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Sadly laking in mental stability in the boring way and conviniently solving everything to easy and boring.
horrible cringe dialog. nonsensical character relationships. OOC characters throughout to the point of not even feeling like a real MCU novel. Unnecessary unrealistic harem.
Achei muito sem graça. Seu pedidos foram um desperdício, ele deseja uma amigo achei uma bosta, ainda mais que e a filha do deus. O deus proteger ele e fazer dele um entregar. Não tem sentido nenhum. Ele e deus ele pode fazer um sistema de entrega, não tem sentido o MC existir
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for the love of all that is holy pleas tell me your going to make apart 2to thus story
Good story all the relationships seemed super forced but everything else was good was really ify with peggy tho .............. ..........
Imagine telling a leteral god of origin 'I will show you the power of a mortal'. Yeah....thats how dumb the mc is....
does anyone know of better translation for 'My Wife Is Captain Marvel!' if you do please do tell and I would like to request author if please translate this novel
Writing Quality##### Stability of Updates##### Story Development##### Character Design### World Background#### The total score 4.4
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I first started reading this story with no hope but know I searching for more This Story Feel like very short Brother next world please This is best story I read, hope you release second season soon and thank you👍
I was going to a flight 4 hours and I saw this novel “Wow” i thought this has sone nice reviews and so i downloaded it and went on the flight, the begenning was okayish but then it started plummiting, being on that flight became painful, the character was so shallow and every single character that was a female became part of some wierd harem if i could meet this author I would look straight at them and tell them that their story was one of the most painful expierences of my life. I have read some other marvel fanfiction and it was a chinese novel, even though it was translated it had better grammer then this, every third sentence has a gramatixal error and it was so bad I had to take time to figure out what the author was saying, and I read chinese webnovels! All in all avoid this and to the person who wrote this, I want you to know your work has genuienly made a person suffer.
The language and story make me guess the author to be very young. VERY! Usage of the English language is not bad but childish too. If you are bored, try it, if you have something good, read that instead.
Well, grammar sucks, that’s for sure. Couldn’t get past 1 chap. If you can overcome it, be my guest.
mc is a idiot he wished for a talking system and then a partner what a way to waste a wish ________________________________________________________________________________
Not the greatest thing I ever read but is good to past time I recommend it 😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
This is one of the best marvel fanfic I have ever read. The powers are very useful and are perfect to become a supreme being. Overall it’s very good and I definitely recommend it.
love this book brother i m also from india please recommend this type of more books or books like tribe becoming invincible with 10000x multiplyee tnx brother. love your book...
well, it was one of my greatest picks(even though I read only few).t has great story with opmc and a bit fast-paced or more like run down to canon .story starts from WW2 and there it shows various character interactions and stuff and then run down till canon but it was awesome.gotta hand it the author.👍👍
Finally a complete Marvel fanfic book... although it wasn't very breath taking it was. nice pass time. Go read.............................
фон, навыки и его дух чувак такой классный, грамматика в порядке плюс скорость обновления тоже в порядке, кстати, что массовый выпуск-это божье спасибо Все очень прекрасно , НО Где МОжно Найти ПРОду?
it's too confusing! some parts it seems to be a story other parts it seems to be a summary, there are also various points like the forced relationship with elly and steve (captain america). the fact that steve is a bit of an idiot with women doesn't mean she doesn't understand the situation, especially after the super soldier serum injection she gets smarter, stronger and other things. There are also various errors with the timing of the characters and also that no one says anything about the protagonist who does not age after years. Even peggy's acceptance when he tells him he has another girlfriend is too simple, the further the story goes the worse it gets, the author seems to be in a hurry to wrap up the story and doesn't explain the characters' relationships well. wakanda and steal all the vibranium like I did? no one asked what happened? etc ... I believe that when you make a story you have to tell the various details. Even as mc creates technologies in an easy way, I mean where did the factories go? where did he get the materials? don't stay inside the house take 4 pieces of iron and make the camera this is not minecraft, so the times are high, the characters have minimal interactions, the background of the world is a bit below average because apart from marvel not much is said (one would expect what the god of origin would do and various things instead nothing), mc is intelligent and only undertakes that sometimes he does mindless things that seem forced for the plot My stars: 3 4 2 2 3
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Pretty good. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Kyle was rightfully op. The fluffy romance parts felt rushed but that's not a bad thing. Overall I like it
MASSIVE quality drop in chapters. MC is unlikable, grammar is meh and the story is badly written. Don't read if you dislike bad character pairings.
It was great it wasn't long but also wasn't short it give all the best point in its own right 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
why didnt you name this alcohol deliveryman like bruh so stupid and ima niopppppppppp the heck out of here [img=coins] [img=coins][img=coins]
put the NTR tags on this... the story so far is good except for some minor grammar mistakes but still readable but put the NTR tags since the author did NTR
It was the sentence in the beginning "To your knowledge ..." that stopped me from reading the story. From all the other reviews, this is a great story, and I'll definitely revisit if you edit it or get a beta. Hope you do.
