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I had to look at the last chapter to see if it A good ending and I can’t believe he ends up with Nat I can’t wait to read the full story
i am mad about the forced romance. MC literally got a quest to make Natasha fall in love with him the quest is forced and would basically take away half his power if he fails
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Disappointing. The Author uses rolls to decide rewards so clearly no planning involved in the story. Apparently the MC in this story is very Lucky, so he keeps getting very OP abilities. The Author hates this so he keeps randomly punishing the MC in stupid ways for becoming OP. It's the same as most stories like this that are not planned out properly. The MC becomes OP too fast and they can't write OP characters.
I read a lot of reviews for this story that almost stopped me from reading it. I'm glad that I ignored them. This story is a lot better than what many of the reviews were saying.
Honestly i did not expect much but i was pleasantly suprised. Good work :D
Thank you for this enjoyable book. It was a very nice take on the Marvel verse with a little omniverse thrown in which I love. The character was a true GOAT and I loved that. I enjoyed your “go with the flow” style it was a wonderful breath of fresh air.
can say first marvel fanfiction I read to end and was satisfied. good job author. keep it up.
hmmm.... quite a good story.... but better one's are there.... you can read it for a fun and to pass time... but not a re-readable.. anyway good work... keep it up👍🏻👍🏻
Por fin una historia completa desde otra perspectiva de Marvel muy interesante ,..................................................,......................,....................................,.............................,..........................................,..................................,...............................,..................................,......................
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First......I dont like How it develops that suddenly we got Black Widow as a romantic interest. If the Author will do that, Atleast WARN US with a Romance tag in the Story. Secondly, I don't like the fact that after he fought with the avengers, he go and proceed to spoil everything.....its like just ruining the Suspense and story just to get a Shock reaction
I liked the book, no doubt, but as the author said himself, it could do a lot better. this is constructive criticism, by the way, The author tends to forget characters, especially when something happens and it is needed for a throwback (I still don't know how Peter managed the trauma of dying 700 times)while this might seem irrelevant, little details like this make the story rich and help give the characters substance.They don't just seem like NPCs that are there because we'll, they have to be.It also bring background awareness cause while the story is about the Mc, the world does not revolve around the mc. it just seems that way because we are the readers and the writer. The MC also seemed to be a little but bipolar, I mean, his values were stable, and we knew what he stood for but he would wake up one morning and be all God complex and the next day say he want to brainwash the whole planet. We have all agreed that he was an anti-hero, but I think he lacked some morals and respect for the lives he was trying to protect. his bipolar like attitude worried us readers. but then again, Mc was never a normal guy 😅. He stated that he fought cause he didn't want to die, but i feel there should be more to it.I loved the fact that the author took time to develop the relationship between Nat and MC, and the fact it wasn't a harem is a plus for me.all in all, the book was quite good, needs some improvements but good nonetheless. I might not be totally accurate in my analysis, but you can serve the things that aren't so true and work to continue to improve.Great work, author 😊
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It's good & it's interesting to have seen how your writing has improved over time. keep up the good workhope you become a full time writer so your release faster &more chapters for your fics.
its great. i forgot this, also so when i tried to skim some chapters when i got bored. though i finished it its nice and okay for my taste
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It's ok you really contradicted your self a lot like it was 4 weeks then to asgard but it was like 6 weeks minimum there was a lot of times during that time where you said 1 week ago or 1 week has gone past since (enter what happened last chapter) but still he finished the mission and had 3 weeks left before asgard that means he finished it in 1 week
nice to read. it is an average story. for completing the story i gave him 1 more star ★.
Solid story overall. There were a few holes here and there but one of the better reads overall. Also bug points on seeing it through to the end.
The system forced MC to get together with Fl under the threat of heavy stat debuffs and punishment. After receiving a lot of backlash, the author told us to be patient and wait for a reason, and promised that it would be good and worth it. It turns out that the whole thing was done by a bored god who controls the system and tricked MC. Although the author may have thought this was clever, I disagree. The only good advice the author had was to 'drop it if you don't like it', and I agree with this. It's the author's novel and they can do whatever they want with it, but since it wasted my time, I also feel that I can give it the rating I feel it deserves. Goodbye. ✌️
This was a pretty good book, had some hiccups here and there but definitely worth the read. I really enjoyed it.
