hhhhhhh he fears to be greened by myles
The reason why Peter dared to enter the black hole with Gwen was that Peter suddenly remembered the scene of Gwen traveling through time in the movie Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse in his previous life.
I am Peter Parker, but not The Spiderman
Anime & Comics · Haremlover807865
tnx for the chapter, but bro please be realistic there is no blowjob for hours try been more logical
tnx for the chapter I wished there is some romance in the future chapters
man please when the mc chose a skill you need to write all the skill and there description or the skill will have no roll in the story please don't fuk up the story
well it's fun but it's like playing the game not Transmigrated into a game so well its not for me
well first about story development it didn't make sense its totally random and when reading the fanfic it's feels very rached. after secondly it's feels that system in the story have nothing to do with this story the power system don't make sense checked, and the most of reward don't be use just stored without , the reward system don't make sense checked, and what the fack is the word of hp have just fire base spell let's say that mc just with fire spell , why the fuck he need lot of Stat all those f**ing line in his state if he just using fire spell , trash skill system checked . I think that enough to drop it in my opinion this fanfic have a good potential if it's rewritten in right way and tnx I will go to see your other story of yours if it's as this one or good one.
tnx for the chapter
tnx for the chapter
tnx for the chapter
tnx for the chapter
I'm a Pornstar thanks to my System [Smut/Hentai]
Anime & Comics · Jin_4671