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kratos gonna come and kill you ahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah
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I only managed to read up to chapter 5 before my brain burned itself out... The grammar is so bad it's amazing. I know the author said that English is his second language, so don't expect much, but even when readers give him comments to fix, he doesn't correct the writing... In any case, the concept of the story looks nice and I would love to read it in the future when it undergoes editing.
I'm sorry, man. I can't give a review based on the story, since I couldn't read too far. I know most authors are leaning the language still. . But not using an app for simple grammar to make it at least cohesive is painful to read.
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I like it... A few problems, concepts and modern slangs used here and there or a few millenias too early a butt load of spelling and grammar error. other than that it's a normal
Who will bring justice for author if not yours only. I suppose admins doesn't care about fake votes. A very illogical story without much intellectual investment.
So, the writer is unable to write in proper english. He does not understand weight or temperatures, but insists on using theim...
awesome work bro waiting for more chapters [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
dude i have a idea if a person dies and reincarnated as hagoromo(sage of six path) third son and was quater otsutsuki quarter saiyan with(freeza potential),and half kryptonian and use all power of these race fully
Una basura total, apenas y hay diálogos, lo que abunda en esta historia son las descripciones de los sucesos pero apenas y encontrarás algo coherente, el MC es un idiota y la verdad está historia es una pérdida de tiempo
Here again again [img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Awesome work I only read first few chapters I would say I love it there is some grammar problems but its very good
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Would be hella funny if you put a Kratos cameo YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Loved the premise of the story and was very exited to read as the Greek mythology lore is some of my favorite. I don't even mind that the basis of the novel is a massive harem, but what did bother me was the inter character dialog and how easy it was for him to pick up the women. There is little to no romance involved in the story and most inter harem disputes go like this: "I don't like ...." "but you are beatiful" "ok, I forgive you and you are always right" It is very one dimensional and gives the characters a plastic, synthetic feeling. Another blaring issue is the writing quality as the grammar and spelling leaves much to be desired. All in all, I would recommend giving it a try and if these issues don't bother you at all then all power to you.
Lost my brain cells reading this.….Lost my brain cells reading this.….Lost my brain cells reading this.….Lost my brain cells reading this.….
Awesome work man please continue its an amazing story a must read there is some grammar mistakes but aside that its a great story About DC and Mythologizes love it ..................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's a really good story but the grammar is very bad. Why don't you try using grammarly. ..........................................................................
Your moral compass needs some very strong re-adjustment, what is wrong with you?............................................................
Ok, I can deal with bad grammar, but this specific type annoys me so much. It seems like a toddler is writing this, which in turn makes the main character seem childish, and now I can’t take it seriously.
someone please explain me is mc very bad like did he kill innocent civilians and stuffs like that if it is just lustful it is still ok for me but if he is too much of a villain i will have to pass it now i want to read it but i also don't want to because of villain mc tag i hate villain mc( there are many types of villains i especially hate those who kill innocent people)
GREAT AWESOME LOVING IT [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] FANTASTIC I LOVE YOU AUTHOR SAMA GREAT BOOK READING ALL THE LATEST CHAPTERS WITH GREAT
I havmt read it yet and I never will I just wanted to give 5 stars because it's an amazing story idea and the description looks amazing but the harem ruins everything good luck author-sama
Take My 5 Stars You Glorious B*stard For Idk [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
kratos gonna come and kill you ahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah
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I only managed to read up to chapter 5 before my brain burned itself out... The grammar is so bad it's amazing. I know the author said that English is his second language, so don't expect much, but even when readers give him comments to fix, he doesn't correct the writing... In any case, the concept of the story looks nice and I would love to read it in the future when it undergoes editing.
I'm sorry, man. I can't give a review based on the story, since I couldn't read too far. I know most authors are leaning the language still. . But not using an app for simple grammar to make it at least cohesive is painful to read.
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I like it... A few problems, concepts and modern slangs used here and there or a few millenias too early a butt load of spelling and grammar error. other than that it's a normal
Who will bring justice for author if not yours only. I suppose admins doesn't care about fake votes. A very illogical story without much intellectual investment.
So, the writer is unable to write in proper english. He does not understand weight or temperatures, but insists on using theim...
awesome work bro waiting for more chapters [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
dude i have a idea if a person dies and reincarnated as hagoromo(sage of six path) third son and was quater otsutsuki quarter saiyan with(freeza potential),and half kryptonian and use all power of these race fully
Una basura total, apenas y hay diálogos, lo que abunda en esta historia son las descripciones de los sucesos pero apenas y encontrarás algo coherente, el MC es un idiota y la verdad está historia es una pérdida de tiempo
Here again again [img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Awesome work I only read first few chapters I would say I love it there is some grammar problems but its very good
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HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Would be hella funny if you put a Kratos cameo YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Loved the premise of the story and was very exited to read as the Greek mythology lore is some of my favorite. I don't even mind that the basis of the novel is a massive harem, but what did bother me was the inter character dialog and how easy it was for him to pick up the women. There is little to no romance involved in the story and most inter harem disputes go like this: "I don't like ...." "but you are beatiful" "ok, I forgive you and you are always right" It is very one dimensional and gives the characters a plastic, synthetic feeling. Another blaring issue is the writing quality as the grammar and spelling leaves much to be desired. All in all, I would recommend giving it a try and if these issues don't bother you at all then all power to you.
Lost my brain cells reading this.….Lost my brain cells reading this.….Lost my brain cells reading this.….Lost my brain cells reading this.….
Awesome work man please continue its an amazing story a must read there is some grammar mistakes but aside that its a great story About DC and Mythologizes love it ..................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's a really good story but the grammar is very bad. Why don't you try using grammarly. ..........................................................................
Your moral compass needs some very strong re-adjustment, what is wrong with you?............................................................
Ok, I can deal with bad grammar, but this specific type annoys me so much. It seems like a toddler is writing this, which in turn makes the main character seem childish, and now I can’t take it seriously.
someone please explain me is mc very bad like did he kill innocent civilians and stuffs like that if it is just lustful it is still ok for me but if he is too much of a villain i will have to pass it now i want to read it but i also don't want to because of villain mc tag i hate villain mc( there are many types of villains i especially hate those who kill innocent people)
GREAT AWESOME LOVING IT [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] FANTASTIC I LOVE YOU AUTHOR SAMA GREAT BOOK READING ALL THE LATEST CHAPTERS WITH GREAT
I havmt read it yet and I never will I just wanted to give 5 stars because it's an amazing story idea and the description looks amazing but the harem ruins everything good luck author-sama
Take My 5 Stars You Glorious B*stard For Idk [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]