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It is a fantastic story that has been thoroughly enjoyable throughout the whole time I read it. The characters are great, the core cast have many instances of the author putting small tidbits of info about them to build them as a character, the friends and lovers of the main character are given a healthy amount of screentime as well I do still have some gripes about the story though. First is the slow release of chapters, it was once a week and now even that seems to not be the case since author hasn't uploaded a new chapter for 2 weeks . Second is the other world arc, like holy shit, how many layers of worlds are in this place...most of mc's wives must have died of old age waiting for it to end. It's like going through the layers of an onion...a world they end up to has an inner world, that has another inner world, that is connected to other worlds that mc and the girls have to do.
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Hi, really love both this novel and your other one. Is there a discord with pictures of the girls or is there somewhere else where pictures of them can be found?
One of my favorite novels. I love the story development and characters. I only wish author would update more frequently
once you get by the grammar issues, and there are a few in each chapter, it's a pretty decent book. I'm only on chapter 13 and I really like it.
Okay. First, I would like to thank the author for putting in the effort to design an intriguing story. Because no matter if the novel is enjoyable or not, the impressions and reactions we tend to have are precious memories along the journey of reading.Honestly, this novel had tons of potential, but the author couldn't excavate it accordingly. The first two chapters alone set in motion a chilling past and a strong foundation for future plot progression. After, that the next 50 or so chapters solidify the 7 main girls who would presumably accompany the MC for a long time. Until this, things were acceptable. It could be reasoned that the author was setting in motion all the important stuff and possible plot developments. But then, the novel started going downhill. There are a number of things conforming this.1. magus ranks up to 'half-magus emperor' in the 'myriad wonder stellar chart' were very clearly explained in the earliest chapters. So it's logical that you would expect the MC to reach and surpass these realms within reasonable time frame, even with considerable fights, mysteries, character development. But even after 500 chapters, MC is still at 'One-star' Mage rank. In this case the MC's level progression is agonizingly slow, which is one of the biggest letdowns in my opinion.2. Throughout the entire myriad chart saga, nothing of monumental importance seems to be happening, so arch nemesis, no climactic fights, no forming of allies fighting against a stronger force. 3. Around chapter 250, MC enters the so called ruins. At chapter 560, the ruins arc is still ongoing, whose time frame has already surpassed his journey through the entire chart.But, this novel also has some pretty good points. The translation is decent, characters are explored in detail, not just generically forgotten like extras. Bonding between MC and his partners is especially deep and they grow along with him, which is admirable coz most authors in these genres make the Harem of MC flower vases after a certain time. World building is also good but only the 'wonder myriad stellar chart' has been explained in detail so far and the strory revolves around the beast factions.So, the main point is that the novel is good and has massive possibilities, but the author has to work on the pacing, which in my opinion, has been too slow till now.
Really great novel but can like update the chapter from 1 ch a week to 1 day or release 4 or 5 chapters a week it's annoying to wait A WEEK LONG for 1 chapter and please with The rise of the pervert primordial really hope you read this
Great novel when can I expect an update and is there a discord link for this
the book is good but the arc is too long please wake me up when the arc is over....☺️☺️
um excelente romance e também muito viciante, um dos melhores que eu já li, tem um bom equilíbrio entre a ação, comédia, romance, atividades entre os amantes no quarto e aventura, muito bom para quem está começando no gênero da obra, o autor é muito comprometido com a qualidade da história vale a pena conferir, no começo pode ter aqueles chatos que só sabem por defeito em tudo é só fingir que eles não existem e aproveitar essa jornada, tudo é difícil e diferente no começo mas vale a pena
The novel is very good but I need a spoiler of the girls who make up the harem is this moment? zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
the book is good but can somebody tell me that is the MC coming out of the ruins or not.....
I read this many months ago, and quite enjoyed it. I was wondering if you have a discord server where you post illustrations of the characters. If not, I would really recommend it, makes it much easier for readers to look up characters.
Was wondering when there is gonna be chapter releases again it’s a great story and would love to keep reading
I'll make it quick. I love everything about this novel but one thing. 1 chapter per week just is not enough... i need moooooooore <3
The characters are amazing. the story is incredible. the only real problem I have with this story is how expensive it is. more than 20 coins for a single chapter. Way too much for the same number of pages and words as one of the top ranked stories that cost half as much. lower the price, and I could keep reading, but sadly, it's just too much cost for not enough story.
Thank God you are back..... I thought we were dropped..... hope you are doing well.... can't wait for more chapters.
love this novel. really want more chapters now though. author where did you go it's been almost 2 weeks since the last update
I love this novel along with your other one. My only complaint is the updating. I wish more chapters where released every week so we can see how this arc ends and how everything goes with the return to his galaxy.
