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Lets start with this, First THIS STORY is NOT a dragon ball focus it has so many other elements as well as multiverse travel. Second the romance in this isn't nonsense where he gets everyone just from a single chapter, each character has valid reasons to join, yes this story has harem not a big one though and considering the story it makes sense for the harem to exist. Writing Quality 4.6/5.0 (you would barely notice mistakes with how much u'll get into the story) Stablity of Updates 4.5/5.0 (from what I'm seeing each day a chapter unless something happens) Story Development 5.0/5.0 (the story isn't staying in one place its always moving forward) Character Design 4.4/5.0 (from what we got from the of Main focused characters they have the whole package) World Background 5.0/5.0 (this right here is a rich world full of adventures and a lot of content its a great world with infinite possibilities the author did a great job on this one its a full world with everything needed from small realms to bigger realms from side characters to big character and all the way to primordial and maybe even more we haven't got the whole knowledge and its already so huge) Conclusion: This story is definitely worth reading, This one right here is one of the best fan-fics that are related to kingdom building and the main place where the story takes place is an original world. This right here is what we wanted with fan-fics, its a combination of an original story and fan-fic combined which is great.
Writing a new one to make my review count. For future readers: All I could say is this is the best if not, then at least one of the best anime hopping multi-verse genre fic out there. A unique at that by having its own bigger, grander, and stronger original Universe of its own where the MC's Empire would reign in the future. No BS sytem and cliche face slapping, arrogant young masters, etc. Only thing that could put other's off others I guess would be on how he react and acts with girls. Tho that one has a reason even if its a little meh. In my opinion, this actually makes the story better. Creates a more humane MC and funny scenes (for me at least) while still making the MC the beast and majestic Emperor that he is. Also based on what he plans to do on his beloved cousin. Then he's not really what those simpletons who keep saying Alpha this Beta that would say would say as wimp. Just a bit softy you could say even if it's a little bit far fetched for his loved ones. I absolutely recommend this for those wanting their beloved animes in all in one seamless original story with amazing character development, relatively OP MC, and great Kingdom Building at that. Try it out at least. P.S. A big thank you to Author for your work. Your work is one of the few things keeping me sane and happy during the current trying times of Pandemic. God bless your soul, Sir. Keep on working and don't drop this piece of Diamond.
The idea behind this novel was very good, but between the fact that it seems to have fallen and that it was never regularly published, it never became popular. If the author decides to return to the novel, I recommend a rewrite, especially to improve the writing.
One of the best kingdom building stories out there. seriously can't get enough of this. ----------------------------------------------------------------
is this dropped??? please, I beg the author to continue it. This is the only fanfic where I want to read the original part more than the universe hopping,,,, it's just great. It's one of the best webnovel has to offer
I have read this book up until the latest chapters and all I wanted to say is, PHENOMENAL.Never in my life, and I mean NEVER, have I been elated and waited for chapters of mere fanfics.Even after 6 months of not reading simply because there are no more chapters to read, I still remember the story as if I've finished it yesterday.This is how good this story is.I wont say how the story is shaped because first, I don't want you new readers to be expectent of this story, second, there are already reviews on this fic that says the greatness of this fic 2 YEARS ago......so yeah extremely awe inspiring story.Truly.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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This is one of the best webnovel has to offer, it has excellent kingdom building and world traveling done right. More importantly, its OG story is more compelling and interesting than other animes.
The only problem I have with this story is that the updates take too much time. Otherwise, I'm head over heels for it. (Making up word count.)
dude chapter was really great as expected of my favorite multiverse type novel. well i really hope u could increase the frequency of chapters. hoping Zeref could find happiness in vega dynasty maybe reunite with mavis and natsu zaraki, unohana or maye aizen joining empire will be cool tooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful novel. Don't listen to the haters who say this novel should be dropped.
just a question for the author.. have you dropped this book? this is/was one of my favourite books but its been ages since we had a chapter.
cant describe my feeling sooooo....jagsuqgshss hi akgzh in hjxjzwhz ya kwgefjvszvwjdhq in gzbcjx yg sgxh yg sjuuxhxujsjsvs yg gahs thank you👍
really great story and development for the characters, be it the MC and his entourage or the antagonists. Def recommended 👌
this book is such a magnificent piece of art. no words could describe it. even though it's a harem.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Amazing story. Writing quality- I didn't see any mistakes but slow update and even still slow on patron only 3 chaps ahead of this website :(
its ok, the fact that he could've just moved the whole dead empire to another different world and then later come back once he is complete to destroy all opposing enemies is dumb. he could've just use the Dragonballs to wish for a space that his people can live in without outside interference and then go on a journey through the multiverse is stupid too. but what can i say? this is a kingdom building story. the author wants drama then drama he do. couldve also just tell bulma to let him to borrow timer machine and then go back to when the empire first founder, the strongest was still alive so he can learn what his lineage is and the knowledge. but author wants drama so drama it is.