Argh its already over!!! This is one of the best marvel fics it's up there with burnable's post apocalyptic potter in a parallel universe. 👍🏽
Sadly laking in mental stability in the boring way and conviniently solving everything to easy and boring.
horrible cringe dialog. nonsensical character relationships. OOC characters throughout to the point of not even feeling like a real MCU novel. Unnecessary unrealistic harem.
Achei muito sem graça. Seu pedidos foram um desperdício, ele deseja uma amigo achei uma bosta, ainda mais que e a filha do deus. O deus proteger ele e fazer dele um entregar. Não tem sentido nenhum. Ele e deus ele pode fazer um sistema de entrega, não tem sentido o MC existir
ネタバレを明かす for the love of all that is holy pleas tell me your going to make apart 2to thus story
Good story all the relationships seemed super forced but everything else was good was really ify with peggy tho .............. ..........
Imagine telling a leteral god of origin 'I will show you the power of a mortal'. Yeah....thats how dumb the mc is....
does anyone know of better translation for 'My Wife Is Captain Marvel!' if you do please do tell and I would like to request author if please translate this novel
Writing Quality##### Stability of Updates##### Story Development##### Character Design### World Background#### The total score 4.4
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I first started reading this story with no hope but know I searching for more This Story Feel like very short Brother next world please This is best story I read, hope you release second season soon and thank you👍
I was going to a flight 4 hours and I saw this novel “Wow” i thought this has sone nice reviews and so i downloaded it and went on the flight, the begenning was okayish but then it started plummiting, being on that flight became painful, the character was so shallow and every single character that was a female became part of some wierd harem if i could meet this author I would look straight at them and tell them that their story was one of the most painful expierences of my life. I have read some other marvel fanfiction and it was a chinese novel, even though it was translated it had better grammer then this, every third sentence has a gramatixal error and it was so bad I had to take time to figure out what the author was saying, and I read chinese webnovels! All in all avoid this and to the person who wrote this, I want you to know your work has genuienly made a person suffer.
The language and story make me guess the author to be very young. VERY! Usage of the English language is not bad but childish too. If you are bored, try it, if you have something good, read that instead.
Well, grammar sucks, that’s for sure. Couldn’t get past 1 chap. If you can overcome it, be my guest.
mc is a idiot he wished for a talking system and then a partner what a way to waste a wish ________________________________________________________________________________
Not the greatest thing I ever read but is good to past time I recommend it 😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
This is one of the best marvel fanfic I have ever read. The powers are very useful and are perfect to become a supreme being. Overall it’s very good and I definitely recommend it.
love this book brother i m also from india please recommend this type of more books or books like tribe becoming invincible with 10000x multiplyee tnx brother. love your book...
well, it was one of my greatest picks(even though I read only few).t has great story with opmc and a bit fast-paced or more like run down to canon .story starts from WW2 and there it shows various character interactions and stuff and then run down till canon but it was awesome.gotta hand it the author.👍👍
Finally a complete Marvel fanfic book... although it wasn't very breath taking it was. nice pass time. Go read.............................
фон, навыки и его дух чувак такой классный, грамматика в порядке плюс скорость обновления тоже в порядке, кстати, что массовый выпуск-это божье спасибо Все очень прекрасно , НО Где МОжно Найти ПРОду?
it's too confusing! some parts it seems to be a story other parts it seems to be a summary, there are also various points like the forced relationship with elly and steve (captain america). the fact that steve is a bit of an idiot with women doesn't mean she doesn't understand the situation, especially after the super soldier serum injection she gets smarter, stronger and other things. There are also various errors with the timing of the characters and also that no one says anything about the protagonist who does not age after years. Even peggy's acceptance when he tells him he has another girlfriend is too simple, the further the story goes the worse it gets, the author seems to be in a hurry to wrap up the story and doesn't explain the characters' relationships well. wakanda and steal all the vibranium like I did? no one asked what happened? etc ... I believe that when you make a story you have to tell the various details. Even as mc creates technologies in an easy way, I mean where did the factories go? where did he get the materials? don't stay inside the house take 4 pieces of iron and make the camera this is not minecraft, so the times are high, the characters have minimal interactions, the background of the world is a bit below average because apart from marvel not much is said (one would expect what the god of origin would do and various things instead nothing), mc is intelligent and only undertakes that sometimes he does mindless things that seem forced for the plot My stars: 3 4 2 2 3
ネタバレを明かす Pretty good. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Kyle was rightfully op. The fluffy romance parts felt rushed but that's not a bad thing. Overall I like it
MASSIVE quality drop in chapters. MC is unlikable, grammar is meh and the story is badly written. Don't read if you dislike bad character pairings.
It was great it wasn't long but also wasn't short it give all the best point in its own right 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
why didnt you name this alcohol deliveryman like bruh so stupid and ima niopppppppppp the heck out of here [img=coins] [img=coins][img=coins]
put the NTR tags on this... the story so far is good except for some minor grammar mistakes but still readable but put the NTR tags since the author did NTR
It was the sentence in the beginning "To your knowledge ..." that stopped me from reading the story. From all the other reviews, this is a great story, and I'll definitely revisit if you edit it or get a beta. Hope you do.
Argh its already over!!! This is one of the best marvel fics it's up there with burnable's post apocalyptic potter in a parallel universe. 👍🏽