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Writing Quality → 2/5 Stability of Updates → 5/5 Story Development → 4/5 Character Design → 3/5 World Background → 4/5 "Hihi"...just stop...
too many female characters that is close to mc. maybe they are not romantic interest yet but. is it gonna be yukino or will it be a harem???
Shit!! this altor knows how to write a story, just perfect_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
the plot and story development is great but i suggest use grammarly to correct few grammar errors and try to make the characters not to force like not respect hokage and sensei u can try to watch naruto to gain few idea and the characters persona and style
One of the best Naruto Fanfics I have read so Far. For now, I am intrigued and like where the story is going. I don’t have much too comment other than perhaps improving on the updating stability but its understandable since this is done for fun and part time. I am hoping it won’t have a disappointing ending or ruin the current flow later on. So far, The Author is doing a good job.
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Until now, the story is really good and seems to have a good storyline. I would say one of the top 10 Naruto Fanfics that i read, until now. The Author is doing a good job🙂 PS Dont get stressed if in the future some people give bad reviews. Because; If somehting is good and the people enjoy it, most of them will not give a review or coment. But if some people dont enjoy or have something to complain about the story, most of them will give a review or coment...
Chapter 1 and 2 is so confusing the time skip so big. Im so confused with the reviews saying its good but after reading chapter 1 and few sentences in chapter i already knew this fanfic is doomed. Well thats all im gonna say im not gonna try to read this one its like reading a novel from chapter 1 jumping to chapter 20 in a blink anyways ciao
ネタバレを明かす Writing Quality → 2/5 Stability of Updates → 5/5 Story Development → 4/5 Character Design → 3/5 World Background → 4/5 "Hihi"...just stop...
too many female characters that is close to mc. maybe they are not romantic interest yet but. is it gonna be yukino or will it be a harem???
Shit!! this altor knows how to write a story, just perfect_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
the plot and story development is great but i suggest use grammarly to correct few grammar errors and try to make the characters not to force like not respect hokage and sensei u can try to watch naruto to gain few idea and the characters persona and style
One of the best Naruto Fanfics I have read so Far. For now, I am intrigued and like where the story is going. I don’t have much too comment other than perhaps improving on the updating stability but its understandable since this is done for fun and part time. I am hoping it won’t have a disappointing ending or ruin the current flow later on. So far, The Author is doing a good job.
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Until now, the story is really good and seems to have a good storyline. I would say one of the top 10 Naruto Fanfics that i read, until now. The Author is doing a good job🙂 PS Dont get stressed if in the future some people give bad reviews. Because; If somehting is good and the people enjoy it, most of them will not give a review or coment. But if some people dont enjoy or have something to complain about the story, most of them will give a review or coment...
Chapter 1 and 2 is so confusing the time skip so big. Im so confused with the reviews saying its good but after reading chapter 1 and few sentences in chapter i already knew this fanfic is doomed. Well thats all im gonna say im not gonna try to read this one its like reading a novel from chapter 1 jumping to chapter 20 in a blink anyways ciao
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