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This story does a good job with defining the characters and getting us inside their heads so that we know who they are and what they want. The writing could use some work, just basic stuff like tense and grammar, but that comes with time. In all, an interesting story.
OMG...!! I love this story. it's characterization and plot is detailed and well explained. I love the author's style of writing, it's incredible. Words only can't explain how much am so obsessed with this story. [img=update][img=recommend]
decent book, I enjoy the feel of the world all through the prologue felt like it dragged on but nonetheless still interesting. it's very mature which is cool
This is a pretty good story. The prologue was nicely done, letting us know about the mc and a bit of his life. His nightmares are interesting... After reading some of the chapters, I can see the shadows of some movies, but I still like it. The action scenes are well written and the characters believable. MC is smart, phew. Just a few writing errors here and there and you're good to go, author. Good luck.
I don't usually read this type of novel normally, but yours managed to arrest me from beginning to end, and now I can only curse you for not having more chapters available. Please don't stop!
Though it is slow paced at the beginning the story picks up gradually. The background story of the MC given at the beggining clears a lot of things that will appear in the later chapters. A very interesting story with decent plot. With small editing here and there will make it an excellent book.
The character development and storyline are absolutely brilliant. The story captured you and sucks you into another world. The writing style is fluid and is easy to follow along.
A few grammar flaws here and there, mostly concerning word-tense, but nothing too serious. Although I do like some of the unique descriptions to describe the characters' thoughts and actions, such as the "nodded like a rooster pecking rice" bit. The story and the way it's set out is also quite intriguing.
I love an apocalypse setting and this starts very realistically, already added to the library, let's see how Brian will come out of this. PS: the writing is awesome and had some fun scenes at the start.
The plot is promising but the execution of the story needs to worked upon, maybe it's just me but the chapters tend to have some irrelevant details. Proofreading is required otherwise it's all good.
Original and catchy cover page! The synopsis is short, but gives an idea of what to expect from the story and makes the reader interested in the plot. The story is really dark, and nicely written. Well done! And good luck with the contest!
I am loving the story so far. The characters were describe perfectly. The background is perfectly set. The story is amazingly written and builds up making it extremely interesting. I can't wait to finish the story and I really recommend everyone reads this.
I would suggest giving this a read since the writing itself is engaging. The narration flows smoothly and every scene is described vividly. Personally, what I like the most is how the author takes their time easing into the story, building the plot step by step. So, if you love a slow-paced (slow-burn) story, this is definitely for you. Not to mention a great world-building too. Keep up the good work, Author! Good luck for both of us :D
I must say a very nice write up . The synopsis caught my attention and i was forced to read more. The more I read, the more I didn’t want to stop. You did good, author😁😌👍. Keep it up .
Nice story development and great character design. Like seriously! This book deserves more credit than it's receiving. I just can get enough of it.
The flow of the story is overall great. The description of the background is great. The descriptions, as well as depiction of the story, will make the readers immersed in the story. The synopsis is well crafted to grab the users attention. It makes a user think on the story plot and keeps wanting for more.
The "Mankind" on your book cover really brings me the chills, telling me how good the chapters are by reading them in one seating. The story is really engaging, with the author describing each scenes with fluid words. I really love your work, and READERS, YOU SHOULD READ THIS BOOK TOOO!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
You have got a really interesting story there! I like it a lot. It gives multiple emotions at the same time. Besides, fantasy is my favorite genre and after reading this anyone can see why. Keep up the good work!
"Chiseled abs" *immediately add to the collections* Overall, it is a very good book about the apocalypse and what I love more about this is that it is based in the Philippines. Looking forward for more!!
I only read the first chapter, but I enjoyed it. The author managed to make me smile. I also like the references to Filipino motifs giving the story some sense of locality. The writing needs improvement but nothing a steady practice and grammarly (or some other software) cannot fix.
I have yet to read your novel but I already like your writing style and quality. I like your plot and your writing makes it all the more interesting. I will read it now.
