Roy Mustang Template in Harry Potter

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CliffkunLolRekt

Chapter 18 officially killed the story have fun with your worm of a mc author

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WaveringMoon

the concept was a good idea, but this is very clearly a wish fulfillment fantasy that ignores almost everything in harry potter. also the book is half filled with constant walls of text of system stats. the book is also extremely fast paced to the point where it's missing a lot of details.

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F0cus

Well since the only chapter is a info dump and the concept is quite liking to my taste , i am looking forward to this and waiting for author to put some chapters

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Noble_K1ng

So far I like it, the MC isn’t naive and stupid and if it stays like this the story’s gon be a W

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Swan_Reader

I loved your work Nice character design. I think you should increase the word count of each chapter. update more, good read so far. More chapters needed

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sean_goins

very good so far hope for updates more and good character building so far

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grimmhorizon

the first half should be called roy mustang and the dungeon diving. the second half is roy mustang is a simp for a random summon who takes control of his system... it's mostly dungeon crawling and system info dumps then it's just him being a simp and random smut... I wouldn't be surprised if eventually she cucks him

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Jefry_C_Lan

never seen an author throw his own story quite like this

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jonkit

I see the vision, but the translation is pretty bad, not the worst on this platform, but still bad. Because of that it constantly switches perspective: "Roy chooses >skill< and because of that I do more damage" even though it's about the same person. so overall: nice premise but translation (?) ruins it, only read if you can stand bad translations

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Rak

it start good but now randomly going anywhere you guys give it a try................................................................................

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DaoistglM5nf

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Thomsonandrew5235

I really enjoy it but it needs to be updated more often to be up there with my favourites

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Rocky_Staggs

I didn't wanna try this one. Thought the mesh wouldn't make a good story. Wow amazing story great author pulling this out of the hat. Keep it up.

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Cyrus_Garcia_1911

Fast with a little of wish fulfillment ok solar and a good quick read

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DaoistRovWhC

A wish fulfillment fantasy. The Harry Potter world is used but mostly ignored. Half of the text seems to be status updates or walls of text. I couldn't even make it two dozen chapters. It progresses so fast there isn't actually any story.

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aiden_rivera

Good story author can’t count the Mf mc stats properly

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jcp1207

No está mal la historia, pero sería mejor que mejorará la escritura así como el volcado de información, de ese modo la mitad del capítulo no sea de información irrelevante... Gracias por el trabajo