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Adwaid_Nambiar

It is a great novel! A very good execution of the story considering the background of the story. I am looking forward to upcoming chapters! Keep going ; )

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catvi
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The reckoning of human eyy? I am always up for a good old fashioned apocalypse novel. Is this novel inspired by biblical myths and then video games? Welp maybe I misunderstood. But one thing I know, is that the characters here have punny names, and the MC is willing to learn and grow and be ruthless if that's what matters.

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Mavier

This is a well-written book among the new books. It has an interesting plot, I love the characters and this is one of the books that make you want to binge read it at one go. keep going author.

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Emeruferuu

Yoooww, a filipino author as well. I loved yer way of describing words, and the world of building sure is vast although it only had a few chapters. Would be watching this grow! Let's see each other at the spirity ranking at dec. Hope ya also check out my book.

3yr
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NomsterWasHere

Was pleasantly surprised about the amount of character description right out of the gate. Most books I've read take way too long to describe what their characters look like, giving me enough time to create an image of my own in my head. Then BAM, they're described later in the chapter only to be nothing that I thought they were. The author also seems to enjoy ripping off the band-aid, quickly revealing story in sudden, short bursts, which is something I can get behind. Chapter 3's opening was not what I expected after the explosion, and that's the best way to keep a reader like me continually interested. Great work!

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Jin_Daoran

I don't know what the heck that prologue was, but the rest of it was great. The creator god using a Game System as a modern biblical Flood, nice worldbuilding. The arrival of game novice teachers was a pretty cool concept, incarnated angels, maybe? It's like worldwide Final Destination, puzzle survival mode. Gore, betrayal, despair, and oh hopeful striving humanity! If you like those sorts of things, then this is a story for you. The verb tenses in the writing are not consistent, but the grammar is good. The pacing of the story is hard-hitting, which is excellent for this kind of story. Great start, author, keep on writing!

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Campoccino

I love the world building and the pacing of the story. It's off to a good start and honestly, first chapters that have some sizzle on it, just like this one are a whole lot better and would make you want to read more. Good Job Author!

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Maryixxx

Overall, it's an engaging story so far. And apocalypse? wow! I love everything about it and I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.

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Jammie_Jam

It's a great premise, the characters emotions could be felt, it just felt so lifelike, the plot is already been used by many novels, but I'm highly expecting the author to surprise me again. overall it's great 5/5.

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captiun

Great start! The story moves fast and the novel won't bore you. The author managed to keep your anxiety level just high enough that you want to keep reading. The characters feel real and don't have dumb luck or power; instead, they mostly rely on their survival instinct and smarts. The premises were well laid out, and it can be inferred from the setting that the author plans ahead. The following chapters will surely reveal a lot of secrets and develop further the world. The story reminds me of "Alice in Borderland" of Netflix. If you like smart/survival/ kind of story, this one is for you.

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MissyRailae

Gosh, I love the brutal graphic scenes because I had a habit of reading these type of genre from time to time. My fav part is how everything started normal, peaceful and just-a-usual day vibe then suddenly it drops into horrifying chaos wherein everybody knew from then on it won't never be the same again. Overall, I like the drama with youngsters whining but can't do anything because this unfortunately is their reality now. The plot is solid, consistent and smooth. What I only recommend is I'd very much love to see the main lead shine from head start like some tidbits of his morals, principles and strong suits or even their flaws. Nevertheless, I'm rooting for this novel!

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yu_chan_desu

good detailing and the writing style is wonderful! i didn't actually read the synopsis and went on head first with the first few chapters and i wasn't able to shield myself from the boom! if you know what i mean haha all in all i had a wonderful time reading this novel and full five stars for the author for such a good work!

3yr
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gaijsnsn

I read all the chapters released so far and I believe this is very interesting. I felt sad, and laughed at the same time. please keep up the good work! you have a very good idea here!