It was entertaining while it lasted... different. But unfortunately, things got out of hand for the author... About chapter 50. I'm on 80 so I can say for sure. For some reason it doesn't heal the person who could do most of the work of taking care of the land or things like that. I guess he doesn't care anymore, but I think it's kind of stupid to let him not be able to walk the guy who will literally build him some nice nanobot armor in the future. I mean, if he can't walk, then his story will be... In a wheelchair XD. Something about a wheelchair frame. But hey, it's just a decision. Actually, as I said, the idea was novel, we turned off our brains to ignore things with a certain level of absurdity to read. Unfortunately, I can't say the same when it gets repetitive and boring. You probably read it from time to time. But this story is boring.
The story began great, The first 2 "arcs" did fine. When he was imprison and the magic learning arc were by far my favorites. But as soon as we began the avengers arc all went down hill fast. The change in quality and content was so abrupt and grant that it felt like a completely different fic. The character interaction were kinda awful, everyone acted completely out of character (even the MC), the plot took a hard decline with cheap story progression (The mission thing with Widow is something I expect from a comedy/crack fic) the explanation behind this event was somehow worse. The power levels and types were good thought, I enjoy your creativity with Nen and it's conjugation, I also applaud you for giving your character logical weaknesses. Loved the balance, nevertheless my enjoyment of the story kinda died after the magic training, you kept saying that you are going to rewrite the story so you didn't have to fix it right away and I belive this tax your story quite a bit. In my opinion you should have worked a bit more on the overall direction and structure of the story even if it meant a slower pace. Also if you have any sort of negative feeling towards a faction (shield) you have to work around it, instead of just making a "bashing" paragraph every chapter. You made shield too evil and stupidly clumpsy to be believable. You want to destroy it or kill everyone in it, that's fine, but don't try to justify it by making every decision they took cartoonishly evil. (Fury and Colson are supposed to be charismatic and smart, your take on them was everything but)
An amazing story. I usually only leave reviews if the story is kinda bad, but I'll make an exception. The grammar can be slightly off sometimes, and some people might get upset that the MC has a poor opinion of popular characters. Or that the system pushes the MC to do stuff. (I didn't mind TOO much.) But the story IS really good. Ones like these are hard to find.
I had to look at the last chapter to see if it A good ending and I can’t believe he ends up with Nat I can’t wait to read the full story
i am mad about the forced romance. MC literally got a quest to make Natasha fall in love with him the quest is forced and would basically take away half his power if he fails
ネタバレを明かす Disappointing. The Author uses rolls to decide rewards so clearly no planning involved in the story. Apparently the MC in this story is very Lucky, so he keeps getting very OP abilities. The Author hates this so he keeps randomly punishing the MC in stupid ways for becoming OP. It's the same as most stories like this that are not planned out properly. The MC becomes OP too fast and they can't write OP characters.
I read a lot of reviews for this story that almost stopped me from reading it. I'm glad that I ignored them. This story is a lot better than what many of the reviews were saying.
Honestly i did not expect much but i was pleasantly suprised. Good work :D
Thank you for this enjoyable book. It was a very nice take on the Marvel verse with a little omniverse thrown in which I love. The character was a true GOAT and I loved that. I enjoyed your “go with the flow” style it was a wonderful breath of fresh air.
can say first marvel fanfiction I read to end and was satisfied. good job author. keep it up.
hmmm.... quite a good story.... but better one's are there.... you can read it for a fun and to pass time... but not a re-readable.. anyway good work... keep it up👍🏻👍🏻
Por fin una historia completa desde otra perspectiva de Marvel muy interesante ,..................................................,......................,....................................,.............................,..........................................,..................................,...............................,..................................,......................
