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From the depth of the world and the interconnectedness and the sequence of events to the character of Mc, everything in this novel is so perfect, that sometimes I can't believe that this story is just fan fiction, the only drawback is that the updates are very unstable
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theres any chance of wakfu be part of the history [img=recomendar] wakfu world is very fun, it would be nice to see the 12 gods be defeted by the impire
somebody says the story is good . but for me it's not . well this is still worth reading tho.somebody says the story is good . but for me it's not . well this is still worth reading tho.
im pausing my read on this for now, since the time for mc to start war in his original world seems so far. Im at chap 99. Can someone tell me what chap the proper war begins? the real continental conquest.
Its have a good start but then the dxd arc happened.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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the first chapter I read but very unpleasant to read. and do not want to read anymore
The Saiyan empire needs to expand further Marvel and D.C universe is ripe for the taking. Marek also need a new form of power, that can be easily found in the Marvel and D.C. multiverse. The most powerful would be the Chaos Force and the most powerful is Primal Chaos, this type of force is the oldest,strongest and most dangerous element of both universes, this force is older than the universe itself and most feared by both the Presence and the One Above All. #JUSTSAIYAN😁😁😁
We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give
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i just remembered ophis? has he tamed her yet? hahaha with food then making a dimension for her or something? cutting a part of dimensional gap and making it into a familiar space the offer her silence if she becomes her familiar?
Novel yang menarik, bagus, dan good, tapi sayang hiatus, untuk harem bagiku, jangan besar besar setidaknya jangan sampai ratusan bahkan ribuan.....
Well to start off it was going well the characters were introduced well and it looked like we could see their future path then the dxd arc happened and now i dont even know what to even say... i was gonna drop it a few chapters into the dxd arc but held out and skipped chapters bc author pointed one out where decisions were explained and i still cant help think the whole thing was dumb and could have been accomplished far easier had we chosen different characters... And dont even get me started on how mc seems to idolise issie and his pervert squad the whole thing left a bad taste in the mouth. The mc went from an emperor to a child in a matter of a few chapters that even after reading the chapters i skipped the first time i still dont understand
Overall, it's decent. I felt a bit jarred as the MC's character doesn't come across as the domineering of an emperor like what I think was intended. he instead felt bipolar, having sudden fits of rage and threatening people before deciding to go to a strip club. The latter I can understand, especially given the circumstances, but it is the contrast between the two and how quickly he switches between them. As for why I say he isn't domineering, take him referring to Azazel as Azalzel-kun. Kun, being the Japanese honorific, is used for a close friend or someone of a lower status, it carries a sense of intimacy. The way it has been used though does not come across in a domineering sense but instead as being demeaning, unprovoked as well. This is simply not the attitude of a competent emperor, especially one coming to request assistance. as for spelling, the constant and inconsistent shift in how speech is defined, using either of - or ' ' or " " is not particularly appealing. As I say, the novel itself is pretty good, but there a points like this which subtract points in my book
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The story is good, the plot is good enough for a fanfiction, the characters are actually well written and you can see some emotion in their dialogue. Overall good.
bombastic. .. fantastic..... statistics... awesomely.hhahahahahhah............. ....................mmmm.... more more more More MOre MORE.!!!!!!
This book is great in a nutshell,if your looking for a fanfic with kingdombuilding and conquering this fanfic is great,nice and small harem mc is not just some wierd guy f every girl and great worlds to travel.Also harem choice are nice 😏
Wow!! I mean, I don't know what to say. The story is great, the charecters are all so well written and honestly everytime I read a chapter I realize more and more how well thought out and deep this story goes. Every arc is amazing to watch. The overbearing attitude Marek displays against his foes and his doting attitude towards his close friends, family and lovers make it hard for me to hate him even when some of his actions leave a bad taste in my mouth. I've read all the current chapters and eagerly await more!! Although sometimes it does get confusing to read but it just needs someone to actively think instead of read information expecting to be spoon fed as if they are brain dead. Honestly I have so many things I love about this story. My only complaint is the lack of updates😔.
