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I'll sum the author up with a single image because of how much he seems to like homosexual mental illness
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In this fanfic you can expect a ton load of illogical events, if this is still your cup of tea go for it.
Just the first chapter is enough for anyone with a good brain to realize that the MC is a fool and that the author doesn't really understand the intricacies of human society. This kind of combination will irritate mature readers to no end.
Ntr is automatic 1 star from me and if you don’t believe me just check the reviews that aren’t blowing the author or his alt accounts even his other stories are pretty bad like below 3 star at best
A good novel, the only bad thing I can say about this novel is that the ending is a bit long and sometimes it seems that the novel is not very clear where it is going, however it remains entertaining throughout its duration and I highly recommend it.
why are u trying to force a relationship with Ciri while making every other girl look manipulative it seems that either u don't listen to the words of ur readers or just don't care to be honest the Fanfic was good before the dark souls and absolver arks after that tho the fanfic just went down the Mc turns from Cruel sadistic to naive acting like he's innocent when he hasn't killed people and caused needless death where ever goes and he's dumb and hypocritical and Submissive weak willed and likes giving him self the green hat and the story just seems unplanned or all over the place or it doesn't feels like it has proper structure
Una buena historia, bien diseñada y con momentos divertidas y buenas peleas. Tenia cierta tendencia a usar recursos desconocidos y no explicarlos adecuadamente, como los mundos mas desconocidos, por lo que hay buscarlo por cuenta propia. En general, no esta mal. Un poco sosa pero se lee bien.
stupid author for ruining it on Harry Potter. just to mix Ciri in it this can rule Harry Potter worl easily when he was done on Dark souls Jesus Christ waste of the fanfiction.
Author pls. come back! i need more of this chapters! you are free to travel to any world you want all we want is you take us with you through this story!🙏
I'll be honest this is one of the best fanfictions/novels I've ever read. Not only is the author original with his plots and story but also manages to include a sense of lighthearteness an witiness that I sorely miss in many other storys on this platform. He also manages to keep his writing quality on a suberb level and doesn't drop in the middle. Lastly is the amount and continuity something rarely seen. Because of all this: props to the author
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El fanfic mas completo que he leído, no falta en nada, mi unica recomendació es jugar o saberse la historia de dark souls(preferiblemente jugar así le agarras mas cariño a los personajes) ya que esa parte es tediosa o así lo vi yo cuando no habia jugado el juego y tampoco me sabia el lore de dark souls
As far as I can say, this novel had the potential to become something really, really great. Good developments, interesting mixes between the different works, and nice character building. Then... the author tried to force everything that is frowned or ignored by most otaku people into the 'romance' of the novel. Result? -The worst Ciri to ever exist, she being no more than a utterly useless gold-digger incapable of doing anything by herself right and still grumbling about the MC -Simp and Cuck MC that managed to ignore NUMEROUS girls far better than Ciri or no reason other than the author forcing the 'romance' for hundreds of chapters, only to get NTRED by a girl that wanted to include herself in their relationship... yes, he got cucked by someoe that wanted him. Ridiculous -Every female character that displayed signs of affection or love for the MC became background... after all, if they appear for more than one paragraph per arc, then the author's beloved 'Ciri' will have no place in the work. Simply put, a great novel as long as you can ignore the truckload of trash forced by the author to force his distorted view of romance kk
This spelling is inconsistent however the grammar isn’t , I would recommend putting it through an editing software. The character integration is good my biggest complaint is in the last half with the stupid sexist period blaming.
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The novel began with an amazing pace, the start with the training, then going to the world of Absolver was okay, but after going to DarkSouls the quality went downhill.
It was amazing at the start buy then author sent MC to absolver world Vol.2 Got a bit boring but sure read those 20ish chapters then Mc goes to DarkSouls world Vol.3 and stays there for like 200 chapters,could only read a bit more than half of it, very boring and repetitive, so i skipped for the next hoping Mc would go back but no he went Harry potter vol.4, and honestly reading Vol.4 doesn't seem like I've missed much in Vol.3 as Mc staying there feels extremely forced, he should have able to easily deal with the problems using brute force then go back but no, he stays there to learn their magic for like 250 chapters.... Not gonna read skipping this Vol too maybe it gets better as next is Witcher world...but honestly feel like dropping😓. Would have been better if Author didn't drag these arcs this much the Absolver was sufficient length, heck even 70-100chaps would have been ok. But 200+is too much.Mc spent more time outside than he did in Witcher world. He is basically as strong as a god in harry potter world but is attending Hogwarts 😒😒
Was very interesting to read. Never knew of the lore for the Witcher so this was cool to read.
