Reviews of Young Justice: The super soldier by techashi - Webnovel

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4.25

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  • ストーリー展開
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THANORR

hello man you will make a continuation of the new chapters because I like the story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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THANORR

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AdamNovel

Love this story. It is the best young justice fan fic on this site. The MC may be over powered by the wishes but it seems like the author limits how op the charector would be which makes the story more intresting and more engaging of a read. Strongly recommend this novel for a read, the more people that do might have a chance for the author to take it back up.

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WikiLover

I’d say this is a top tier novel worth a read. The MC isn’t really captain America but more of a Tony Stark type character. It’s a little weird in DC considering he basically got 5 wishes and chose to be a very smart peak human, so basically Batman. It’s been dropped so go into this expecting to abruptly stop. Otherwise it’s kind of a good what if scenario you can use to think about how you would’ve done things in the world if you were in a similar situation. Solid 3.5/5

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6ix6ix

I need more superhero stories honestly some of the best you'll find is The Merchant of Death and The Iceman and Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker

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Zac_Davies

The writing is very poor. It is hard to read and I am struggling to get past it to enjoy the admittedly cool storyline underneath. Please work on rewriting the first couple of characters. Cheers

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John1790

Im interested in continuing where you left off. As you concentrate on other things. Contact me at johnny1990.jg@gmail.com. We can go over details.

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John1790

Sucks your dropping it, it's great. I wanted to know if you wouldn't mind handing it off for someone else to continue. I would like that chance.

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Afsoares

I liked this story hoping to like the rebooting ............................................................... ............................................................... ...............................................................

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Lordmoonlight

Can't say I don't like the mc its great and all but what we need are more chapters to see how the story develops to really give an great review but so far I love the story jus not enough chapters

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Deal_With_It

This is one of the best stories I've read on here. Wish there were more chapters. Cap is kinda OP with knowledge of the events of the story but there are characters that have been foreshadowed that seem like they can put up more of a fight.

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HeheDaoist

Please I am hoping that u don't make this into a harem . I mean why is it always a harem. Artemis is good with Barry no change there please.

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Daoist92744

Can you tell us what the update date is for the next chapter? Sksnnsmsmsmsmsmmsmmsmamamammamamamammamamammamamamammamamammamamamamammamamamamamamammamamamamammamamamammamamammamamamamamamamammamammamamamamamamamammamamammamamammamamammamamamammamamammamamamammamamammamamammamamammamamammamamammamamamamamammamammamamamamamamamammammamamqmwmmqmqmammamamammqmqmmqmmqmqmammamamammamamammamamammamammamamamammamamamammamamammamamammamwmwmmwmwmamammamamammamamamammamamamammamamammamamammamamammamamammamamammamamammamamamamammamamammamammamamamammamamamammamamammamamamamamwmamamammamammammamwmwmwmmmwmwmwmmwmwmwmwmwmwmmmammamamamamammammamamqmwwmw

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ElNinoKenji

What a good chapter. It's more entertaining if the team caught Steve and Nyssa. Hahahahaha Captx&#,#*#&#,,##,,#,#,#&#&#&#&#*#*#&#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*$*$*$**$*$*#*

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THANORR

hello man you will make a continuation of the new chapters because I like the story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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THANORR

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AdamNovel

Love this story. It is the best young justice fan fic on this site. The MC may be over powered by the wishes but it seems like the author limits how op the charector would be which makes the story more intresting and more engaging of a read. Strongly recommend this novel for a read, the more people that do might have a chance for the author to take it back up.

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WikiLover

I’d say this is a top tier novel worth a read. The MC isn’t really captain America but more of a Tony Stark type character. It’s a little weird in DC considering he basically got 5 wishes and chose to be a very smart peak human, so basically Batman. It’s been dropped so go into this expecting to abruptly stop. Otherwise it’s kind of a good what if scenario you can use to think about how you would’ve done things in the world if you were in a similar situation. Solid 3.5/5

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6ix6ix

I need more superhero stories honestly some of the best you'll find is The Merchant of Death and The Iceman and Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker

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Zac_Davies

The writing is very poor. It is hard to read and I am struggling to get past it to enjoy the admittedly cool storyline underneath. Please work on rewriting the first couple of characters. Cheers

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John1790

Im interested in continuing where you left off. As you concentrate on other things. Contact me at johnny1990.jg@gmail.com. We can go over details.

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John1790

Sucks your dropping it, it's great. I wanted to know if you wouldn't mind handing it off for someone else to continue. I would like that chance.

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Afsoares

I liked this story hoping to like the rebooting ............................................................... ............................................................... ...............................................................

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Lordmoonlight

Can't say I don't like the mc its great and all but what we need are more chapters to see how the story develops to really give an great review but so far I love the story jus not enough chapters

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Deal_With_It

This is one of the best stories I've read on here. Wish there were more chapters. Cap is kinda OP with knowledge of the events of the story but there are characters that have been foreshadowed that seem like they can put up more of a fight.

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HeheDaoist

Please I am hoping that u don't make this into a harem . I mean why is it always a harem. Artemis is good with Barry no change there please.

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Clown_Of_God

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What a good chapter. It's more entertaining if the team caught Steve and Nyssa. Hahahahaha Captx&#,#*#&#,,##,,#,#,#&#&#&#&#*#*#&#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#**#*#*#*#*#*#*#*$*$*$**$*$*#*

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