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COMPLETED!
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A year ago Raine was discharged from mental institution and had to live in the orphanage. It wasn't the best place. At least not for someone like her.
Until one faithful night she met him.
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He stopped the car.
The clutched on the blanket tightened as Raine wonder if she did something wrong. She could feel it when Torak reached out his hand at her.
Will he hit me? Raine shivered with that thought.
Torak pulled back the hoodie off her head and gently tucked her hair behind her ear.
"Don't." He said firmly, "I want to see you, don't hide yourself…"
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“The spirit of the guardian angel will breathe new life into human child. Three guardian angels will be born into terrestrial world once again and the three of you will be their protectors.”
“Protectors!!?” Jedrek snapped. In the end, he stopped walking and turned his back to look at the moon goddess from far distance away, his eyes glistening red with anger. His wolf was livid.
“Why do you think we will help?” Kace asked while narrowing his black obsidian eyes, his wolf took control of him. He was the youngest among the three and the less temperamental among them.
The three of them were cursed by Selene because of their ferocious action to gain supreme power and authority.
The moon goddess didn’t bless them with a mate as a punishment of their atrocious way and forced them to involve in this deadly war with the demons.
“You will turn us into a slave for those sickly creatures!?” Torak asked incredulously. “Aren’t you afraid that we will snap them into two?”
The guardian angel was so fragile and they as lycanthropes didn’t appreciate the weaknesses.
“No, you will not.” Selene said patiently. “You will not be their slave nor hurt them, you will cherish them in every way possible.”
Jedrek laughed menacingly upon hearing this, they didn’t care about the resurrected of the beast, once they crossed their territory, with or without the guardian angel he would tear their body apart. “I will be the last person they will see, once I find them.” He was referring to both the guardian angel and the demon.
But, the next voice from Selene was laced with mirth when she spoke.
“You will not hurt your mate.”
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Session 1 (chapter 1 - 394) : Torak Donovan - Raine (completed).
Session 2 (chapter 395 - 628) : Kace Donovan - Hope (completed)
Session 3 (chapter 629 - 1083) : Jedrek Donovan - Lilac (completed)
Session 4 (chapter 1084 - on going) : Side Stories
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This is a werewolf story and of course a fantasy! Since everybody has their own version of the way supernatural life, here I am trying to write mine.
If you have read other werewolf stories, you will be aware there are similarities and differences.
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***Caution!
English is not my first language, so there is a possibility that you will find grammatical error (I didn't do it intentionally though), if it makes you uncomfortable, please let me know so I can fix it.
*You have been warned ^^
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レビューを書くIt is very interesting story. Very different from normal warewolf stories Story developed quite well, don't be prejudice Must try to read 3-4 chapter.. Must try
This story left me in disbelief and it's too bad because it started good and I got hooked up. Unfortunately, Jedrek/Lilac couple was left for the end, and the sour aftertaste of their story overshadowed everything good that happened before that. Jedrek is a werewolf and he should feel the mate bond, look at Lilac like she is his Goddess, and fight for Lilac's affection, yet it turned the other way around. Jedrek was cruel, selfish, and indecisive, thinking only about his first love (aka Serafina), while keeping Lilac in the background. Jedrek killed Lilac when she was a baby (literally), and then he killed Lilac again when he held Seraphina in his arms and acted lovey-dovey right in front of Lilac! And in between those two, he tortured Lilac physically and mentally. What kind of a mate does that? The story would be more satisfying if Jedrek suffered until eternity for what he had done and that he found Lilac after the war happy with a man who knows how to love her, but noooooo.... Jedrek got his happy ending because Lilac forgave him. AGAIN! I mean, Lilac was supposed to be a sassy and powerful guardian angel, yet she ended up being absolutely submissive to the point of allowing Jedrek to return to her after everything he did. As a non-werewolf, Lilac didn't feel the mate bond. Why did she fall in love with her murderer/abuser? Would Jedrek long for Lilac after the war if Serafina didn't die? Why did he realize that Lilac exists only after he lost Serafina? I can forgive Jedrek many things, but it's unforgivable how he hurt Lilac AFTER they mated and he announced to everyone that Lilac is his queen. As her mate, Jedrek was supposed to feel her pain, heartbreak, betrayal... but he didn't and he ended up going to Serafina repeatedly (he is a perfect example of a cheating husband). I don't care if he jumped into a volcano or in outer space, and I don't care if he understood how much he hurt Lilac. It came too late, and nothing can fix the wrongs he did. That said, the first two stories are good.