Definitely a great story. Author has a clear idea of what he intends to write and it helps draw the reader in. The writing quality is done well but grammar could use a few tweaks, nothing crazy. Also, I would suggest a bit more detail on the world around them. For example, the explosion should describe the destroyed buildings outside of the school. There should be chaotic streets and burning buildings. Same goes for the interior of certain buildings, like his room. These small details help build the story and also give us a better understanding of the world. Overall, the story seems like a promising one. Keep up the good work Author!
Love what's going on here!! Intelligent MCs are my fav And combined with the legendary apocalypse plot, this novel is an absolute gem! Keep going author, this book is going to soar!!
Alright this was a mix that I wasn't expecting. System and apocalypse? I think I've only read something like this once and it kinda became a slog. But not yours, the strength of this one is the world building and you do it superbly. This is a 5 for me.
Very interesting! The beginning is mainly introducing the characters and getting a feel of the environment. The novel is easy to read and flows well without any grammatical mistakes. Overall, it was quite a pleasant reading experience. If you're looking for an exciting, apocalyptic-type book, this one is perfect for you. This novel has great potential! Looking forward to more chapters ^^
Are you looking for a good apocalypse story to read? Well you've found it. The writing in the story is just fabulous. I'm usually not the type to enjoy stories who lead into this trope of writing however, I have to admit, this had me wanting more every second I read it. Really well done author. Only concern is the stability of updates, other than that, this is just amazing. Good job author! I'm cheering for you!
This is definitely a hidden gem here on WN. The apocalyptic theme is great, even though I don't usually read books of this genre. Looking forward to more chapters!
I don't usually read such genre but this one is an exception. To be honest, I like the writing style and the storyline is something captivating. Waiting for more chapters tho. Job well done and good luck!
oh wow. This is a unique and interesting story. the chapters are longer than what I am used to reading here but I can't stop reading! this is so good!
I haven't finished reading but at this point, I must simply appreciate such beautiful work. Keep it up and I look forward to interacting more with your work
This story does a good job with defining the characters and getting us inside their heads so that we know who they are and what they want. The writing could use some work, just basic stuff like tense and grammar, but that comes with time. In all, an interesting story.
OMG...!! I love this story. it's characterization and plot is detailed and well explained. I love the author's style of writing, it's incredible. Words only can't explain how much am so obsessed with this story. [img=update][img=recommend]
decent book, I enjoy the feel of the world all through the prologue felt like it dragged on but nonetheless still interesting. it's very mature which is cool
This is a pretty good story. The prologue was nicely done, letting us know about the mc and a bit of his life. His nightmares are interesting... After reading some of the chapters, I can see the shadows of some movies, but I still like it. The action scenes are well written and the characters believable. MC is smart, phew. Just a few writing errors here and there and you're good to go, author. Good luck.
I don't usually read this type of novel normally, but yours managed to arrest me from beginning to end, and now I can only curse you for not having more chapters available. Please don't stop!
Though it is slow paced at the beginning the story picks up gradually. The background story of the MC given at the beggining clears a lot of things that will appear in the later chapters. A very interesting story with decent plot. With small editing here and there will make it an excellent book.
The character development and storyline are absolutely brilliant. The story captured you and sucks you into another world. The writing style is fluid and is easy to follow along.
A few grammar flaws here and there, mostly concerning word-tense, but nothing too serious. Although I do like some of the unique descriptions to describe the characters' thoughts and actions, such as the "nodded like a rooster pecking rice" bit. The story and the way it's set out is also quite intriguing.
I love an apocalypse setting and this starts very realistically, already added to the library, let's see how Brian will come out of this. PS: the writing is awesome and had some fun scenes at the start.
The plot is promising but the execution of the story needs to worked upon, maybe it's just me but the chapters tend to have some irrelevant details. Proofreading is required otherwise it's all good.
Original and catchy cover page! The synopsis is short, but gives an idea of what to expect from the story and makes the reader interested in the plot. The story is really dark, and nicely written. Well done! And good luck with the contest!
