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Just straight up breaks 4th for everything. No idea what’s going on at any time. rip rip riprap ripripritilripriprip ripripritilripriprip ripripritilripriprip
The Story Is Very very very Trash... I dont know this novel comedy is to low... cant make u laught... and what happen with servant make a joke woth author.. this is Gintama ??????????¿¿¿¿¿¿ I dont want to keep fanfic novel like this in ky library
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This novel is well written, although some of the chapters are short, they have a good quality in regards to content, I like the pase of the story since is not rushed... Although right know there a no new chapters, let us hope the author continues... I have not read that many chapters so, if the reason for stoping is written in later chapters, I apologize...
This is a really good story with steady progression and world building and the plots really well done. Although the author owes 106 chapters and had a very inconsistent update schedule.
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The first 7 chapters is just an info dump and I take to go past it. We know absolutely nothing about these characters but they agree breaking the 4th wall every 6 sentences. It just doesn't know what it wants to be
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It’s like a Person imagines a story in their head and just cramped all the information and the story into multiple paragraphs and is really confusing and at the same time very irritating to read. But atleast it has a decent update.
This is crap, that's all I have to say. The words and paragraphs needs more improvements. This novel is not good, but I advice you author to take my criticism positively.
This story has good lore behind the main events of the story and also the MC has a great personality that gives the story a good flare,also the updates are frequent
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Haven't read it, but as a fate franchise fan.. i need to help the author by giving him a great review.. (READ: it was for EXP lol) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Writing Quality: 2 Update Stability: 4 Story Development: 2 Character Design: 3 World Background: 1 I have no idea what is happening for 90% of the story, or who anyone is. I can’t tell if this is due to world background, character design, story development or writing quality. But I guess all of that is really under writing quality.
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Not boring but so boring😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂HAHAHAHA.. S😂😊😂😊😄🤗😄☺😉☺🙁🤗☺🙁☺😉🤐🙁☺😆☺🤗☺🙁🙁☺🙁☺😆☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁🙁😈🙁😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗🤐☺Not boring but so boring😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂HAHAHAHA.. S😂😊😂😊😄🤗😄☺😉☺🙁🤗☺🙁☺😉🤐🙁☺😆☺🤗☺🙁🙁☺🙁☺😆☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁🙁😈🙁😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗🤐☺Not boring but so boring😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂HAHAHAHA.. S😂😊😂😊😄🤗😄☺😉☺🙁🤗☺🙁☺😉🤐🙁☺😆☺🤗☺🙁🙁☺🙁☺😆☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁🙁😈🙁😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗🤐☺
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This is a good fanfic but for me, but the pace is a little to slow but the two mc (hero and sidekick) are enjoyable. Love the combat scenes. For me, the best thing the novel can do with the fate system is to build a team like in Mass Effect 2 with loyalty missions at the end. Plus his Reality Marble can be built (upgraded) only after the trials/ loyalty missions. And at the end, his Noble Phantasma will be something like The King of Conquest's but you summon your trusted Heroic Spirits. A problem that I face with the writing was that if you are not playing FGO or played the games and only watch the anime then you will be confused as f***. Ex with the going to train with a bat loving instructor ark I was searching the wiki like every 2 paragraphs. Hope that you continue to work on the novel. Pls get a Play Pal so a can donate some money because I hate Patron as a company. Tks and good luck.
Everything’s a 5 for me except in writing quality and story development as in the first 13 chapters, i was a little but disoriented on how the sentence format worked and there’s this case of 4th wall breaks that, not only acts as a plot point but also mixes the dialogue, making me confused as to whether its a direct quotation, a thought, or whatnot. Besides that, everything else is good, you got my attention, thank you author-san for making this, and I’ll be waiting for more, because it’s nice.
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Writing Quality 3 Stability of Updates 4 Story Development 2 Character Design 3 World Background 3
I am the soul of my account Exp is my body and coin is my blood I have created countless reviews Unaware of the congruity, Nor aware of the quality Withstood critics to create reviews, waiting for one’s acceptance I have no shame. This is the easiest way. My whole life was Unlimited Useless Previews!