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The problem with this story is not with really any issues with the writing or plot which is both great. The problem is the harem and the mistake that every author makes for some reason which is not harem itself but making half the story revolve around it later in the story he starts to get a whole bunch of girls that follow him around to each world and each are a cheap carbon copy of the genuine character so it just devolves to this bad wuxia novel.
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The book’s really good. the English is solid apart from some minor slip ups, the books completed, the development of the Mc and story are pretty decent, most of the characters feel as if they add something to the story, and the author knows the worlds that the mc goes to enough to construct a compelling basis for the story (unlike some un-named rather terrible authors). I would recommend this quite easily to a lot of people. If you were thinking of reading it do so it’s not like your wasting your time any less with a different read.
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Well written characters and superb worldbuilding. Highly recommend. I liked the writing fornat for the dialog, Geralt "Words" Reima "Words" It makes it easy to keep track of who's talking when, especially with so many characters in some scenes.
honestly... I'm all for city building and I love novels/fanfics about it. but with this you straight forced it on him. like you forced it into being a city builder but at least in steel waste it was good quality and didn't feel forced honestly the only reason I kept reading was for solaire.(I actually really liked the dark souls stuff but HP ruined it) but even then apparently solaire was the first born of lord gwyn here even though the first born of gwyn was the nameless king the god of war. infact the sunbro's literally worship nameless king.
I liked it over all,definitely a good read,main issue I had was that mc got to be to op.i mean I guess that is kinda that point? But he can just up smite pretty much everyone on own with ease everyone else is just kinda there,y know?but like I said still very much enjoyed the novel.
I'll sum the author up with a single image because of how much he seems to like homosexual mental illness
ntr 🤢🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
In this fanfic you can expect a ton load of illogical events, if this is still your cup of tea go for it.
Just the first chapter is enough for anyone with a good brain to realize that the MC is a fool and that the author doesn't really understand the intricacies of human society. This kind of combination will irritate mature readers to no end.
Ntr is automatic 1 star from me and if you don’t believe me just check the reviews that aren’t blowing the author or his alt accounts even his other stories are pretty bad like below 3 star at best
A good novel, the only bad thing I can say about this novel is that the ending is a bit long and sometimes it seems that the novel is not very clear where it is going, however it remains entertaining throughout its duration and I highly recommend it.
why are u trying to force a relationship with Ciri while making every other girl look manipulative it seems that either u don't listen to the words of ur readers or just don't care to be honest the Fanfic was good before the dark souls and absolver arks after that tho the fanfic just went down the Mc turns from Cruel sadistic to naive acting like he's innocent when he hasn't killed people and caused needless death where ever goes and he's dumb and hypocritical and Submissive weak willed and likes giving him self the green hat and the story just seems unplanned or all over the place or it doesn't feels like it has proper structure
Una buena historia, bien diseñada y con momentos divertidas y buenas peleas. Tenia cierta tendencia a usar recursos desconocidos y no explicarlos adecuadamente, como los mundos mas desconocidos, por lo que hay buscarlo por cuenta propia. En general, no esta mal. Un poco sosa pero se lee bien.
stupid author for ruining it on Harry Potter. just to mix Ciri in it this can rule Harry Potter worl easily when he was done on Dark souls Jesus Christ waste of the fanfiction.
