I love the culture that these books bring to life. I actually got hooked when I started reading Blue Phoenix. I'd like to give a shout-out to RavenGoddess for their great novels! Right now I'm into reincarnation, transmigration, system, female MC, overpowered novels.
2018-01-27 入りました United States
she's immortal so that's not really a big cool down if u think about it
instead of the overplayed universes like MCU or DC universes maybe you could stray into different animes or something like that.
I love that she used an army killing rune to cut down a tree 😂
if this novel was put through some serious editing it would be great it's great story concept but in English anyway it just doesn't flow properly.
can he multiply his xp by 1000?
You have to stop ending paragraphs /chapters like this, it gets repetitive. Nothing is worse in a story than a repetitive ending.
Yvonne listened to her grandfather and suddenly had a bad premonition, about the near future but that is a story for another day.
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
That sounds cool, is she going to become like one of the Noble or Ancient Families like the Blacks or Potters?
once you get by the grammar issues, and there are a few in each chapter, it's a pretty decent book. I'm only on chapter 13 and I really like it.
That's why you write your drafts on docs or word and then copy and paste to webnovel, unfortunately this happens more often than not. Either way it was a solid chapter.
I am so confused right now
I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?
Fantasy · BWbear