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Blessed with six wishes, join Kyle on his adventure to the Marvel world. It is going to be a fun ride. So hold your seat.
You may find this story to be somewhat similar to some of the other fics initially, but believe me it will change drastically.
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Billions of women to choose from and he chooses take the one person Captain America loved. Would have fine if he showed interest before Steve but he didn't.
A shameless review by the author himself. Its my very first writing hope you guys like it and if you find any problems or mistake feel free to point it out. Thank you
MASSIVE quality drop in chapters. MC is unlikable, grammar is meh and the story is badly written. Don't read if you dislike bad character pairings.
Broken grammar, when reading, the flow of words is constantly broken. it is nothing like the fanfic he based it off of, except the copying ability. It's more like a gag-comic as he has a companion he suddenly forgets about, then adopts a child and soon becomes an obsessed big brother figure, it's just bad. But the fanfic it's based off of, is a 10/10*
Ok first of all I thought you copied but us is only to set up the story, it changes drastically after ch 15. Good you changes the story as per your readers but still follows the canon. Good story. I like it very much. Waiting for more chapters.
I'm giving it a low rating based on my feel of the way it is written. After reading until the Invasion chapter, everything is like a narrative. Its bland, and felt rushed. Still good job for trying and sharing your work.
I don't know if anyone other than me noticed this but as far as I read this novel it has a lot of things in common to another fanfic in webnovel named "I am in Marvel" but not all but copy and story it is almost same I think......... I don't know whether this is my imagination or not but I think you guys should check whether it's just my imagination or not (In my opinion this fanfic is almost a copy with some more things (wishes, travel) that that novel [*I am in MARVEL* ] but that novel doesn't have travel powers)
it's too confusing! some parts it seems to be a story other parts it seems to be a summary, there are also various points like the forced relationship with elly and steve (captain america). the fact that steve is a bit of an idiot with women doesn't mean she doesn't understand the situation, especially after the super soldier serum injection she gets smarter, stronger and other things. There are also various errors with the timing of the characters and also that no one says anything about the protagonist who does not age after years. Even peggy's acceptance when he tells him he has another girlfriend is too simple, the further the story goes the worse it gets, the author seems to be in a hurry to wrap up the story and doesn't explain the characters' relationships well. wakanda and steal all the vibranium like I did? no one asked what happened? etc ... I believe that when you make a story you have to tell the various details. Even as mc creates technologies in an easy way, I mean where did the factories go? where did he get the materials? don't stay inside the house take 4 pieces of iron and make the camera this is not minecraft, so the times are high, the characters have minimal interactions, the background of the world is a bit below average because apart from marvel not much is said (one would expect what the god of origin would do and various things instead nothing), mc is intelligent and only undertakes that sometimes he does mindless things that seem forced for the plot My stars: 3 4 2 2 3
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So he rusjed all the first few chaps and then decided tojust copy another novel off of here to set up his relationships with bucky and steve minus the actual good interesting and character building moments of the novel. Overall just lazy copying while adding his own twists in to make it his own character
Imagine telling a leteral god of origin 'I will show you the power of a mortal'. Yeah....thats how dumb the mc is....
I was going to a flight 4 hours and I saw this novel “Wow” i thought this has sone nice reviews and so i downloaded it and went on the flight, the begenning was okayish but then it started plummiting, being on that flight became painful, the character was so shallow and every single character that was a female became part of some wierd harem if i could meet this author I would look straight at them and tell them that their story was one of the most painful expierences of my life. I have read some other marvel fanfiction and it was a chinese novel, even though it was translated it had better grammer then this, every third sentence has a gramatixal error and it was so bad I had to take time to figure out what the author was saying, and I read chinese webnovels! All in all avoid this and to the person who wrote this, I want you to know your work has genuienly made a person suffer.
This is so good I love it 🥰 so much wo************************************************************************************************wwwww
This started out a bit irregular and mc seemed like a scum but the author improved it a lot after ch15 or so.So continue this,don’t drop and improve more author.
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i read your story in a flash so to speak or better yet the 19 chapter you have posted and i liked it very much keep up the good ............
Good book and don't drop it. It is your first book so let it surf for lets say at least 150 chapter after that you can change flow but at least let it surf for 150 chapters or complete a world it that.
Good grammer not many mistakes and not very long chapters loved it.waiting for the arcs to released. What would be the first world world instead of mcu make it mha it would be morefun but at the end you have the book.
mc is a idiot he wished for a talking system and then a partner what a way to waste a wish ________________________________________________________________________________
why didnt you name this alcohol deliveryman like bruh so stupid and ima niopppppppppp the heck out of here [img=coins] [img=coins][img=coins]
Argh its already over!!! This is one of the best marvel fics it's up there with burnable's post apocalyptic potter in a parallel universe. 👍🏽