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Very good one of the best I really like his bloodline and race .hehshsjsnansnsnsndnndjsjdjsjsjsjsjsjajsjjwjwjwhwhahwjwjwhwiauhajajh sha a shah w show aownka wow. Whqbwjw banquet niqab w wow w j a Abakan Ann a Anna Alana an Shan Jana a
Review as of chapter 485 - This is one of the few novels I've been willing to purchase privilege for. The writing quality for me is very good, albeit some minor spelling mistakes and misuse of words, but English isn't the authors native tongue (it is mine and I can honestly say I wouldn't be able to do better).The story development is very slow in some places, whilst some may not like this. For me, it just shows how much thought has been put into where the novel is going, and I find it makes a much more interesting read.There are a lot of characters in this novel, and whilst some don't have as much depth as others, they all have their own personality, which is usually not seen in your typical harem novels.The updating stability is consistent enough with 1 big chapter a day and no filler as far as I can remember.The universe in which this novel is set seems well thought out, and I am more impressed with this than some of more preferred novels.My 1 real 'con' with this novel is that the author doesn't post bonus chapters for the 300 power stone mark, but this can easily be rectified by removing that offer - which wouldn't be a problem for me.
Honestly, it was great up till the point he goes to the new world on the other side of the cave.
So slow paced. The story keeps rotating on the same pattern over and over again with no visible improvement with the MC. Its just s*x and face slapping over and over again. It's still slightly better than other novels but still, it could have been better.
its fine aside from being sssoooosssssslow pace and some redundant scenarios, lil bit better than chinese garbage. ................
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The story is very good however a issue I would have is that the author writes about stuff that could be skipped however it also makes you more immersed into the story plus I feel like you could speed a little bit of the story up unless you plan to write this story for a long time otherwise it’s not a issue!! Can someone tell me when he gets horals and Rita?
bro the moment I read chapter 3, I knew I was hooked, I knew no matter what happens I will read this to the end and here I am waiting for new chapters. This novel is hella good 💯💯. Try it you will never regret it.
writing quality is severely lacking, needs lots of editing. the development at a certain point just drags
Personally havent liked it so far(around ch 60), the over extension of harem to his mother makes the story a bit turbid, while the system is pretty cool, I hoped hed be hunting monsters to get skills as he did with the manticore. I do hope the story develops toward that point, but if its just harem then meh, The time skip transition wasnt very smooth. But the world building was very nice. Nonetheless, again, the use of 3 chps only for sexual intercourse, was very boring to read.
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Started out great and Could have been one of the best but I had to Drop mostly because Mc is boring and constantly weaker then the FLs. Maybe he gets stronger then them eventually but I’m not going to waste coins nor skip half the story to ge to that point.
Read this story to the latest chapters and it's an amazing piece of work! Chapters are long which is great, and the author is great at being mysterious when writing which has me hooked . Question to Author, I need to know how long you plan on making this series! I don't think even 1000 chapters would be enough because there is so much potential in this story.
I like the story ...........................................................................................................................
This is honestly one of my favorite webnovels. The world as well as the characters are all very well developed. The writing and grammar are also very good, minimal mistakes. I’m loving it so far and have given most of my golden tickets and power stones and I will continue to do so. Amazing book author!
i really love the characteristic of mc and the fmc and the story is good/awesome
tbh, it was very good at the beginning till 45th chapter but after academy arc came it all goes to from 1 to 0 reason just too many clichés( mc says himself as demon but acts like a hero ).. till now, 295 his vote didn't get activated but he stills fights cross realms like nothing and all are stupid and mc is wise story!!! people coming getting face-slapped and still mc walks like nothing happened, never got.defeated(it is good but aren't there someone who can beat him from senior classes or they are just invisible ???)) (it is my pov and preferred view , so don't get sentimental and come here to get face-slapped ))🔥
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Writing Quality is nearly awesome, story development is also the same. I ony read up to chapter 4. I would have liked this story. I really would have but unfortunately I hate mother and son lover stories no matter if it is reincarnated or transmigrated. It's just weird and somewhat disgusts me.