ネタバレを明かす First......I dont like How it develops that suddenly we got Black Widow as a romantic interest. If the Author will do that, Atleast WARN US with a Romance tag in the Story. Secondly, I don't like the fact that after he fought with the avengers, he go and proceed to spoil everything.....its like just ruining the Suspense and story just to get a Shock reaction
I liked the book, no doubt, but as the author said himself, it could do a lot better. this is constructive criticism, by the way, The author tends to forget characters, especially when something happens and it is needed for a throwback (I still don't know how Peter managed the trauma of dying 700 times)while this might seem irrelevant, little details like this make the story rich and help give the characters substance.They don't just seem like NPCs that are there because we'll, they have to be.It also bring background awareness cause while the story is about the Mc, the world does not revolve around the mc. it just seems that way because we are the readers and the writer. The MC also seemed to be a little but bipolar, I mean, his values were stable, and we knew what he stood for but he would wake up one morning and be all God complex and the next day say he want to brainwash the whole planet. We have all agreed that he was an anti-hero, but I think he lacked some morals and respect for the lives he was trying to protect. his bipolar like attitude worried us readers. but then again, Mc was never a normal guy 😅. He stated that he fought cause he didn't want to die, but i feel there should be more to it.I loved the fact that the author took time to develop the relationship between Nat and MC, and the fact it wasn't a harem is a plus for me.all in all, the book was quite good, needs some improvements but good nonetheless. I might not be totally accurate in my analysis, but you can serve the things that aren't so true and work to continue to improve.Great work, author 😊
ネタバレを明かす It's good & it's interesting to have seen how your writing has improved over time. keep up the good workhope you become a full time writer so your release faster &more chapters for your fics.
its great. i forgot this, also so when i tried to skim some chapters when i got bored. though i finished it its nice and okay for my taste
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It's ok you really contradicted your self a lot like it was 4 weeks then to asgard but it was like 6 weeks minimum there was a lot of times during that time where you said 1 week ago or 1 week has gone past since (enter what happened last chapter) but still he finished the mission and had 3 weeks left before asgard that means he finished it in 1 week
nice to read. it is an average story. for completing the story i gave him 1 more star ★.
Solid story overall. There were a few holes here and there but one of the better reads overall. Also bug points on seeing it through to the end.
The system forced MC to get together with Fl under the threat of heavy stat debuffs and punishment. After receiving a lot of backlash, the author told us to be patient and wait for a reason, and promised that it would be good and worth it. It turns out that the whole thing was done by a bored god who controls the system and tricked MC. Although the author may have thought this was clever, I disagree. The only good advice the author had was to 'drop it if you don't like it', and I agree with this. It's the author's novel and they can do whatever they want with it, but since it wasted my time, I also feel that I can give it the rating I feel it deserves. Goodbye. ✌️
This was a pretty good book, had some hiccups here and there but definitely worth the read. I really enjoyed it.
It was entertaining while it lasted... different. But unfortunately, things got out of hand for the author... About chapter 50. I'm on 80 so I can say for sure. For some reason it doesn't heal the person who could do most of the work of taking care of the land or things like that. I guess he doesn't care anymore, but I think it's kind of stupid to let him not be able to walk the guy who will literally build him some nice nanobot armor in the future. I mean, if he can't walk, then his story will be... In a wheelchair XD. Something about a wheelchair frame. But hey, it's just a decision. Actually, as I said, the idea was novel, we turned off our brains to ignore things with a certain level of absurdity to read. Unfortunately, I can't say the same when it gets repetitive and boring. You probably read it from time to time. But this story is boring.
The story began great, The first 2 "arcs" did fine. When he was imprison and the magic learning arc were by far my favorites. But as soon as we began the avengers arc all went down hill fast. The change in quality and content was so abrupt and grant that it felt like a completely different fic. The character interaction were kinda awful, everyone acted completely out of character (even the MC), the plot took a hard decline with cheap story progression (The mission thing with Widow is something I expect from a comedy/crack fic) the explanation behind this event was somehow worse. The power levels and types were good thought, I enjoy your creativity with Nen and it's conjugation, I also applaud you for giving your character logical weaknesses. Loved the balance, nevertheless my enjoyment of the story kinda died after the magic training, you kept saying that you are going to rewrite the story so you didn't have to fix it right away and I belive this tax your story quite a bit. In my opinion you should have worked a bit more on the overall direction and structure of the story even if it meant a slower pace. Also if you have any sort of negative feeling towards a faction (shield) you have to work around it, instead of just making a "bashing" paragraph every chapter. You made shield too evil and stupidly clumpsy to be believable. You want to destroy it or kill everyone in it, that's fine, but don't try to justify it by making every decision they took cartoonishly evil. (Fury and Colson are supposed to be charismatic and smart, your take on them was everything but)
An amazing story. I usually only leave reviews if the story is kinda bad, but I'll make an exception. The grammar can be slightly off sometimes, and some people might get upset that the MC has a poor opinion of popular characters. Or that the system pushes the MC to do stuff. (I didn't mind TOO much.) But the story IS really good. Ones like these are hard to find.