If you don't like the story, feel free to drop it and find something else that suits your tastes. I already know how horrible parts of the novel are, you're not the first person to point it out.
A reference image I found that best describes this scene. [Does anyone know the anime tho??]
The sight, though terrifying to the assistants, was a glorious one to behold. It was horrendous but at the same time...almost divine. Lord Gravax, being the only one brave enough to watch, smiled with great joy as his eyes witnessed the horrific whirlwind of blood continue to expand.
BLOOD MUTANT SYSTEM.
Fantasy · joshua_jt3
Digital drawing of Dezhong in this exact scene... except for the blue fire of course 😅
His muscles hadn't grown or shrunk, his height didn't increase or decrease, nor did his tone change. However, he did have tattoos covering his body.
AWAKENED: THE BEAST SYSTEM
Sci-fi · joshua_jt3
Which one was it then?
Hey there. So at the moment, I'm in the middle of college exams. As you may know, exams take a toll on an individual, especially on someone who's in the creative industry. As soon as i am done with them, I'll get back to updating frequently and will also upload the revised chapters. About fifty or so have been corrected and I'll post them gradually.
You're right. I don't know if you saw this in the synopsis but initially, I had written this thing out of a whim and I was 18 by the time I published it. Of course, those who gave "reviews" did so to "spare" whatever morale I had as an author rather than telling me the blatant truth so I had to go back and I'm scraping everything from chapter 1-100 cause you're not the only one who has let me know how bad it is, which I'm very grateful for by the way. I hope you can stick around for the rest of the novel but if you can't, I completely understand. Have a good one.
He screamed so loud that his body reverted back to normal, leaving him almost defenseless. OP2 removed the stick and stood above Ace with an eerie smile on his face. His eyes were so delusional that Ace could feel the murderous intentions coming off of him.
BLOOD MUTANT SYSTEM.
Fantasy · joshua_jt3
you're not alone 😂
Apart from his extremely tall stature, there was one other special thing about Stev's appearance, and it was that he was… fat. He was the first obese person that Sunny had met in the Dark City. Having a belly like that in a place like this must have required a lot of work, talent and dedication.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
😂😂
[Location: Desper{ground level city.}]
AWAKENED: THE BEAST SYSTEM
Sci-fi · joshua_jt3
Noted and corrected. Thanks
この段落は削除されました。
AWAKENED: THE BEAST SYSTEM
Sci-fi · joshua_jt3
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original BLOOD MUTANT SYSTEM.
4.13
The Human Race is faced with a dilemma after an unknown race attacks and abducts humans. With their intentions unknown, the humans fight dearly for their lives, even though they make little to no progress. While humanity struggles to survive, one particular characters gets chosen to become a walking weapon for the Alien Race, The Granians. Ace Underwood, who was one of the unlucky thousands that got abducted,wakes up to find himself inside a green tube. With no idea what's going on, he manages to escape only to learn of his new changed form. [Congratulations: Your DNA is a match with the Blood Mutant Gene.] [You must consume blood in order to survive.] Left to roam on the Earth, Ace must now survive from the Granians who wish to use him as biological weapon and learn to cope in a world of humans, and higher, intelligent life forms. Instagram: jt3art. Discord:https://discord.gg/fXdgzMrsmQ. ------------------405 Chs 5.6k お気に入り
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AWAKENED: THE BEAST SYSTEM
4.57
What started as a simple night-time robbery turned into an experience he'll never forget. Dezhong Prince, a cunning teenager,, spent the last day of an old year robbing a simple store with his friends until he took a detour that changed his life. While moving through, he's met with a beast that torments him throughout the whole night until he receives this: [Congratulations. You are the first to receive The Beast System.] Knowing he isn't the only one with the beast system, Dezhong must now grow stronger for when he encounters the others. However, he's also faced with another quest, [Discover the Shadow King.] Find out more in Awakened: The Beast System. Instagram: jt3art. Discord:https://discord.gg/fXdgzMrsmQ. -------------- Release rate: One chapter a day(bear with me, this isn't the only novel I have.) This is my first werewolf novel and it's got a lot of references to famous werewolf novels as well so, feel free to comment and let me know whether its good or not. Don't forget to comment, LEAVE A REVIEW, and vote with powerstones. Golden tickets are highly appreciated as well. Join the Discord server for sneak peeks, character images, and have a character of your own added to the novel. See you there.473 Chs 3.1k お気に入り
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MY MUTANT SYSTEM
4.51
Read Awakened: The Beast System. My Mutant System will be resumed soon225 Chs 2.7k お気に入り
Thanks for taking time to leave a comment. Unfortunately, I'm 460+ chapters in to the story and I can't go back to chapters 40 and below just to change a few stuff. If the rest of the novel isn't to your liking, feel free to drop it. Once again, thanks for leaving a comment.
AWAKENED: THE BEAST SYSTEM
Sci-fi · joshua_jt3