I am loving the story so far. The characters were describe perfectly. The background is perfectly set. The story is amazingly written and builds up making it extremely interesting. I can't wait to finish the story and I really recommend everyone reads this.
I would suggest giving this a read since the writing itself is engaging. The narration flows smoothly and every scene is described vividly. Personally, what I like the most is how the author takes their time easing into the story, building the plot step by step. So, if you love a slow-paced (slow-burn) story, this is definitely for you. Not to mention a great world-building too. Keep up the good work, Author! Good luck for both of us :D
I must say a very nice write up . The synopsis caught my attention and i was forced to read more. The more I read, the more I didn’t want to stop. You did good, author😁😌👍. Keep it up .
Nice story development and great character design. Like seriously! This book deserves more credit than it's receiving. I just can get enough of it.
The flow of the story is overall great. The description of the background is great. The descriptions, as well as depiction of the story, will make the readers immersed in the story. The synopsis is well crafted to grab the users attention. It makes a user think on the story plot and keeps wanting for more.
The "Mankind" on your book cover really brings me the chills, telling me how good the chapters are by reading them in one seating. The story is really engaging, with the author describing each scenes with fluid words. I really love your work, and READERS, YOU SHOULD READ THIS BOOK TOOO!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
You have got a really interesting story there! I like it a lot. It gives multiple emotions at the same time. Besides, fantasy is my favorite genre and after reading this anyone can see why. Keep up the good work!
"Chiseled abs" *immediately add to the collections* Overall, it is a very good book about the apocalypse and what I love more about this is that it is based in the Philippines. Looking forward for more!!
I only read the first chapter, but I enjoyed it. The author managed to make me smile. I also like the references to Filipino motifs giving the story some sense of locality. The writing needs improvement but nothing a steady practice and grammarly (or some other software) cannot fix.
I have yet to read your novel but I already like your writing style and quality. I like your plot and your writing makes it all the more interesting. I will read it now.
Definitely a great story. Author has a clear idea of what he intends to write and it helps draw the reader in. The writing quality is done well but grammar could use a few tweaks, nothing crazy. Also, I would suggest a bit more detail on the world around them. For example, the explosion should describe the destroyed buildings outside of the school. There should be chaotic streets and burning buildings. Same goes for the interior of certain buildings, like his room. These small details help build the story and also give us a better understanding of the world. Overall, the story seems like a promising one. Keep up the good work Author!
Love what's going on here!! Intelligent MCs are my fav And combined with the legendary apocalypse plot, this novel is an absolute gem! Keep going author, this book is going to soar!!
Alright this was a mix that I wasn't expecting. System and apocalypse? I think I've only read something like this once and it kinda became a slog. But not yours, the strength of this one is the world building and you do it superbly. This is a 5 for me.
Very interesting! The beginning is mainly introducing the characters and getting a feel of the environment. The novel is easy to read and flows well without any grammatical mistakes. Overall, it was quite a pleasant reading experience. If you're looking for an exciting, apocalyptic-type book, this one is perfect for you. This novel has great potential! Looking forward to more chapters ^^
Are you looking for a good apocalypse story to read? Well you've found it. The writing in the story is just fabulous. I'm usually not the type to enjoy stories who lead into this trope of writing however, I have to admit, this had me wanting more every second I read it. Really well done author. Only concern is the stability of updates, other than that, this is just amazing. Good job author! I'm cheering for you!
This is definitely a hidden gem here on WN. The apocalyptic theme is great, even though I don't usually read books of this genre. Looking forward to more chapters!
I don't usually read such genre but this one is an exception. To be honest, I like the writing style and the storyline is something captivating. Waiting for more chapters tho. Job well done and good luck!
oh wow. This is a unique and interesting story. the chapters are longer than what I am used to reading here but I can't stop reading! this is so good!
I haven't finished reading but at this point, I must simply appreciate such beautiful work. Keep it up and I look forward to interacting more with your work