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SummerStardust

Why do I feel like the question in socmed "the last anime/movie you watched will be your life now" and then you watched those amazing animes but just too scary to live in... at start I thought I was in As The Gods will.. T_T... thaw was scary, when we will be judge in one go... Then felt like I was playing RO or Genshin... Uwuop... I can feel the story to my bones.. Very nice storytelling Author..~~~

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alienfrommars

So far, there's only 6 chapters. But 6 chapters are enough to make you add this one to your library. Overall, it is an interesting novel. Funny, tho. Usually, I imagine the scenes in the novels like those movies or series. (sometimes, my imagination surpasses those lol) But this one, maybe because I just watched Dr. Stone that I imagined it like those anime. First chapter, we were given the chance to glimpse of the normal life of our MC. It was just a normal household minding their own lives. A normal day where our MC goes to school and do what he usually does. Until something happened and he found himself with a group of people inside a room. As usual, in this situation, the first thing that ensues was panic and fear of the unknown. But, with some brave and level-headed individuals mixed in the group, they calmed things down and think logically. The story developed from then on. I'm not very picky unless it's super bad. And this one is not bad at all. There were occasional redundancy and sometimes, a chunk of paragraph that might put some readers off. Still, if one focused on the plot itself, it's a good read. I'm excited to read more! Good luck to the Author and this novel! I'm sure it will garner attention in the future.

3yr
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Ereh_Yaeger

The synopsis is fantastic. I can feel the horror squeezing my heart, the characters, the story progression, and Mister Pyg, who is also horrifying... It's a fantastic read. Thank you so much, author! for creating this work of art

3yr
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CookieHamster

An thrilling novel filled with gore and stuff, highly addictive to be honest, the characters are fine, the story development is brilliant, and it's a great read. Thank you so much, author!

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HanmaYujiro

What a great find, fantastic job author, I hope Bryan can save Belle and the others, oooh its so exciting, expecting for more. keep up the great work. Peace!

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HeresmyDoge

Great story so far, interesting premise, good use of words in describing the character's raw emotions, it can be felt as if they're standing next to you. Keep up the good work. I'm expecting this to blow up.

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Technogeek

The novel quite good, and I will support the author who is working on this novel, I hope the author had a good day and for the people who are looking at the review hoping this novel is good, I recommend reading it guys it's super good of a novel.[img=coins]

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Dark_Scholars

More more more😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇 Finally we get a smart mc. Oh please don't let the mc turn foolish. Had some horror elements but not too bad. Still, avoiding reading Chapter Four while eating. It is a solid book, good background nice characters. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up

3yr
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midnight_bloom

Interesting premise. The writing style is fluid and decent and the command of English is good; however, there are typo's here and there: misplaced quotation marks, his-her pronoun switch, tense switch, capitalization (also guilty of these huehue). I have commented in some of the paragraphs the identified ones so that author can take a look at it. Once it is revised, the paragraph comment will automatically be deleted. I also suggest the use of Grammarly and Hemingway app. The story is already great as it is. My suggestions are only to make it better. Keep on writing, author. All the best. 🤗

3yr
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MrWritter

I must say I found it quite slow, but very descriptive, I could easily spend hours reading it and not even care, not least because this novel has many similarities to one of my favorite novels.

3yr
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Megana4

The first thing I liked about this story is its storyline, grammar, writing style, and choice of words. The first chapter went at a nice pace. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!

3yr
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iridescentdream

This book has a great potential! It's my first time reading an apocalyptic story, and I got hooked. The author did a great job in conveying Bryan's thoughts and emotions, and the scenes were vividly described. There were minor lapses, but it didn't hinder my comprehension. Keep it up, dear author! ^^

3yr
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ButtonsWrites

Okay... I am a sucker for these types of doomsday stories. The writing is very good! It is a good balance between character dialogue and background of the story. I wish there were more chapters available but I am very interested on what actual skills Bryan has and what type of hero he will be. I hope he is not those very 'idealistic/wanna save everyone type' I like flawed heroes with lotsa secrets to them. Looking forward to how this story will turn out!

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Andrew_Oak

Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.

3yr
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Dani6
LV 14 Badge

The characters are relatable and you do a really good job setting the pace, easing us into your world instead of immediately dropping us there. Good luck with your writing!

3yr
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Gabuji

I like how expressive you are with your words. You write very well and I enjoy how you describe your characters. The story itself is also enjoyable and very interesting. Keep going and I'm pretty sure this story will be received very well.