From the depth of the world and the interconnectedness and the sequence of events to the character of Mc, everything in this novel is so perfect, that sometimes I can't believe that this story is just fan fiction, the only drawback is that the updates are very unstable
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theres any chance of wakfu be part of the history [img=recomendar] wakfu world is very fun, it would be nice to see the 12 gods be defeted by the impire
somebody says the story is good . but for me it's not . well this is still worth reading tho.somebody says the story is good . but for me it's not . well this is still worth reading tho.
im pausing my read on this for now, since the time for mc to start war in his original world seems so far. Im at chap 99. Can someone tell me what chap the proper war begins? the real continental conquest.
Its have a good start but then the dxd arc happened.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The novel is great but the updates are very unstable //()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()
the first chapter I read but very unpleasant to read. and do not want to read anymore
The Saiyan empire needs to expand further Marvel and D.C universe is ripe for the taking. Marek also need a new form of power, that can be easily found in the Marvel and D.C. multiverse. The most powerful would be the Chaos Force and the most powerful is Primal Chaos, this type of force is the oldest,strongest and most dangerous element of both universes, this force is older than the universe itself and most feared by both the Presence and the One Above All. #JUSTSAIYAN😁😁😁
We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give
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i just remembered ophis? has he tamed her yet? hahaha with food then making a dimension for her or something? cutting a part of dimensional gap and making it into a familiar space the offer her silence if she becomes her familiar?
Novel yang menarik, bagus, dan good, tapi sayang hiatus, untuk harem bagiku, jangan besar besar setidaknya jangan sampai ratusan bahkan ribuan.....
Well to start off it was going well the characters were introduced well and it looked like we could see their future path then the dxd arc happened and now i dont even know what to even say... i was gonna drop it a few chapters into the dxd arc but held out and skipped chapters bc author pointed one out where decisions were explained and i still cant help think the whole thing was dumb and could have been accomplished far easier had we chosen different characters... And dont even get me started on how mc seems to idolise issie and his pervert squad the whole thing left a bad taste in the mouth. The mc went from an emperor to a child in a matter of a few chapters that even after reading the chapters i skipped the first time i still dont understand
Overall, it's decent. I felt a bit jarred as the MC's character doesn't come across as the domineering of an emperor like what I think was intended. he instead felt bipolar, having sudden fits of rage and threatening people before deciding to go to a strip club. The latter I can understand, especially given the circumstances, but it is the contrast between the two and how quickly he switches between them. As for why I say he isn't domineering, take him referring to Azazel as Azalzel-kun. Kun, being the Japanese honorific, is used for a close friend or someone of a lower status, it carries a sense of intimacy. The way it has been used though does not come across in a domineering sense but instead as being demeaning, unprovoked as well. This is simply not the attitude of a competent emperor, especially one coming to request assistance. as for spelling, the constant and inconsistent shift in how speech is defined, using either of - or ' ' or " " is not particularly appealing. As I say, the novel itself is pretty good, but there a points like this which subtract points in my book
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The story is good, the plot is good enough for a fanfiction, the characters are actually well written and you can see some emotion in their dialogue. Overall good.
bombastic. .. fantastic..... statistics... awesomely.hhahahahahhah............. ....................mmmm.... more more more More MOre MORE.!!!!!!
This book is great in a nutshell,if your looking for a fanfic with kingdombuilding and conquering this fanfic is great,nice and small harem mc is not just some wierd guy f every girl and great worlds to travel.Also harem choice are nice 😏
Wow!! I mean, I don't know what to say. The story is great, the charecters are all so well written and honestly everytime I read a chapter I realize more and more how well thought out and deep this story goes. Every arc is amazing to watch. The overbearing attitude Marek displays against his foes and his doting attitude towards his close friends, family and lovers make it hard for me to hate him even when some of his actions leave a bad taste in my mouth. I've read all the current chapters and eagerly await more!! Although sometimes it does get confusing to read but it just needs someone to actively think instead of read information expecting to be spoon fed as if they are brain dead. Honestly I have so many things I love about this story. My only complaint is the lack of updates😔.