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this is a pretty great story, the only downside is lack of updates. still can't wait for more....................................................................................................................
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what the **** did I did just read? The main idea behind the story is solid and somewhat original but grammar is disgusting, fight scenes are literally the worst I have ever read, POV jumps around from person to person for literally no reason with no connection between them. MC doesn't introduce himself to others and they just accept the team up and him giving orders to them. This is literally fifth grader's wish fulfillment story
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Having all of those gifts does not make someone a hero, it’s what they do with it that decides whether they’re a hero or a villain. BTW, there’s no point of him being in the young justice team if he already have all knowledge of fighting arts and science. Money and weapons are no longer an issue and certainly not combat prowess.
Definitely added to the story, really a guilty pleasure of mine I freakin love fanfics about DC/Marvel can’t get enough of em! Keep up the grind author :)
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Yo, keep up the good work👍enjoyed reading it and looking forward to more releases😊 Gambateyo🤗 hehehehahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
Nice way of making a marvel kid hero in dc young justice hope he gets enemies like red skull and a lot of unknown things that make the justice league worry about what happened in those ww2 era with wonder woman.
I'm not gonna bore you with details how I talked to God he gave me my wishes like the novels said and they are. 1.supreme knowledge 2.the super soldier serum 3. Captain America's shield made out of vibranium 4. A backstory in this universe 5. An inventory filled with money and materials You win this award you total score is ...1!
Wow! Just wow! Wonderful story. Amazing plot. Awesome Captain America. Long live Author. Lololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololo.
Liked the idea since the character isn't too OP I would like if you would be able to save Kid Flash in season 2 It would be better if it's a Harem
Already loving it!!!!! This is an amazing idea and the MC isnt too overpowered but is smart! Plus young justice! All in all it's awesome !!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ネタバレを明かす this is a pretty great story, the only downside is lack of updates. still can't wait for more....................................................................................................................
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what the **** did I did just read? The main idea behind the story is solid and somewhat original but grammar is disgusting, fight scenes are literally the worst I have ever read, POV jumps around from person to person for literally no reason with no connection between them. MC doesn't introduce himself to others and they just accept the team up and him giving orders to them. This is literally fifth grader's wish fulfillment story
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Having all of those gifts does not make someone a hero, it’s what they do with it that decides whether they’re a hero or a villain. BTW, there’s no point of him being in the young justice team if he already have all knowledge of fighting arts and science. Money and weapons are no longer an issue and certainly not combat prowess.
Definitely added to the story, really a guilty pleasure of mine I freakin love fanfics about DC/Marvel can’t get enough of em! Keep up the grind author :)
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Nice way of making a marvel kid hero in dc young justice hope he gets enemies like red skull and a lot of unknown things that make the justice league worry about what happened in those ww2 era with wonder woman.
I'm not gonna bore you with details how I talked to God he gave me my wishes like the novels said and they are. 1.supreme knowledge 2.the super soldier serum 3. Captain America's shield made out of vibranium 4. A backstory in this universe 5. An inventory filled with money and materials You win this award you total score is ...1!
Wow! Just wow! Wonderful story. Amazing plot. Awesome Captain America. Long live Author. Lololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololo.
Liked the idea since the character isn't too OP I would like if you would be able to save Kid Flash in season 2 It would be better if it's a Harem
Already loving it!!!!! This is an amazing idea and the MC isnt too overpowered but is smart! Plus young justice! All in all it's awesome !!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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