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概要
Story translated by google tratudor.
Sacred Gear Creator, is the first Sacred Gear created by God as a tool to make others, but no being in his universe could use his powers, so when he died a part of his power added to Sacred Gear in search of a Host.
I posted this fanfic on this other site and decided to see how to get out of here.
https://www.spiritfanfiction.com/historia/sacred-gear-creator-20411360
https://www.wattpad.com/story/240038941-sacred-gear-creator-pt-br
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The story i think is okay, but the english is seriously terrible, genders are completely wrong 90% of the time, the sentences are hard to understand and require you to reread them a few times to understand what is happening. I understand it is translated using google translate but seriously it is really poor. It is a shame because i think this could be a great fanfic if the english was better.
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Except from confusing words like nobility and etc. This is good story, I hope those remarks will fix and I don't have problem about Yuri tag as long it's not too much focus on them, I like how you changed Riser for the better which change the Elite 4 rising rookie Devil in the future chapter
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Even though your writing needs improvement the story has potential. 👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌
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Another mc who own OP sacred gear but also want to be a dog of someone because he want to become a high ranking devil that's why he will join a peerage. what a waste 😩
卷 1 : Devil King Birth
- 1 Devil King 4 years ago
- 2 Sword Birth 4 years ago
- 3 Small Bet 4 years ago
- 4 Yan vs Rise and Harem 4 years ago
- 5 Result 4 years ago
- 6 Responsibility 4 years ago
- 7 The house fell 4 years ago
- 8 it was never a war 4 years ago
- 9 Gran Finalle! 4 years ago
- 10 Fenix pawn 4 years ago
- 11 Joint training 4 years ago
- 12 joint training 2 4 years ago
- 13 Joint training 3 4 years ago
- 14 joint training 4 4 years ago
- 15 one wish 4 years ago
- 16 Birthday Serafall (R-18) 4 years ago
卷 2 : Welcome to Kyoto
- 17 Kyoto 4 years ago
- 18 The kidnap 4 years ago
- 19 searches 4 years ago
- 20 War 1 4 years ago
- 21 War 2 4 years ago
- 22 Before the war 4 years ago
- 23 Rescue and end of the war 4 years ago
- 24 Old friend 4 years ago
- 25 What's your dream? 4 years ago
- 26 Serafina 3 years ago
- 27 Ohana 3 years ago
- 28 Return to the Underworld 3 years ago
- 29 Meeting with the Maou 3 years ago
- 30 The beginning of a Friendship 3 years ago
- 31 New Year 3 years ago
- 32 Peace Treaty 3 years ago
I'm happy with the "yuri" tag. - But clarify something for me (you will change the whole story because if you put "yuri" you will have to change the protagonist to a woman xD). - If it were a "yuri" with the label "futanari" I approve it, if you read my review, please answer, in passing for others to read it too.