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Came here? Good! Go check my new novel: Reverend Apocalypse

2020-03-22 入りました Brazil
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Thanks for the feedback :)

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2 years ago
Replied to JustThatBoredGuy

Thanks for the feedback :)

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2 years ago
Replied to Leo_Micado

The green eyes came from the mutation. Did I say something diff in other chaps? Also, good to see you around leo, on my new novel :)

"Err... Is not that Mark?" said John, from inside the truck, because he recognized the green eyes that his friend had recently gained.

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2 years ago
Replied to James_Jones_4468

Yeap, is a little redundant I will try to avoid, thanks :)

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2 years ago
Replied to LegateMattius

fixed, Thanks :)

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2 years ago
Replied to MediocreSkater

You are right, I didn't like the way it ended too, felt odd to me, I will adjust this later. Keep sharing your thoughts :)

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Replied to LegateMattius

fixed, thanks :)

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fixed, thanks :)

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fixed, thanks :)

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fixed, thanks :)

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  • Reverend Apocalypse original

    Reverend Apocalypse

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY DARK SUPERPOWERS CULTIVATION SURVIVAL APOCALYPSE

    "Look! It's a meteor shower!" shouted Mark's mother, already pointing to the sky. Mark quickly turned his head away from the Dungeons & Dragons game that was over the kitchen table and glimpsed outside, "Wow! I never saw so many before!" he said while seeing the dark sky full of white strikes. "Can you turn the TV on? Maybe there is something about it on the news." asked Mark's father while washing the dishes from the dinner. "That can wait. Let's take a picture outside. The meteor shower will not last forever. Come you two, quickly!" shouted Mark's mother, already grabbing Mark's father's arm and bringing him outside. "You too Mark!" shouted Mark's mother, already outside, and when hearing that Mark took a deep breath and forced himself to go too, he hated to take pictures, but his mother would not let him off the hook no matter what.  Mark grabbed his cellphone and walked outside. "Ok, you two, give a long kiss. After all, it's your wedding anniversary!" said Mark, already unlocking the phone and pointing at them. Mark took the picture of both kissing with the meteor shower as a background, and he admitted to himself, the picture looked nice, but when looking at his parents again, Mark saw that the white strikes in the sky seemed way bigger than before. "I don't think is a good idea to stay outside," shouted Mark to his parents. "Don't worry son. Look! Everyone from the neighborhood is outside too!" said her mother, looking at their closest neighbor while waving her hand. Mark looked at his neighbor and waved his hand too. The man smiled back at Mark and exploded. Blood splashed the ground all around, turning the lawn red, while the man's hand flew high in the sky and fell only a few inches from Mark's feet. Mark, astonished, looked down at his neighbor's hand, still with the golden ring on it, and looked back to where his neighbor was before. But now, Mark saw a small beast crawling from the hole made by the meteor, the beast was barely 3 inches in size but was growing at an astonishing speed, and not even 2 seconds later Mark saw a beast the size of a cat coming out of it and jumping on the neighbor's wife, that was still there, on the door, in shock, not believing what was happening. The cat beast was extremely fast and in a blink of an eye ripped the woman's guts out of its belly. The scream made by the woman seemed to wake up everyone around and Mark's father shouted aloud, "RUN!!!!" … Currently releasing one chapter a day.

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  • The Last Warlock original

    The Last Warlock

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC MYSTERY DARK VILLAIN EVOLUTION FASTPACED RAREBLOODLINE GENES

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    CURRENTLY EDITING THE NOVEL "Revenge, he promised me... So, I took the Oath... and The Tower of Chaos, I was allowed to enter. That's how my journey began, from a nobody to what they call me now.... The Mage Slayer, The Devourer of Worlds... The Last Warlock." ---- Warning: This book has explicit content in several ways! Read to chapter 40 to have a better idea about the book. Currently editing the novel. (no new releases until it's done) --- The story has a lot of action, blood, gory, and battles. It's a mix of sci-fi with magic, runes and cultivation and there is a lot of lore from other cultures, like the Nord/Viking culture. It has runes, wizards, shamans, mutations, genes, high technology, guns, spells, and abilities. The MC doesn't get reincarnated, and the novel has a different approach to system, that is very subtle. So, if you don't like system or the typical tropes involving Isekai you are on the right book. Btw: People said the battle scenes and war scenes are awesome. [cover not owned by me, unknown artist]

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