Huge grammar problem, dialogue seems forced, and outright cringe at many times. The story is kinda meh and the bad grammer doesn't help it at all. Would've recommended this to someone who's just started reading fan-fics, but for veterans no.
This is officially the best fanfiction novel I've ever read. I mean the way the author integrates various anime worlds while creating a flawless story is just mind boggling. I honestly can't wait to see where the story goes from here
Author same do you have a plan for Grid, Kraugel, Pagma from Overgeared. I mean You can make Grid the Blacksmith of the Empire since Empire need weapons. As for Kraugel he's too talented and he can be a second Sword Saint. PLEASE Reply to this comment
When will the They go to One piece world to take over ? When will the They go to One piece world to take over ? When will the They go to One piece world to take over ?
I really like it, I'm now hook to this and i hope you can put Warhammer into this cuz they're weapon is just what needed into this war and needed for army? you can find them in Warhammer because the number of guardsman is litteraly trillions
Bro Make Mc Go to Overgeared world to get OP ITEMS (in a war they need Good items like swords or shield) Bro Make Mc Go to Overgeared world to get OP ITEMS (in a war they need Good items like swords or shield)
Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ??! Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ?? Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ?? Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ?? Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ?? Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ??
I hate drama and strategy with kingdom building stories, i despise the fact that i enjoyed this novel so much more because of that. It is just that good, i like my novels slice of life with mc cruising through the world like still water. But this masterpiece that made me love hate and expect so much while dreading what could happen next is by all the meaning of the word is Fabulous.
Lets start with this, First THIS STORY is NOT a dragon ball focus it has so many other elements as well as multiverse travel. Second the romance in this isn't nonsense where he gets everyone just from a single chapter, each character has valid reasons to join, yes this story has harem not a big one though and considering the story it makes sense for the harem to exist. Writing Quality 4.6/5.0 (you would barely notice mistakes with how much u'll get into the story) Stablity of Updates 4.5/5.0 (from what I'm seeing each day a chapter unless something happens) Story Development 5.0/5.0 (the story isn't staying in one place its always moving forward) Character Design 4.4/5.0 (from what we got from the of Main focused characters they have the whole package) World Background 5.0/5.0 (this right here is a rich world full of adventures and a lot of content its a great world with infinite possibilities the author did a great job on this one its a full world with everything needed from small realms to bigger realms from side characters to big character and all the way to primordial and maybe even more we haven't got the whole knowledge and its already so huge) Conclusion: This story is definitely worth reading, This one right here is one of the best fan-fics that are related to kingdom building and the main place where the story takes place is an original world. This right here is what we wanted with fan-fics, its a combination of an original story and fan-fic combined which is great.
Writing a new one to make my review count. For future readers: All I could say is this is the best if not, then at least one of the best anime hopping multi-verse genre fic out there. A unique at that by having its own bigger, grander, and stronger original Universe of its own where the MC's Empire would reign in the future. No BS sytem and cliche face slapping, arrogant young masters, etc. Only thing that could put other's off others I guess would be on how he react and acts with girls. Tho that one has a reason even if its a little meh. In my opinion, this actually makes the story better. Creates a more humane MC and funny scenes (for me at least) while still making the MC the beast and majestic Emperor that he is. Also based on what he plans to do on his beloved cousin. Then he's not really what those simpletons who keep saying Alpha this Beta that would say would say as wimp. Just a bit softy you could say even if it's a little bit far fetched for his loved ones. I absolutely recommend this for those wanting their beloved animes in all in one seamless original story with amazing character development, relatively OP MC, and great Kingdom Building at that. Try it out at least. P.S. A big thank you to Author for your work. Your work is one of the few things keeping me sane and happy during the current trying times of Pandemic. God bless your soul, Sir. Keep on working and don't drop this piece of Diamond.
