WikiLover

This is very good with one caveat. The MC feels almost lifeless. He’s somewhat charming and a little caustic which is nice but it feels like he’s getting dragged along by the plot. He has to participate to get world points so he can travel to a world filled with magic, beautiful women, and large breasts, yet ignores the fact he’s in a world with magic, beautiful women, and large breasts. There are half a dozen women such as Olivia, Angelica, Jilk’s ex fiancée, and the queen who are all beautiful, even tempered, ready for an mc to get them to fall in love with them, and possess large breasts. Despite this he complains constantly and doesn’t bother attempting to court them, almost content to mope, complain, and dream of DxD. I get it, I do, but he should focus on the here and now and let the future come as it will.

This is a story on fanfiction.net, it gets posted there way ahead of here and the author there said he doesn’t post on Webnovel so fuck off you thief.

I mean it’s alright. I could only make it to chapter 22 though before the edge became too much. The rant about not lumping him in with heroes because they’re all pathetic trash who pretend to be good but really are all selfish was like 14 years old emo levels of cringe. I get it since I went through a phase like that but in the end you realize that not everyone is like you and people can be different and have different motivations for their actions. Dumbledore isn’t evil, Batman really is just trying his best, and Uchiha Sasuke wasn’t cool. Sasuke was moody, he whined constantly, and he lived his life with as much self inflicted suffering as possible. Try to find happiness in life, make friends, discover hobbies, and be good to others out of selflessness. Being angry, keeping your head down when you see others suffering, and spending all your time focusing only on yourself is wasting life not being cool.