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Me pareció bien el fanfic aunque el final me pareció muy apresurado considero que pudo haber tenido un mejor final aparte de eso me pareció muy bueno y lo recomendaría para que más los leyeran
This is an insult to all intelligent life everywhere. I can only console myself with the idea that just as there is stupidly smart people ike hawking and einstein there must be people so stupid they don't even resemble human. But I don't think even a person that is as stupid as both hawking and einstein are smart would be able to write this and think it was not only worth uploading a single chapter let alone over 100. the fact that people liked this is making me think that maybe eugenics wasn't such a bad idea.
So you are telling me this guy has a devil fruit that allows him to change everything about himself in any way… AND THIS GUY WANTS TO BECOME A SWORDSMAN!?!?!? BRO IS BASICALLY WOLVERINE, MAHITO, KAGUYA CLAN, PROTOTYPE, KANEKI, EVERY ZOAN, WITH PERFECT SEMEI KIKAN, AND IMMORTALLITY AT THE SAME TIME!! AND THIS GUY WANTS TO USE A SWORD INSTEAD OF HIS FISTS OR LEGS OR WOLVERINE CLAWS OR A KAGUNE IF HE WANTED, WITH BONE ARMOR?!?!? not to mention power scaling in this novel is basura… on the bright side one of his wishes was infinite willpower…
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props to the author for completing this fic, MC is a pathetic simp that would kowtow to a slave, Timeline errors, wrong facts. There's really nothing about this novel that would make any reader go past 10 chapters yet author completed it. That's something else.
I can't say I didn't enjoy reading this all the way through but what the author did to Hancock and her people was a bit over the top.
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this is an unrealistic and unbelievable story even with the One piece's standards, it lacks the details and the why and the how of things.
I didnt mind the grammar at first but when i started reading chap 50+ it got worse maybe? And its a fan fic and its author choice to write whatever they want but please do make it a bit realistic the mc devil fruit and the conversation is not so realistic make it abit believable The mc devil fruit is legit broken with so many abilities I'd rather the mc have just one ability and a strong one at that.
The ending was something I never could have imagined and the way it all flowed together in perfect harmony as well as giving me a roller coaster of emotion. Overall great story happy to have been able to read such a masterpiece.
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Very bad, seems to me that the mc doesnt rlly plan out his action and the dialogue and writing style is atrocious, it makes scenes that could be fun or interessting and a pain to read. Very rushed story and mc is written kinda like a crack mc or atleast an extremely gary sue mc
hmm, this novel is the worst FF novel I have ever read, there is no sense of adventure, no excitement, there are only bad boys who try to destroy the world and the timeline in the name of justice or change
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No wonder this story has a good overall Review with the many fakes or repeats 63 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,96
Honestly just isn't worth the read. Author severely underestimates the power scale of One Piece, and just all around it's a pretty bad fic. Don't waste your time.
it had the best storyline of any OP-fanfic i have read, and although the writing seems to have some translation errors, it was worth reading through it.
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A writer who has written so ethi g very different fro What other similar fanfics have . A book which is a fulfilling to read and gives us new ideas , a very different ending then what we usually get!
Writing Quality: The writer seems to have a good grasp of the language. Stability of Updates: Updates came often, though not on any set schedule that I could see. Story Development: Very good, but the ending seemed like it was rushed a bit. Character Design: Very good. Lots of cannon and original characters that seemed to work well. World Background: It's One Piece, which is a pretty awesome base, plus he added his own twists and explanations about different aspects of the series that worked well with the story. Overall: A great read. Would recommend it to any One Piece fan.
Amazing story!! Well written story!!! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💪💪💪💪💪💪 It inspired me to write my own fanfic.
I really like this story and I think it was written well. the fact that it's a finished story makes it a better read than must fanfictions. the powers were well done and thought out. really just a great story I liked it a lot.
It's a really solid novel and I think there is only 1 point of critique I can give. This point of critique is the weirdness of the Mc his stamina. One moment it seems as if his stamina will never run out and then the next moment it feels as if the author nerfs his stamina in to the ground and the Mc seems to have trouble breathing which I find weird But still I have to give the author probs for a good novel
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I've read till chapter 26 and I didn't like this fanfic, so I thought to put up a review. Then I found out there is this annoying person who put dozens of five star review, his name is "grigait", so even though this fanfic doesn't deserve a 1 star review I find myself obligated to balance things out.
