its only 2 chapters but the berf is already in place what a lame excuse why bother mixed it then makr it complicated dumb execution already cant take this type of shit seriously why bother make a story out it when u thought its a OP mix but nah its a bad mix already fuck its so lame just make him pure uzumaki why bother mix lame as fuck.
The difference between a pure-blood Uchiha and a half-breed lay in their stamina, in how long they could keep the Sharingan activated along with less chakra cost. For her and others of her lineage, it was a gift and a burden as it blossomed through tragedy.
Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)
Anime & Comics · Sidecharacter1
lame
5 star really?
nah 5 star for this work mc doesnt even kill enemies hes doing shit to make morre enemies then doesnt kill them you put 5 star really? ? ur shooting this shit so up with shitty work the start is ok but after the syatem upgrade he become so nerf even wirh many skills cant defeat the nerf crocodile so shirty that i cant stand why people rate work so bad
pure shit doenst even kill people just do somethi stupid then let them walk typical stupid author stop writing pls. if its translation why pick shit work do better
make this shir Sasuke fanfiction why bother mention the mc ehen he only the things he do is flirt and be lazy. Like who cares about sasuke hes only using him to get stronger but the concentration in everything is sasuke like cmon its so stupid even the desicions of the mc everything is so stupid and lazy cant take this shit to seriously i thought the author will improve but getting shittier and shitter fucking low quality work
true the magic of fanfic the diary but we were given by 2 weeks later stuff ehy bother make a premise this kind if ur not gonna concentrate on it chinese writers man so dumb
the most useless thing ever didnt even bother to use it once.
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do u even proofread bro? too many mistakes. check first before uploading. you only need a minute to read a chapter so check first before uploading please.
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One Piece: Just A Big Brother
Anime & Comics · SoldierOfGod61