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Two girls who have been transmigrated inside the manhwa that they both love to read because of an eclipse, one has an innocent personality, and the other one has a wild and chill part. These two genuine girls are best friends since birth, but what will happen if her best friend becomes her enemy a villainous, and the other becomes a heroine to the story. What would these two genuine girls face through their new life journey ahead?
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Wow! This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! The author has talent, skills, and a hard worker. This will fare well in the future! Kudos and Congrats! May your novel prosper in the future! ......from review swap.
Story progression is good though I also recommend to indicate more properly when she flashbacks hehe it's a bit confusing but great story so far!! Keep updating author!
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Finally here's my review! Well although I only read until chapter 52 I will continue to read soon : ) The only reason this ain't getting a five star review is because of the writing quality and the world background that sometimes is unclear. That's all I have of complains but the rest is pretty good. Vendia x Mary
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The story is paced very well and the concept is very fresh and fun. The grammar needs a bit of improvement but I can't hate on that. So overall I'd give it a five. Can't wait for more chapters.
it is honestly bad. I didn't finish it but, its too fast, and confusing, it doesn't fully explain everything, and Alfa's character is in my opinion shit. all she does is complain. it's boring as ****. good idea but bad execution.
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A very nice story with a solid plot. It has enough intrigue to pull you in from just reading the synopsis. There are little to no grammatical errors making this a very easy read. Amazing work author! [img=recommend]
I'm sad author. I wrote a review yesterday with all my heart and either it got bugged or you deleted it accidentally (I hope former). I don't have it in me to write it again but as thanks for reading your story all this time I'm leaving this 5 star rating again. Please let this be saved.
Have only read up to ch 13 but have already gotten the general gist of everything I need to know and tbh I don't think the characters are that great.... The Villainess is fine I actually like her character and all the anxietys they have.... Though they're a bit of an idiot.... The Heroine on the other hand is an insufferable asshole who on there first major scene basically attempts to rape two noble girls and from what I can tell we're supposed to find that funny.... What Makes it even more annoying is they nonstop complain and treat everyone like trash and their whole excuse for all of there behaviours is that they suffer from slight anger issues and is a lesbian.... Sure I read some ****ed up novels but the way this made itself out to be a normal-ish reincarnation romance with a best friends to partners theme and then does something like that really confuses me and pushes me away from reading anymore... Wtf is this trying to be.... tbh i hope the villainess cuts ties with the rapey heroine and it goes a different route with her starting to crush on someone else.... This parallel between the villainess gentle and fragile personality and the heroines rapey and unstable personality is probably on purpose to be ironic but still it's already becoming less of a romance and more of a smut with a tragedy tag...
Grammar. pretty much said before. gotta work on that. I can tell you're a new writer, but grammar needs a lot of work. Minor mistakes are ok, but there are too many.
Author, do you know the anime Fushigi Yuugi? It somehow has similarity to it. I think you are doing well so far. Characters are relatable and plot is quite interesting. I would suggest to proofread and do some line editting. Keep on writing and I wish you all the best. 🤗👍
Interesting premise, reminds me of a korean show called W, sort of similar to that. I like your emotional intricacies and wish you the best on your book author. Though there can be some improvements on your grammatical and punctuation errors. Otherwise, nice job!
I like this story so much so far! I love stories that take their characters into novels, and the characters seem very multi-dimensional. With such a wide variety of characters, it's easy to stay interested. It's easy enough to tell what the author is saying, even to an only-english speaker like myself. Keep it up, and keep honing your style! <3
This is actually a very nice story. The setting is well described and you can see that the author put much thought into the characters. Aside from a few edits here and there, I have nothing to comment on the writing quality. Keep up the good work, author!
I rate you again improve more baby love you hahaha okay lets try be calm at all times and just dont be pressure also enjoy your writing and study hard about some things cause we need to improve more and also. I hope they enjoy our story your my first baby lets take this road slowly dont tress out yourself baby take it easy. okay bye Im talking to myself hahaah and my book hahaha.
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It is pretty good and it exudes a Yuri vibe to me as I read, not much too say since I'm used to reading similar writings but this novel is the first I've read with a vibe shouting Yuri at me, making me seemingly fanboy at it, good job author, the rate I gave is 4.8 the 0.2 is because I saw some words in their wrong forms but those won't ruin the novel and won't even be noticed by many unless they're spelling and grammar Nazis.