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Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
It is a good novel. Don't get me wrong. It has good writing quality and adequate world development . But what ticks me off is its ridiculous slow pace development of the MC. MC is very weak at the start. He takes an oath that he would be stronger than everyone so that he could protect his loved ones. But sadly, the MC does very little to get stronger. I have read a lot of chapters and the MC is still a one star mage. The concept of system is very poorly used for the MC's growth. I know the MC is young as compared to his ridiculously overpowered harem members. But at this pace , MC is gonna need atleast 2000 chapters of story development to atleast come close to his harem members powers let alone his enemies . when I read the description of the novel, I thought MC would go to great lengths to increase his power quickly rather than fooling around with his woman who are marginally stronger than him. I am not blaming the author or novel per se. But this is not my type of novel.
I’m caught up on the latest chapter and must this is one of my favorite novels along with authors other work. Everything about it is well done except maybe one thing. I like long chapters but author-San makes them kind of a chore bc everything is way too over explained especially when readers are going to forget that stuff by the time the next chapters are out. And also I feel like there is a lot of re-explaining about stuff we learned in old chapters. Not exactly the same but similaritiese and there that make me think… okay I think I already knew that. I feel like the story could have progressed a lot more if things that are going to be forgotten didn’t have such a detailed explanation. I am still loving the work though author-San so keep the releases coming and I’ll keep the power stones coming.
I love the novel so far and i’m on almost chapter 300 but I went ahead and checked the next chapter names and I don’t know how to feel about having almost 300 chapters worth of Daimon being in a prison dimension away from the main setting of the story, I feel like it’s way too many chapters for a magic ruin exploration. Just my opinion though, keep up the good work :)
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hey what's happening with updates they have slowed down quiet a bit .....hope you are doing well just plz don't drop the novel
When will he be going to do some snu~snu~ stuff normally means losing his pure innocence
It's a bit slow and tournament arc are ample but I'm loving the characters and their relationships...... everything seems natural and have valid reasons I'm hoping for 3000 chapters since there is so much to explore it's slow but I'm not losing interest and that's a huge deal for me......I'm loving the main character too since he is like victor from M3WBV which is my no.1 and I guess this will be no.2 I haven't read your other novel so I guess I will give it a try....also plz complete this novel....thanks author for you work
Im currently at chapter 46 but this feels like slice of life and there no sol tag
It is a fantastic story that has been thoroughly enjoyable throughout the whole time I read it. The characters are great, the core cast have many instances of the author putting small tidbits of info about them to build them as a character, the friends and lovers of the main character are given a healthy amount of screentime as well I do still have some gripes about the story though. First is the slow release of chapters, it was once a week and now even that seems to not be the case since author hasn't uploaded a new chapter for 2 weeks . Second is the other world arc, like holy shit, how many layers of worlds are in this place...most of mc's wives must have died of old age waiting for it to end. It's like going through the layers of an onion...a world they end up to has an inner world, that has another inner world, that is connected to other worlds that mc and the girls have to do.
ネタバレを明かす Hi, really love both this novel and your other one. Is there a discord with pictures of the girls or is there somewhere else where pictures of them can be found?
One of my favorite novels. I love the story development and characters. I only wish author would update more frequently
once you get by the grammar issues, and there are a few in each chapter, it's a pretty decent book. I'm only on chapter 13 and I really like it.
Okay. First, I would like to thank the author for putting in the effort to design an intriguing story. Because no matter if the novel is enjoyable or not, the impressions and reactions we tend to have are precious memories along the journey of reading.Honestly, this novel had tons of potential, but the author couldn't excavate it accordingly. The first two chapters alone set in motion a chilling past and a strong foundation for future plot progression. After, that the next 50 or so chapters solidify the 7 main girls who would presumably accompany the MC for a long time. Until this, things were acceptable. It could be reasoned that the author was setting in motion all the important stuff and possible plot developments. But then, the novel started going downhill. There are a number of things conforming this.1. magus ranks up to 'half-magus emperor' in the 'myriad wonder stellar chart' were very clearly explained in the earliest chapters. So it's logical that you would expect the MC to reach and surpass these realms within reasonable time frame, even with considerable fights, mysteries, character development. But even after 500 chapters, MC is still at 'One-star' Mage rank. In this case the MC's level progression is agonizingly slow, which is one of the biggest letdowns in my opinion.2. Throughout the entire myriad chart saga, nothing of monumental importance seems to be happening, so arch nemesis, no climactic fights, no forming of allies fighting against a stronger force. 3. Around chapter 250, MC enters the so called ruins. At chapter 560, the ruins arc is still ongoing, whose time frame has already surpassed his journey through the entire chart.But, this novel also has some pretty good points. The translation is decent, characters are explored in detail, not just generically forgotten like extras. Bonding between MC and his partners is especially deep and they grow along with him, which is admirable coz most authors in these genres make the Harem of MC flower vases after a certain time. World building is also good but only the 'wonder myriad stellar chart' has been explained in detail so far and the strory revolves around the beast factions.So, the main point is that the novel is good and has massive possibilities, but the author has to work on the pacing, which in my opinion, has been too slow till now.