3yr
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VRW1
LV 11 Badge

I like the pace of the first chapter and I going to see how this story going to turn out when I read the other chapters and more to come. 👍

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Adwaid_Nambiar

It is a great novel! A very good execution of the story considering the background of the story. I am looking forward to upcoming chapters! Keep going ; )

3yr
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catvi
LV 5 Badge

The reckoning of human eyy? I am always up for a good old fashioned apocalypse novel. Is this novel inspired by biblical myths and then video games? Welp maybe I misunderstood. But one thing I know, is that the characters here have punny names, and the MC is willing to learn and grow and be ruthless if that's what matters.

3yr
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Mavier

This is a well-written book among the new books. It has an interesting plot, I love the characters and this is one of the books that make you want to binge read it at one go. keep going author.

3yr
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Emeruferuu

Yoooww, a filipino author as well. I loved yer way of describing words, and the world of building sure is vast although it only had a few chapters. Would be watching this grow! Let's see each other at the spirity ranking at dec. Hope ya also check out my book.

3yr
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NomsterWasHere

Was pleasantly surprised about the amount of character description right out of the gate. Most books I've read take way too long to describe what their characters look like, giving me enough time to create an image of my own in my head. Then BAM, they're described later in the chapter only to be nothing that I thought they were. The author also seems to enjoy ripping off the band-aid, quickly revealing story in sudden, short bursts, which is something I can get behind. Chapter 3's opening was not what I expected after the explosion, and that's the best way to keep a reader like me continually interested. Great work!

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Jin_Daoran

I don't know what the heck that prologue was, but the rest of it was great. The creator god using a Game System as a modern biblical Flood, nice worldbuilding. The arrival of game novice teachers was a pretty cool concept, incarnated angels, maybe? It's like worldwide Final Destination, puzzle survival mode. Gore, betrayal, despair, and oh hopeful striving humanity! If you like those sorts of things, then this is a story for you. The verb tenses in the writing are not consistent, but the grammar is good. The pacing of the story is hard-hitting, which is excellent for this kind of story. Great start, author, keep on writing!

3yr
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Campoccino

I love the world building and the pacing of the story. It's off to a good start and honestly, first chapters that have some sizzle on it, just like this one are a whole lot better and would make you want to read more. Good Job Author!

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3yr
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Maryixxx

Overall, it's an engaging story so far. And apocalypse? wow! I love everything about it and I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.

3yr
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Jammie_Jam

It's a great premise, the characters emotions could be felt, it just felt so lifelike, the plot is already been used by many novels, but I'm highly expecting the author to surprise me again. overall it's great 5/5.

3yr
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captiun

Great start! The story moves fast and the novel won't bore you. The author managed to keep your anxiety level just high enough that you want to keep reading. The characters feel real and don't have dumb luck or power; instead, they mostly rely on their survival instinct and smarts. The premises were well laid out, and it can be inferred from the setting that the author plans ahead. The following chapters will surely reveal a lot of secrets and develop further the world. The story reminds me of "Alice in Borderland" of Netflix. If you like smart/survival/ kind of story, this one is for you.

3yr
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MissyRailae

Gosh, I love the brutal graphic scenes because I had a habit of reading these type of genre from time to time. My fav part is how everything started normal, peaceful and just-a-usual day vibe then suddenly it drops into horrifying chaos wherein everybody knew from then on it won't never be the same again. Overall, I like the drama with youngsters whining but can't do anything because this unfortunately is their reality now. The plot is solid, consistent and smooth. What I only recommend is I'd very much love to see the main lead shine from head start like some tidbits of his morals, principles and strong suits or even their flaws. Nevertheless, I'm rooting for this novel!

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yu_chan_desu

good detailing and the writing style is wonderful! i didn't actually read the synopsis and went on head first with the first few chapters and i wasn't able to shield myself from the boom! if you know what i mean haha all in all i had a wonderful time reading this novel and full five stars for the author for such a good work!

3yr
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gaijsnsn

I read all the chapters released so far and I believe this is very interesting. I felt sad, and laughed at the same time. please keep up the good work! you have a very good idea here!