This is an amazing story...start reading it for the Xmas event and start to love it almost immediately... a bit pricey but almost affordable... The MC development is great and the author is good at leaving us reader in suspense... will the MC became a mighty monster? please tell us Author-san 🙏😫 . . . he has Claws...he only need Horns and a Tail... some durable Fur...or scale...or both... a beautiful Chimera🤩
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man, i just wanna clarify things before reading any further.. I'm stranded currently at chap 40 and all the novel showed was...how awesome, beautiful, and generous all the powerful women are and how stupid, pathetic and brain-dead all the powerful men are..how awesome the system is and how large our mc is dependent on the system and the women..how 60 percent of chapters could be filled with info abt a skill, testing the skill and all the backstories for every little things..and how often the mc tries to show him as a human who always takes the right decision and gives some justification for his every action,,like come on man, i get he is a goody two shoes to almost any women from the beginning already.. may i know if he starts acting like any normal boy would in these situations and becomes independent once he becomes an adult?
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FIRST I WANT TO SAY THIS NOVEL IS BETTER THEN 3/4 OF THE NOVELS THAT CURRENTLY OCCUPY THE TOP 10 lol [Now for my review] I love everything about this novel starting with the cool Alpha male MC who is good with women, the unique system the MC gets by pushing himself past his limits to protect who he loves, the fun atmosphere and different kinds of characters, a completely different world background compared to other novels ive read, also the harem members stay relevant and you get to see great character development, the mixture of slice of life/action/fantasy/romance/adventure/harem/R18 all meshed together perfectly, another thing I love is how the author didn't follow the trend of making his MC a bashful/dense/lame protagonist like a lot of mcs these days, The MC acts realistic the way he follows his desires protects those he loves and is heartless to his enemies. If I was forced to say anything negative it would be I wish the novel got more then one chapter a day because I can't get enough.
It's a great novel. Harem and romance are good. He has creativity. It's a job I'm not bored of. There are minor errors, but they do not bore the reader. Good work, author.
This is a good thing I recommend to everyone, just like the author's first book!! I decided to read after reading the primitive and was also fascinated, the author clearly knows his business.
tbh from the moment I Read the first chapter now I've been hooked it been a few hours and I've currently caught up with the open chapter's thank you for such a masterpiece author 🙂.
Very good one of the best I really like his bloodline and race .hehshsjsnansnsnsndnndjsjdjsjsjsjsjsjajsjjwjwjwhwhahwjwjwhwiauhajajh sha a shah w show aownka wow. Whqbwjw banquet niqab w wow w j a Abakan Ann a Anna Alana an Shan Jana a
Review as of chapter 485 - This is one of the few novels I've been willing to purchase privilege for. The writing quality for me is very good, albeit some minor spelling mistakes and misuse of words, but English isn't the authors native tongue (it is mine and I can honestly say I wouldn't be able to do better).The story development is very slow in some places, whilst some may not like this. For me, it just shows how much thought has been put into where the novel is going, and I find it makes a much more interesting read.There are a lot of characters in this novel, and whilst some don't have as much depth as others, they all have their own personality, which is usually not seen in your typical harem novels.The updating stability is consistent enough with 1 big chapter a day and no filler as far as I can remember.The universe in which this novel is set seems well thought out, and I am more impressed with this than some of more preferred novels.My 1 real 'con' with this novel is that the author doesn't post bonus chapters for the 300 power stone mark, but this can easily be rectified by removing that offer - which wouldn't be a problem for me.
Honestly, it was great up till the point he goes to the new world on the other side of the cave.
So slow paced. The story keeps rotating on the same pattern over and over again with no visible improvement with the MC. Its just s*x and face slapping over and over again. It's still slightly better than other novels but still, it could have been better.
its fine aside from being sssoooosssssslow pace and some redundant scenarios, lil bit better than chinese garbage. ................
Good job! GogogogogogogogoGogogogogogogogoGogogogogogogogoGogogogogogogogoGogogogogogogogoGogogogogogogogoGogogogogogogogoGogogogogogogogoGogogogogogogogo
The story is very good however a issue I would have is that the author writes about stuff that could be skipped however it also makes you more immersed into the story plus I feel like you could speed a little bit of the story up unless you plan to write this story for a long time otherwise it’s not a issue!! Can someone tell me when he gets horals and Rita?
bro the moment I read chapter 3, I knew I was hooked, I knew no matter what happens I will read this to the end and here I am waiting for new chapters. This novel is hella good 💯💯. Try it you will never regret it.
writing quality is severely lacking, needs lots of editing. the development at a certain point just drags
Personally havent liked it so far(around ch 60), the over extension of harem to his mother makes the story a bit turbid, while the system is pretty cool, I hoped hed be hunting monsters to get skills as he did with the manticore. I do hope the story develops toward that point, but if its just harem then meh, The time skip transition wasnt very smooth. But the world building was very nice. Nonetheless, again, the use of 3 chps only for sexual intercourse, was very boring to read.