Author pls. come back! i need more of this chapters! you are free to travel to any world you want all we want is you take us with you through this story!🙏
I'll be honest this is one of the best fanfictions/novels I've ever read. Not only is the author original with his plots and story but also manages to include a sense of lighthearteness an witiness that I sorely miss in many other storys on this platform. He also manages to keep his writing quality on a suberb level and doesn't drop in the middle. Lastly is the amount and continuity something rarely seen. Because of all this: props to the author
pourquoi the witcher si tu n'es pas dedans [img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle]
El fanfic mas completo que he leído, no falta en nada, mi unica recomendació es jugar o saberse la historia de dark souls(preferiblemente jugar así le agarras mas cariño a los personajes) ya que esa parte es tediosa o así lo vi yo cuando no habia jugado el juego y tampoco me sabia el lore de dark souls
As far as I can say, this novel had the potential to become something really, really great. Good developments, interesting mixes between the different works, and nice character building. Then... the author tried to force everything that is frowned or ignored by most otaku people into the 'romance' of the novel. Result? -The worst Ciri to ever exist, she being no more than a utterly useless gold-digger incapable of doing anything by herself right and still grumbling about the MC -Simp and Cuck MC that managed to ignore NUMEROUS girls far better than Ciri or no reason other than the author forcing the 'romance' for hundreds of chapters, only to get NTRED by a girl that wanted to include herself in their relationship... yes, he got cucked by someoe that wanted him. Ridiculous -Every female character that displayed signs of affection or love for the MC became background... after all, if they appear for more than one paragraph per arc, then the author's beloved 'Ciri' will have no place in the work. Simply put, a great novel as long as you can ignore the truckload of trash forced by the author to force his distorted view of romance kk
This spelling is inconsistent however the grammar isn’t , I would recommend putting it through an editing software. The character integration is good my biggest complaint is in the last half with the stupid sexist period blaming.
ネタバレを明かす The novel began with an amazing pace, the start with the training, then going to the world of Absolver was okay, but after going to DarkSouls the quality went downhill.
It was amazing at the start buy then author sent MC to absolver world Vol.2 Got a bit boring but sure read those 20ish chapters then Mc goes to DarkSouls world Vol.3 and stays there for like 200 chapters,could only read a bit more than half of it, very boring and repetitive, so i skipped for the next hoping Mc would go back but no he went Harry potter vol.4, and honestly reading Vol.4 doesn't seem like I've missed much in Vol.3 as Mc staying there feels extremely forced, he should have able to easily deal with the problems using brute force then go back but no, he stays there to learn their magic for like 250 chapters.... Not gonna read skipping this Vol too maybe it gets better as next is Witcher world...but honestly feel like dropping😓. Would have been better if Author didn't drag these arcs this much the Absolver was sufficient length, heck even 70-100chaps would have been ok. But 200+is too much.Mc spent more time outside than he did in Witcher world. He is basically as strong as a god in harry potter world but is attending Hogwarts 😒😒
Was very interesting to read. Never knew of the lore for the Witcher so this was cool to read.
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The problem with this story is not with really any issues with the writing or plot which is both great. The problem is the harem and the mistake that every author makes for some reason which is not harem itself but making half the story revolve around it later in the story he starts to get a whole bunch of girls that follow him around to each world and each are a cheap carbon copy of the genuine character so it just devolves to this bad wuxia novel.
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The book’s really good. the English is solid apart from some minor slip ups, the books completed, the development of the Mc and story are pretty decent, most of the characters feel as if they add something to the story, and the author knows the worlds that the mc goes to enough to construct a compelling basis for the story (unlike some un-named rather terrible authors). I would recommend this quite easily to a lot of people. If you were thinking of reading it do so it’s not like your wasting your time any less with a different read.
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Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Well written characters and superb worldbuilding. Highly recommend. I liked the writing fornat for the dialog, Geralt "Words" Reima "Words" It makes it easy to keep track of who's talking when, especially with so many characters in some scenes.
honestly... I'm all for city building and I love novels/fanfics about it. but with this you straight forced it on him. like you forced it into being a city builder but at least in steel waste it was good quality and didn't feel forced honestly the only reason I kept reading was for solaire.(I actually really liked the dark souls stuff but HP ruined it) but even then apparently solaire was the first born of lord gwyn here even though the first born of gwyn was the nameless king the god of war. infact the sunbro's literally worship nameless king.
I liked it over all,definitely a good read,main issue I had was that mc got to be to op.i mean I guess that is kinda that point? But he can just up smite pretty much everyone on own with ease everyone else is just kinda there,y know?but like I said still very much enjoyed the novel.