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Jedrek story is a complete disaster. Firstly the story was about Jedrek/Lilac but the author forget to write about their love story instead she write more about Jedrek/ Serafina and suddenly Serafina died so that Jedrek and Lilac could be together. I mean what kind of rubbish story is this. The author should realise that we now live in modern world where no woman can share her husband with another woman and the way Lilac character has written is very wrong. Through out the book the only thing she is doing is forgave Jedrek wrongdoings and never taking any stand for herself. I regret reading this story.
Nope, I'm done. The first two stories were good but the third story is not good. If you want to read the romance between Jedrek and Lilac, you've lucked out cause there's simply none in the story. Jedrek character was written so poorly. He never gives the vibe of mature man rather he looks more like a immature teenager who doesn't know what he wants in life. So many times he has betrayed Lilac. Cheating is not only physical sexual contact.The most bitter betrayal is giving false hope to someone whose trying to enter your life with pure intentions. To think I was so excited for read Jedrek/ Lilac story and when I could finally read it, it was complete disappointment.
I wanted to write a review after reading the book completely. I agree with the people who were not happy how the third book had ended and jow the story plot was constructed. One thing for sure though, first and second book was awesome, no so much Questions were un-answered but the third book was a mess I would say. Well when I started to read the first one, the begining was kind of awesome between Jedrek and Lilac, I liked there argument a lot and interection. I really loved there bickering, infact there was this attraction between them for a short moment. But than somehow Author completely shifted from Jedrek/Lilac’s story to Jedrek/Serefina story. For the begining though, When serefina first appeared in there life, it was okey because we thought Jedrek needs a closure. But I think and I really believe that Author consciously or subconsciously was biased to Serefina/Jedrek, and he put so much interection and detailed intimacy between them, that Lilac/Jedrek story didnt matter anymore. This third book answered all the questions between Jedrek and Serefina’s love life in detail and didnt leave any place to not ask about there love for each other! But when you read the later part after Serefina’s death, It was written in a way that author just decided to kill Serefina so that Jedrek can be with Lilac, because the story is about Jedrek/Lilac from the begining, but author somehow forgot it in the middle. The ending of this book was so premature that you would have this feeling that author didnt know how to untie all the unanswered questions and knots between Lilac & Jedrek, so it was left to be not written!! As a reader, It was really disappointing to have your favorite story to be destroyed just like that. It was really my favorite book until the later half of the third book. Author lost the charm at the end, i dont know why probably because he/she was too biased towards certain cahracter. Instead of being a creator of a beautiful story, Author actually let readers suffer at the end.
I liked this book right up until it became emotionally abusive. It was a sweet story with a hint of mystery until all of a sudden we have a new character who is mentally abusing the female lead and is just being allowed to because 'it's for her own good. Sorry; that's wrong. I've been there, done that see what it does to people's minds long term. I cant support this book. It's great till chapter 80. The english is broken, but not quite bad enough to have issued understanding. It really is cool but the characters, though most of them are great, a few are just no. Mental abuse and tough love are not synonymous. There is a huge difference and sereaphine is ridiculous.
I love this! But the spelling!!! Its so terrible at times. It makes it extremely hard to read. Not even half way in it and all the wrong spelling is making me hate it and I kinda want to stop reading now. But I will keep on cause the person who wrote it might not understand English well enough or something. Anyway, its a really good book. I've never read one like this yet.