The idea behind this novel was very good, but between the fact that it seems to have fallen and that it was never regularly published, it never became popular. If the author decides to return to the novel, I recommend a rewrite, especially to improve the writing.
One of the best kingdom building stories out there. seriously can't get enough of this. ----------------------------------------------------------------
is this dropped??? please, I beg the author to continue it. This is the only fanfic where I want to read the original part more than the universe hopping,,,, it's just great. It's one of the best webnovel has to offer
I have read this book up until the latest chapters and all I wanted to say is, PHENOMENAL.Never in my life, and I mean NEVER, have I been elated and waited for chapters of mere fanfics.Even after 6 months of not reading simply because there are no more chapters to read, I still remember the story as if I've finished it yesterday.This is how good this story is.I wont say how the story is shaped because first, I don't want you new readers to be expectent of this story, second, there are already reviews on this fic that says the greatness of this fic 2 YEARS ago......so yeah extremely awe inspiring story.Truly.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
just coooooooooooolllllllllllll suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugooooooooooooooooiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kaaaaaaaakkoooooooooooooooooiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
This is one of the best webnovel has to offer, it has excellent kingdom building and world traveling done right. More importantly, its OG story is more compelling and interesting than other animes.
The only problem I have with this story is that the updates take too much time. Otherwise, I'm head over heels for it. (Making up word count.)
dude chapter was really great as expected of my favorite multiverse type novel. well i really hope u could increase the frequency of chapters. hoping Zeref could find happiness in vega dynasty maybe reunite with mavis and natsu zaraki, unohana or maye aizen joining empire will be cool tooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful novel. Don't listen to the haters who say this novel should be dropped.
just a question for the author.. have you dropped this book? this is/was one of my favourite books but its been ages since we had a chapter.
cant describe my feeling sooooo....jagsuqgshss hi akgzh in hjxjzwhz ya kwgefjvszvwjdhq in gzbcjx yg sgxh yg sjuuxhxujsjsvs yg gahs thank you👍
really great story and development for the characters, be it the MC and his entourage or the antagonists. Def recommended 👌
this book is such a magnificent piece of art. no words could describe it. even though it's a harem.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Amazing story. Writing quality- I didn't see any mistakes but slow update and even still slow on patron only 3 chaps ahead of this website :(
its ok, the fact that he could've just moved the whole dead empire to another different world and then later come back once he is complete to destroy all opposing enemies is dumb. he could've just use the Dragonballs to wish for a space that his people can live in without outside interference and then go on a journey through the multiverse is stupid too. but what can i say? this is a kingdom building story. the author wants drama then drama he do. couldve also just tell bulma to let him to borrow timer machine and then go back to when the empire first founder, the strongest was still alive so he can learn what his lineage is and the knowledge. but author wants drama so drama it is.
Huge grammar problem, dialogue seems forced, and outright cringe at many times. The story is kinda meh and the bad grammer doesn't help it at all. Would've recommended this to someone who's just started reading fan-fics, but for veterans no.
This is officially the best fanfiction novel I've ever read. I mean the way the author integrates various anime worlds while creating a flawless story is just mind boggling. I honestly can't wait to see where the story goes from here
Author same do you have a plan for Grid, Kraugel, Pagma from Overgeared. I mean You can make Grid the Blacksmith of the Empire since Empire need weapons. As for Kraugel he's too talented and he can be a second Sword Saint. PLEASE Reply to this comment
When will the They go to One piece world to take over ? When will the They go to One piece world to take over ? When will the They go to One piece world to take over ?
I really like it, I'm now hook to this and i hope you can put Warhammer into this cuz they're weapon is just what needed into this war and needed for army? you can find them in Warhammer because the number of guardsman is litteraly trillions
Bro Make Mc Go to Overgeared world to get OP ITEMS (in a war they need Good items like swords or shield) Bro Make Mc Go to Overgeared world to get OP ITEMS (in a war they need Good items like swords or shield)
Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ??! Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ?? Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ?? Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ?? Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ?? Bro Why don't you upload Daily or each 2 day ??
I hate drama and strategy with kingdom building stories, i despise the fact that i enjoyed this novel so much more because of that. It is just that good, i like my novels slice of life with mc cruising through the world like still water. But this masterpiece that made me love hate and expect so much while dreading what could happen next is by all the meaning of the word is Fabulous.