
It seems similar to werewolf system, I didn't like it so I won't like this. dododldoldldldldlldkdkd dld,dldldl dldkdld ddkdkd dkdd d dkdk
good story..............................good story..............................good story..............................good story..............................
Wonderful, just wonderful... I don't know what to say but it is just wonderful, you should read it and see... like this comment after reading it
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