Really great novel but can like update the chapter from 1 ch a week to 1 day or release 4 or 5 chapters a week it's annoying to wait A WEEK LONG for 1 chapter and please with The rise of the pervert primordial really hope you read this
Great novel when can I expect an update and is there a discord link for this
the book is good but the arc is too long please wake me up when the arc is over....☺️☺️
um excelente romance e também muito viciante, um dos melhores que eu já li, tem um bom equilíbrio entre a ação, comédia, romance, atividades entre os amantes no quarto e aventura, muito bom para quem está começando no gênero da obra, o autor é muito comprometido com a qualidade da história vale a pena conferir, no começo pode ter aqueles chatos que só sabem por defeito em tudo é só fingir que eles não existem e aproveitar essa jornada, tudo é difícil e diferente no começo mas vale a pena
The novel is very good but I need a spoiler of the girls who make up the harem is this moment? zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
the book is good but can somebody tell me that is the MC coming out of the ruins or not.....
I read this many months ago, and quite enjoyed it. I was wondering if you have a discord server where you post illustrations of the characters. If not, I would really recommend it, makes it much easier for readers to look up characters.
Was wondering when there is gonna be chapter releases again it’s a great story and would love to keep reading
I'll make it quick. I love everything about this novel but one thing. 1 chapter per week just is not enough... i need moooooooore <3
The characters are amazing. the story is incredible. the only real problem I have with this story is how expensive it is. more than 20 coins for a single chapter. Way too much for the same number of pages and words as one of the top ranked stories that cost half as much. lower the price, and I could keep reading, but sadly, it's just too much cost for not enough story.
Thank God you are back..... I thought we were dropped..... hope you are doing well.... can't wait for more chapters.
love this novel. really want more chapters now though. author where did you go it's been almost 2 weeks since the last update
I love this novel along with your other one. My only complaint is the updating. I wish more chapters where released every week so we can see how this arc ends and how everything goes with the return to his galaxy.
ネタバレを明かす Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
It is a good novel. Don't get me wrong. It has good writing quality and adequate world development . But what ticks me off is its ridiculous slow pace development of the MC. MC is very weak at the start. He takes an oath that he would be stronger than everyone so that he could protect his loved ones. But sadly, the MC does very little to get stronger. I have read a lot of chapters and the MC is still a one star mage. The concept of system is very poorly used for the MC's growth. I know the MC is young as compared to his ridiculously overpowered harem members. But at this pace , MC is gonna need atleast 2000 chapters of story development to atleast come close to his harem members powers let alone his enemies . when I read the description of the novel, I thought MC would go to great lengths to increase his power quickly rather than fooling around with his woman who are marginally stronger than him. I am not blaming the author or novel per se. But this is not my type of novel.
I’m caught up on the latest chapter and must this is one of my favorite novels along with authors other work. Everything about it is well done except maybe one thing. I like long chapters but author-San makes them kind of a chore bc everything is way too over explained especially when readers are going to forget that stuff by the time the next chapters are out. And also I feel like there is a lot of re-explaining about stuff we learned in old chapters. Not exactly the same but similaritiese and there that make me think… okay I think I already knew that. I feel like the story could have progressed a lot more if things that are going to be forgotten didn’t have such a detailed explanation. I am still loving the work though author-San so keep the releases coming and I’ll keep the power stones coming.
I love the novel so far and i’m on almost chapter 300 but I went ahead and checked the next chapter names and I don’t know how to feel about having almost 300 chapters worth of Daimon being in a prison dimension away from the main setting of the story, I feel like it’s way too many chapters for a magic ruin exploration. Just my opinion though, keep up the good work :)
ネタバレを明かす hey what's happening with updates they have slowed down quiet a bit .....hope you are doing well just plz don't drop the novel
When will he be going to do some snu~snu~ stuff normally means losing his pure innocence
It's a bit slow and tournament arc are ample but I'm loving the characters and their relationships...... everything seems natural and have valid reasons I'm hoping for 3000 chapters since there is so much to explore it's slow but I'm not losing interest and that's a huge deal for me......I'm loving the main character too since he is like victor from M3WBV which is my no.1 and I guess this will be no.2 I haven't read your other novel so I guess I will give it a try....also plz complete this novel....thanks author for you work
Im currently at chapter 46 but this feels like slice of life and there no sol tag