Just straight up breaks 4th for everything. No idea what’s going on at any time. rip rip riprap ripripritilripriprip ripripritilripriprip ripripritilripriprip
The Story Is Very very very Trash... I dont know this novel comedy is to low... cant make u laught... and what happen with servant make a joke woth author.. this is Gintama ??????????¿¿¿¿¿¿ I dont want to keep fanfic novel like this in ky library
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This novel is well written, although some of the chapters are short, they have a good quality in regards to content, I like the pase of the story since is not rushed... Although right know there a no new chapters, let us hope the author continues... I have not read that many chapters so, if the reason for stoping is written in later chapters, I apologize...
This is a really good story with steady progression and world building and the plots really well done. Although the author owes 106 chapters and had a very inconsistent update schedule.
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The first 7 chapters is just an info dump and I take to go past it. We know absolutely nothing about these characters but they agree breaking the 4th wall every 6 sentences. It just doesn't know what it wants to be
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It’s like a Person imagines a story in their head and just cramped all the information and the story into multiple paragraphs and is really confusing and at the same time very irritating to read. But atleast it has a decent update.
This is crap, that's all I have to say. The words and paragraphs needs more improvements. This novel is not good, but I advice you author to take my criticism positively.
This story has good lore behind the main events of the story and also the MC has a great personality that gives the story a good flare,also the updates are frequent
Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp
ネタバレを明かす Running away from the hero arc sucks Running away from the hero arc sucks Running away from the hero arc sucks Running away from the hero arc sucks
Haven't read it, but as a fate franchise fan.. i need to help the author by giving him a great review.. (READ: it was for EXP lol) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Writing Quality: 2 Update Stability: 4 Story Development: 2 Character Design: 3 World Background: 1 I have no idea what is happening for 90% of the story, or who anyone is. I can’t tell if this is due to world background, character design, story development or writing quality. But I guess all of that is really under writing quality.
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ネタバレを明かす Not boring but so boring😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂HAHAHAHA.. S😂😊😂😊😄🤗😄☺😉☺🙁🤗☺🙁☺😉🤐🙁☺😆☺🤗☺🙁🙁☺🙁☺😆☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁🙁😈🙁😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗🤐☺Not boring but so boring😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂HAHAHAHA.. S😂😊😂😊😄🤗😄☺😉☺🙁🤗☺🙁☺😉🤐🙁☺😆☺🤗☺🙁🙁☺🙁☺😆☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁🙁😈🙁😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗🤐☺Not boring but so boring😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂HAHAHAHA.. S😂😊😂😊😄🤗😄☺😉☺🙁🤗☺🙁☺😉🤐🙁☺😆☺🤗☺🙁🙁☺🙁☺😆☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁☺🙁🙁😈🙁😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗😈🤗🤐☺
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This is a good fanfic but for me, but the pace is a little to slow but the two mc (hero and sidekick) are enjoyable. Love the combat scenes. For me, the best thing the novel can do with the fate system is to build a team like in Mass Effect 2 with loyalty missions at the end. Plus his Reality Marble can be built (upgraded) only after the trials/ loyalty missions. And at the end, his Noble Phantasma will be something like The King of Conquest's but you summon your trusted Heroic Spirits. A problem that I face with the writing was that if you are not playing FGO or played the games and only watch the anime then you will be confused as f***. Ex with the going to train with a bat loving instructor ark I was searching the wiki like every 2 paragraphs. Hope that you continue to work on the novel. Pls get a Play Pal so a can donate some money because I hate Patron as a company. Tks and good luck.
Everything’s a 5 for me except in writing quality and story development as in the first 13 chapters, i was a little but disoriented on how the sentence format worked and there’s this case of 4th wall breaks that, not only acts as a plot point but also mixes the dialogue, making me confused as to whether its a direct quotation, a thought, or whatnot. Besides that, everything else is good, you got my attention, thank you author-san for making this, and I’ll be waiting for more, because it’s nice.
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Writing Quality 3 Stability of Updates 4 Story Development 2 Character Design 3 World Background 3