Me pareció bien el fanfic aunque el final me pareció muy apresurado considero que pudo haber tenido un mejor final aparte de eso me pareció muy bueno y lo recomendaría para que más los leyeran
This is an insult to all intelligent life everywhere. I can only console myself with the idea that just as there is stupidly smart people ike hawking and einstein there must be people so stupid they don't even resemble human. But I don't think even a person that is as stupid as both hawking and einstein are smart would be able to write this and think it was not only worth uploading a single chapter let alone over 100. the fact that people liked this is making me think that maybe eugenics wasn't such a bad idea.
So you are telling me this guy has a devil fruit that allows him to change everything about himself in any way… AND THIS GUY WANTS TO BECOME A SWORDSMAN!?!?!? BRO IS BASICALLY WOLVERINE, MAHITO, KAGUYA CLAN, PROTOTYPE, KANEKI, EVERY ZOAN, WITH PERFECT SEMEI KIKAN, AND IMMORTALLITY AT THE SAME TIME!! AND THIS GUY WANTS TO USE A SWORD INSTEAD OF HIS FISTS OR LEGS OR WOLVERINE CLAWS OR A KAGUNE IF HE WANTED, WITH BONE ARMOR?!?!? not to mention power scaling in this novel is basura… on the bright side one of his wishes was infinite willpower…
ネタバレを明かす props to the author for completing this fic, MC is a pathetic simp that would kowtow to a slave, Timeline errors, wrong facts. There's really nothing about this novel that would make any reader go past 10 chapters yet author completed it. That's something else.
I can't say I didn't enjoy reading this all the way through but what the author did to Hancock and her people was a bit over the top.
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this is an unrealistic and unbelievable story even with the One piece's standards, it lacks the details and the why and the how of things.
I didnt mind the grammar at first but when i started reading chap 50+ it got worse maybe? And its a fan fic and its author choice to write whatever they want but please do make it a bit realistic the mc devil fruit and the conversation is not so realistic make it abit believable The mc devil fruit is legit broken with so many abilities I'd rather the mc have just one ability and a strong one at that.
The ending was something I never could have imagined and the way it all flowed together in perfect harmony as well as giving me a roller coaster of emotion. Overall great story happy to have been able to read such a masterpiece.
ネタバレを明かす Very bad, seems to me that the mc doesnt rlly plan out his action and the dialogue and writing style is atrocious, it makes scenes that could be fun or interessting and a pain to read. Very rushed story and mc is written kinda like a crack mc or atleast an extremely gary sue mc
hmm, this novel is the worst FF novel I have ever read, there is no sense of adventure, no excitement, there are only bad boys who try to destroy the world and the timeline in the name of justice or change
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ネタバレを明かす No wonder this story has a good overall Review with the many fakes or repeats 63 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,9663 213,96
Honestly just isn't worth the read. Author severely underestimates the power scale of One Piece, and just all around it's a pretty bad fic. Don't waste your time.
it had the best storyline of any OP-fanfic i have read, and although the writing seems to have some translation errors, it was worth reading through it.
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Muito obrigado pela essa história maravilhosa você fes um ótimo trabalho parabéns a história é bem centralizada bem feita bem explicativa obrigado pela história incrível 👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
A writer who has written so ethi g very different fro What other similar fanfics have . A book which is a fulfilling to read and gives us new ideas , a very different ending then what we usually get!
Writing Quality: The writer seems to have a good grasp of the language. Stability of Updates: Updates came often, though not on any set schedule that I could see. Story Development: Very good, but the ending seemed like it was rushed a bit. Character Design: Very good. Lots of cannon and original characters that seemed to work well. World Background: It's One Piece, which is a pretty awesome base, plus he added his own twists and explanations about different aspects of the series that worked well with the story. Overall: A great read. Would recommend it to any One Piece fan.
Amazing story!! Well written story!!! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💪💪💪💪💪💪 It inspired me to write my own fanfic.
I really like this story and I think it was written well. the fact that it's a finished story makes it a better read than must fanfictions. the powers were well done and thought out. really just a great story I liked it a lot.
It's a really solid novel and I think there is only 1 point of critique I can give. This point of critique is the weirdness of the Mc his stamina. One moment it seems as if his stamina will never run out and then the next moment it feels as if the author nerfs his stamina in to the ground and the Mc seems to have trouble breathing which I find weird But still I have to give the author probs for a good novel
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I've read till chapter 26 and I didn't like this fanfic, so I thought to put up a review. Then I found out there is this annoying person who put dozens of five star review, his name is "grigait", so even though this fanfic doesn't deserve a 1 star review I find myself obligated to balance things out.