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3yr
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SummerStardust

Why do I feel like the question in socmed "the last anime/movie you watched will be your life now" and then you watched those amazing animes but just too scary to live in... at start I thought I was in As The Gods will.. T_T... thaw was scary, when we will be judge in one go... Then felt like I was playing RO or Genshin... Uwuop... I can feel the story to my bones.. Very nice storytelling Author..~~~

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alienfrommars

So far, there's only 6 chapters. But 6 chapters are enough to make you add this one to your library. Overall, it is an interesting novel. Funny, tho. Usually, I imagine the scenes in the novels like those movies or series. (sometimes, my imagination surpasses those lol) But this one, maybe because I just watched Dr. Stone that I imagined it like those anime. First chapter, we were given the chance to glimpse of the normal life of our MC. It was just a normal household minding their own lives. A normal day where our MC goes to school and do what he usually does. Until something happened and he found himself with a group of people inside a room. As usual, in this situation, the first thing that ensues was panic and fear of the unknown. But, with some brave and level-headed individuals mixed in the group, they calmed things down and think logically. The story developed from then on. I'm not very picky unless it's super bad. And this one is not bad at all. There were occasional redundancy and sometimes, a chunk of paragraph that might put some readers off. Still, if one focused on the plot itself, it's a good read. I'm excited to read more! Good luck to the Author and this novel! I'm sure it will garner attention in the future.

3yr
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Ereh_Yaeger

The synopsis is fantastic. I can feel the horror squeezing my heart, the characters, the story progression, and Mister Pyg, who is also horrifying... It's a fantastic read. Thank you so much, author! for creating this work of art

3yr
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CookieHamster

An thrilling novel filled with gore and stuff, highly addictive to be honest, the characters are fine, the story development is brilliant, and it's a great read. Thank you so much, author!

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HanmaYujiro

What a great find, fantastic job author, I hope Bryan can save Belle and the others, oooh its so exciting, expecting for more. keep up the great work. Peace!

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HeresmyDoge

Great story so far, interesting premise, good use of words in describing the character's raw emotions, it can be felt as if they're standing next to you. Keep up the good work. I'm expecting this to blow up.

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Technogeek

The novel quite good, and I will support the author who is working on this novel, I hope the author had a good day and for the people who are looking at the review hoping this novel is good, I recommend reading it guys it's super good of a novel.[img=coins]

3yr
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Dark_Scholars

More more more😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇 Finally we get a smart mc. Oh please don't let the mc turn foolish. Had some horror elements but not too bad. Still, avoiding reading Chapter Four while eating. It is a solid book, good background nice characters. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up

3yr
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midnight_bloom

Interesting premise. The writing style is fluid and decent and the command of English is good; however, there are typo's here and there: misplaced quotation marks, his-her pronoun switch, tense switch, capitalization (also guilty of these huehue). I have commented in some of the paragraphs the identified ones so that author can take a look at it. Once it is revised, the paragraph comment will automatically be deleted. I also suggest the use of Grammarly and Hemingway app. The story is already great as it is. My suggestions are only to make it better. Keep on writing, author. All the best. 🤗

3yr
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MrWritter

I must say I found it quite slow, but very descriptive, I could easily spend hours reading it and not even care, not least because this novel has many similarities to one of my favorite novels.

3yr
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Megana4

The first thing I liked about this story is its storyline, grammar, writing style, and choice of words. The first chapter went at a nice pace. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!

3yr
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iridescentdream

This book has a great potential! It's my first time reading an apocalyptic story, and I got hooked. The author did a great job in conveying Bryan's thoughts and emotions, and the scenes were vividly described. There were minor lapses, but it didn't hinder my comprehension. Keep it up, dear author! ^^

3yr
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ButtonsWrites

Okay... I am a sucker for these types of doomsday stories. The writing is very good! It is a good balance between character dialogue and background of the story. I wish there were more chapters available but I am very interested on what actual skills Bryan has and what type of hero he will be. I hope he is not those very 'idealistic/wanna save everyone type' I like flawed heroes with lotsa secrets to them. Looking forward to how this story will turn out!

img
3yr
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Andrew_Oak

Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.

3yr
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Dani6
LV 14 Badge

The characters are relatable and you do a really good job setting the pace, easing us into your world instead of immediately dropping us there. Good luck with your writing!

3yr
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Gabuji

I like how expressive you are with your words. You write very well and I enjoy how you describe your characters. The story itself is also enjoyable and very interesting. Keep going and I'm pretty sure this story will be received very well.

3yr
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VRW1
LV 11 Badge

I like the pace of the first chapter and I going to see how this story going to turn out when I read the other chapters and more to come. 👍

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