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Thanks author san for the wonderful and exciting journey through your Novel !! Is was a good read and I hope the next Novel does the same justice of delivering The Amazing content of MCs journey !!! 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺
Broken grammar, when reading, the flow of words is constantly broken. it is nothing like the fanfic he based it off of, except the copying ability. It's more like a gag-comic as he has a companion he suddenly forgets about, then adopts a child and soon becomes an obsessed big brother figure, it's just bad. But the fanfic it's based off of, is a 10/10*
Billions of women to choose from and he chooses take the one person Captain America loved. Would have fine if he showed interest before Steve but he didn't.
I’m actually at chap 6 and if ever i didn’t like the chapters in the future i still not regret giving these a 5Star——______—___________________
I am liking it so far. Dude keep writing and don't mind the hate comments. I have to fill the word count, is it over yet, not now, come on it should be over. It is! then bye
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i was force to rate it like i dont want it or anything. hehe joke aside as i read the story it is good but needed some improvedment like the writing quality and some others . i like how the author interact and take some suggestion . keep up and keep improving .
So he rusjed all the first few chaps and then decided tojust copy another novel off of here to set up his relationships with bucky and steve minus the actual good interesting and character building moments of the novel. Overall just lazy copying while adding his own twists in to make it his own character
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I'm giving it a low rating based on my feel of the way it is written. After reading until the Invasion chapter, everything is like a narrative. Its bland, and felt rushed. Still good job for trying and sharing your work.
Its an ok story, the grammar isnt very good and the character development is almost nonexistent. the author should really invest in grammarly to help with his sentence structure and grammar issues.
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I approve of this fanfic, this is what I need ,cuz I'm different. Besides this, it's pretty good till what I've read, the chapter updates are stable....so? Read this NOW! Will leave you guys with this ... "Coochie Man"
amazing fanfiction i really liked it harem is good life is godd everything is good a little fast paced but hey not everything can be so perfect
bro waiting for more chapters .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is nice story... although start is slow but with progress it gets interesting... Skill assimilation cheat system cheat and best one is a partner cheat who's daughter or origin.
ネタバレを明かすI don't know if anyone other than me noticed this but as far as I read this novel it has a lot of things in common to another fanfic in webnovel named "I am in Marvel" but not all but copy and story it is almost same I think......... I don't know whether this is my imagination or not but I think you guys should check whether it's just my imagination or not (In my opinion this fanfic is almost a copy with some more things (wishes, travel) that that novel [*I am in MARVEL* ] but that novel doesn't have travel powers)
This is a good story can you use Grammarly and go back over your work for errors. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. Great potential, please don't let the main character grow too fast, it messes up a lot of stories. If you fix the grammar and keep the pacing not too fast (possibly slow it down) this will be a wonderful story. Are you going to give the mc one bloodline or multiple, and how long do you plan this story to last?
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This started out a bit irregular and mc seemed like a scum but the author improved it a lot after ch15 or so.So continue this,don’t drop and improve more author.
I loved all the characters and while hd was super op he still had some problems. which is why I'll keep reading your books. 📚 📖 📙 📘 🎒..
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Thanks author san for the wonderful and exciting journey through your Novel !! Is was a good read and I hope the next Novel does the same justice of delivering The Amazing content of MCs journey !!! 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺
Broken grammar, when reading, the flow of words is constantly broken. it is nothing like the fanfic he based it off of, except the copying ability. It's more like a gag-comic as he has a companion he suddenly forgets about, then adopts a child and soon becomes an obsessed big brother figure, it's just bad. But the fanfic it's based off of, is a 10/10*
Billions of women to choose from and he chooses take the one person Captain America loved. Would have fine if he showed interest before Steve but he didn't.
I’m actually at chap 6 and if ever i didn’t like the chapters in the future i still not regret giving these a 5Star——______—___________________
I am liking it so far. Dude keep writing and don't mind the hate comments. I have to fill the word count, is it over yet, not now, come on it should be over. It is! then bye
Why not have it place in the fanfic section [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
i was force to rate it like i dont want it or anything. hehe joke aside as i read the story it is good but needed some improvedment like the writing quality and some others . i like how the author interact and take some suggestion . keep up and keep improving .
So he rusjed all the first few chaps and then decided tojust copy another novel off of here to set up his relationships with bucky and steve minus the actual good interesting and character building moments of the novel. Overall just lazy copying while adding his own twists in to make it his own character
Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
Pretty good story. I recommend you read it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm giving it a low rating based on my feel of the way it is written. After reading until the Invasion chapter, everything is like a narrative. Its bland, and felt rushed. Still good job for trying and sharing your work.
Its an ok story, the grammar isnt very good and the character development is almost nonexistent. the author should really invest in grammarly to help with his sentence structure and grammar issues.
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Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
I approve of this fanfic, this is what I need ,cuz I'm different. Besides this, it's pretty good till what I've read, the chapter updates are stable....so? Read this NOW! Will leave you guys with this ... "Coochie Man"
amazing fanfiction i really liked it harem is good life is godd everything is good a little fast paced but hey not everything can be so perfect
bro waiting for more chapters .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is nice story... although start is slow but with progress it gets interesting... Skill assimilation cheat system cheat and best one is a partner cheat who's daughter or origin.
ネタバレを明かすI don't know if anyone other than me noticed this but as far as I read this novel it has a lot of things in common to another fanfic in webnovel named "I am in Marvel" but not all but copy and story it is almost same I think......... I don't know whether this is my imagination or not but I think you guys should check whether it's just my imagination or not (In my opinion this fanfic is almost a copy with some more things (wishes, travel) that that novel [*I am in MARVEL* ] but that novel doesn't have travel powers)
This is a good story can you use Grammarly and go back over your work for errors. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. Great potential, please don't let the main character grow too fast, it messes up a lot of stories. If you fix the grammar and keep the pacing not too fast (possibly slow it down) this will be a wonderful story. Are you going to give the mc one bloodline or multiple, and how long do you plan this story to last?
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This started out a bit irregular and mc seemed like a scum but the author improved it a lot after ch15 or so.So continue this,don’t drop and improve more author.
I loved all the characters and while hd was super op he still had some problems. which is why I'll keep reading your books. 📚 📖 📙 📘 🎒..