ネタバレを明かす Started out great and Could have been one of the best but I had to Drop mostly because Mc is boring and constantly weaker then the FLs. Maybe he gets stronger then them eventually but I’m not going to waste coins nor skip half the story to ge to that point.
Read this story to the latest chapters and it's an amazing piece of work! Chapters are long which is great, and the author is great at being mysterious when writing which has me hooked . Question to Author, I need to know how long you plan on making this series! I don't think even 1000 chapters would be enough because there is so much potential in this story.
I like the story ...........................................................................................................................
This is honestly one of my favorite webnovels. The world as well as the characters are all very well developed. The writing and grammar are also very good, minimal mistakes. I’m loving it so far and have given most of my golden tickets and power stones and I will continue to do so. Amazing book author!
i really love the characteristic of mc and the fmc and the story is good/awesome
tbh, it was very good at the beginning till 45th chapter but after academy arc came it all goes to from 1 to 0 reason just too many clichés( mc says himself as demon but acts like a hero ).. till now, 295 his vote didn't get activated but he stills fights cross realms like nothing and all are stupid and mc is wise story!!! people coming getting face-slapped and still mc walks like nothing happened, never got.defeated(it is good but aren't there someone who can beat him from senior classes or they are just invisible ???)) (it is my pov and preferred view , so don't get sentimental and come here to get face-slapped ))🔥
ネタバレを明かす Writing Quality is nearly awesome, story development is also the same. I ony read up to chapter 4. I would have liked this story. I really would have but unfortunately I hate mother and son lover stories no matter if it is reincarnated or transmigrated. It's just weird and somewhat disgusts me.
This is an amazing story...start reading it for the Xmas event and start to love it almost immediately... a bit pricey but almost affordable... The MC development is great and the author is good at leaving us reader in suspense... will the MC became a mighty monster? please tell us Author-san 🙏😫 . . . he has Claws...he only need Horns and a Tail... some durable Fur...or scale...or both... a beautiful Chimera🤩
Semoga membantu 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
man, i just wanna clarify things before reading any further.. I'm stranded currently at chap 40 and all the novel showed was...how awesome, beautiful, and generous all the powerful women are and how stupid, pathetic and brain-dead all the powerful men are..how awesome the system is and how large our mc is dependent on the system and the women..how 60 percent of chapters could be filled with info abt a skill, testing the skill and all the backstories for every little things..and how often the mc tries to show him as a human who always takes the right decision and gives some justification for his every action,,like come on man, i get he is a goody two shoes to almost any women from the beginning already.. may i know if he starts acting like any normal boy would in these situations and becomes independent once he becomes an adult?
ネタバレを明かす FIRST I WANT TO SAY THIS NOVEL IS BETTER THEN 3/4 OF THE NOVELS THAT CURRENTLY OCCUPY THE TOP 10 lol [Now for my review] I love everything about this novel starting with the cool Alpha male MC who is good with women, the unique system the MC gets by pushing himself past his limits to protect who he loves, the fun atmosphere and different kinds of characters, a completely different world background compared to other novels ive read, also the harem members stay relevant and you get to see great character development, the mixture of slice of life/action/fantasy/romance/adventure/harem/R18 all meshed together perfectly, another thing I love is how the author didn't follow the trend of making his MC a bashful/dense/lame protagonist like a lot of mcs these days, The MC acts realistic the way he follows his desires protects those he loves and is heartless to his enemies. If I was forced to say anything negative it would be I wish the novel got more then one chapter a day because I can't get enough.
It's a great novel. Harem and romance are good. He has creativity. It's a job I'm not bored of. There are minor errors, but they do not bore the reader. Good work, author.
This is a good thing I recommend to everyone, just like the author's first book!! I decided to read after reading the primitive and was also fascinated, the author clearly knows his business.
tbh from the moment I Read the first chapter now I've been hooked it been a few hours and I've currently caught up with the open chapter's thank you for such a masterpiece author 🙂.