In Harry Potter AU with a system (Myriad Realms Shop owner)

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Hog980

The MC is basically a side character for the Harry Potter book. He is supposed to be able to grow stronger the more he messes with canon and yet it barely changes. I get that he has the body of an 11 year old he is also in the Harry Potter universe in which magic exists. I’m tired of reading a summary of Harry Potter’s adventures from some random shop keepers point of view.

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Jmtxam

I don't like the fact that the mc, who keeps saying that it has an adult mind, is so stupid and lazy. I'm not saying that the mc has to be op or a genius, just that anyone with an adult mind that knows that he will be targeted for his blood status and the fact that he is harry's friend, still doesn't try to learn has much as he can from a library full of magic books (I get that there are limits in power, but the mc didn't try to learn anything from outside of class because he was lazy and didn't know how to learn from books without a teacher of some sort holding his and to learn a spell, and didn't want to put in the extra effort). This isn't even counting the fact that you apparently need multiple magic books to learn just one spell since the books are so bad that a single book doesn't contain all the necessary information to learn a simple spell...

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Selisdega

one of the best Nerf system with kids reasoning and retard mc where the reward and mission recieve another nerf,. system base of chinese never ever good in calculation and bad with number, you got 10 million point only reward only to realize to learn trash skill you need to spend gazzillion point for the profound knowledge of the trash dao of solid trash foundation....

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Brezer

the mc is a simp. there is nothing original here except the store and you don't see enough to make the story interesting . the mc goes into the idiot house and its cannon from then on as the mc as a semi sidekick. again nothing original . we all know how cannon goes. if you want to be original and actually write something don't put mc in the in the hero's house and make him a sidekick.

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ray_rose

giving 5 stars for mass release so i can binge read...ill give a full review after ive read enoguh chapters!! ...............................

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CreatedKing

I read this book on lnmtl website. It is a decent novel with some interesting twists. The MC starts out as a pretty one dimensional character but grows over time. My biggest issue is kind of a spoiler so if you don't want to know then leave now. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Ok since you want to know the MC does not use abilities learned from different worlds efficiently. He learns Alchemy from the Rosen Maiden world, learns magic from WoW, gets plants from PvsZ, gets crafts and other things from LotR, technology from Fallout 4 and other stuff. Most of these abilities start out pretty interesting but just fizzle out over time. I would also like to see the MC travel to more worlds.

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namyteo12

I have not read it yet but for what you want to do the apollo, I hope you keep doing this with other fanfics to see some interesting proposals that get dirty from racism .

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CH405Kaiser

The format of the chapters needs to be changed. Characters are all two dimensional that there isnt any depth other than what we know of the plot. MC is definitely stupid if he doesnt recognize Hermoine granger even after growing up and visiting her parents. This is not worth the read.

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PRiMoRiDiaL

The concept is good but too much potter and little about the system insted of store its like full blown potter fanfic

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Thehighesthol1

owhhh let me see, apparently this novel was taken from a china site so I don't wonder why there are so many mentions of china here and there. well, my advice is "it's better to edit before posting"

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_asdfghjkl2021

They should rename this as Harry Potter and the Extra Character. Don't even bother to read it and waste your time. If you want to read canon, then read the original books.

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OloEyktan

mc is kind of stupid and if somebody does a thing right he is a genius.. he isnt even trying to change the plot or earn points. and the chinese young master thing is really cringy that you want to kill something

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Darwin111111

It had good potential, but everything is so random, it concentrates a lot on Harry Potter and not the store, -which to make matters worse is basically the original series, almost nothing new- what is what we really want to see, or so less, see how he uses it in the world of Harry Potter. I got to chapter 35, and Chinese things, as always, killed the series. Chinese novels or fanfic without cultivation are not Chinese, so for me most of them are bad if they are not comedy. Well one star for this fanfic and I'm off. (It has great potential. I hope someone goes along with the idea and makes a novel or fanfic around it. I mean, the original world doesn't necessarily have to be Harry Potter).

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John0_0Smith

I feel so much potential wasted by the MC. I understand his world travel might be dangerous but the sometimes quantity is more important than quality. he can easily go to 1 star worlds see if he might get lucky. spam the time limit on the world's to get better at magic. ect. to much wasted potential .

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tony_stark_3000

I really like you book it's really nice and a kind of new perspective my only doubt is there a haram and world travel please have both of them please because it's gonna be really fun I am travelling from one world to another and having a lot of female leads from those world's please this is a request

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1Dreamer_Owl

Translated - This novel is only a translation or you will use the novel to make your own story?? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

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JustTiredOfPicking

I've only read the 1st volume so maybe it gets better. 80% of this is the source material(HP books) XD.IDK maybe it is intended to be a slice of life. the dialogs, plot, locations, etc..even with all that the writing is off, MC lacks ambition. He's a side character and is too chummy (kinda like that.. I think the author is and it sometimes influences the mc XD) with the main characters like a stan or something. He doesn't use the system to its full potential. 2.8/5

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KnightShade420

I will be honest that the only reason I am not giving this a 5 star review is that the mc is forgetting to lean towards his strengths and instead doing many unnecessary things. The Mc’s power makes it so he can connect to many worlds and trade things to his benefit. Instead of spending so much time and risk in going to the different war ridden worlds he should just be a shop keeper and easily get power. I understand gaining experience but a lot of it is not needed. Especially in hp world what’s the point of starting a revolution. This is his base camp. He should not be destroying the status quo. As for when Voldemort comes he can easily find a low danger world for them to spend a couple years his parents might enjoy some adventure in different worlds. If I was him I would gain power and when Voldemort comes kill all the pure bloods that side with Voldemort and steal all their ancestral books and money.