I gave it 1 star just beacuse the story i was most looking forward to was Lilac and all the pain jedrek put her through was not worth it .it would have Been better if lilac would have been killed off and jedrek and serefina lived in regret.. aTleast it would have made sense🙄🙄🙄 ugh i invested so much time inly to get such an big disappointment and lilac character i thought was strong But after reading i just think she Just lets everyone bully her and step on her moves on with it like it didn’t Matter at all .....SUCH A BIG DISAPPOINTMENT😑😑😑😑😑😑
I am highly disappointed by the fact that jedreak is still after sarefina .sorry to say this but I am loosing my interest due to this author 😥.
this werewolf story quite interesting. a quite different from the other that i read. i read a lot of book about vampire and werewolves so i hope this will be different and not boring at all. for me the starter was good but i am looking forward for the female lead character and i hope they will for in love. good author!
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Well, I was finding the story very interesting, until I was really disappointed with book three 😔😔. It doesn't look like I was reading a romance between a wolf and a guardian angel, but rather between a witch and a wolf ... Honestly. I didn't like how the male protagonist continually hurt the young woman, how he betrayed his bond by constantly thinking about the witch, without giving due value to his mate. The love triangle after mating gave me a bad feeling. After all, it was bad enough to see the angel suffer without guilt at the beginning of the story, and after being together, the witch is still in the middle ... It was a big disappointment, I think the angel deserved more, a more loyal companion to her . The witch in that book made me angry 😑😑, I don't know how to explain what I'm feeling. The book I most expected from the three brothers, was my biggest disappointment. (all this is my opinion, of course) Although I cannot deny that the construction of the world creating for history is quite interesting.
ネタバレを明かすAwesome book... Truly captivating and exciting storyline filled with so much intrigues and suspense. Looking forward to reading more updates soon. 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
author ur imagination about this story and the whole plot is too good I love the way u r changing ur writing style and adding more and different emotions . but author there are some points I want u to work on 🤗 1: if ur adding a new problem to there situation I want u to solve it first and then add another problem .I know it doesn't happen in real life but these are fantasy and we want something shooting that can help us to relax adding more and more problems without solution is something thriller but at some point we lost the interacting emotions with the story😣☹️ 2: second I suggest u to show war in less chapters with vivid emotions it will look great cuz expanding chapters with war isn't something readers are chilled with they probably like to read it short and😘🥺 compatable 3: I really love Raphael I want u to make him back in the story with the help of hope .I really cried 2 buckets of tears cuz of this I really hope u will make this happen. 😢😢 and last but not the least 4: I will recommend u to add more skinships between characters like more pda and Plzz make jedrike forgot about safrina ....🙍♀ I am recommending this book to many of my friends and I know I am being selfish 😄but u r the first ever author I am chatting and to be frank I had never read Lycan before hope u will do these changes .I am suggesting u becuz ur one of my favorite author and I myself write poems and some fictions.i am just giving u a little piece of my taste .also I want rain and torak more and more there in traction and pda and skinships they r my favorite couple after all 😍my final exams r coming that's why I want this novel to end soon so that I can stop my wild imagination and can score some good marks.. love u author nim 💜💜
this book is good but is going just too far 🤔😶😶there are repetation of same emotion throughout the chapter ....... I really want u to make an happy end soon plzzzz 😘🤓🥺🥺cuz extending the book may not attract more readers as ur book has already passed 989 chapters
I overall live this novel. It was the first one I opened when I came to webnovel and I feel in love with the story. Thank you so much for an amazing story.
Honestly loved this book so far! The development and plot move nicely. The only issues I have are the grammar making it a little hard to read. In some sentences you are missing words but other than that it's a wonderful book all around!
not your average wetewolf/lycan story at all but it's everything I never knew I needed. I am only now caught up after bingeing 900 some odd chapters and I feel a little lost having to wait for more. at the same time I'm happy to wait because I never want it to end. I've fallen in love with this world and these characters. I've laughed out loud in a crowded room and got crazy looks. I've curled up in my bed and sobbed real tears. This book gives you every single emotion you can imagine. Parts get slow or don't make sense sometimes BUT it all comes together and blows your mind.
Sweet story between a human and warewolf. Different from usually warewolf stories. Must try to read this novel once. First different from that warewolf mate is human But not a normal one recarnation or guardian angel And warewolf is curse Alfa with no mate.. After centuries he met his mate...a human