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概要
A 16 year old otaku who was a crazed fan of the Nasuverse was put in a situation of one of the thing listed in all otaku’s wet dreams. The Hero Summoning. Let's follow his growth when he brought something in another world that will become the worst nightmare of all.
Author's Note : I don't own Type-Moon or any of it's works and also I don't own the picture if the owner wants it to be removed I'll gladly do it :3
The Awesome and mischievous yet not so lovable Author's Four Great Maxim(Current):
1.) I'll try to make the character and world building slow yet solid for a more balanced progressive time but will have enough gap and chapter size that will not have the readers feel bored or leave a bad after taste afterwards.(There would be sudden spikes of the author's crazyness but they will be only in short intervals)
2.) I'll make the characters suffer a bit but will leave some holes in their trials and problems they can dig in to without making them become more arrogant and being idiotic and have some deux ex machina prepared somewhere but I won't say it let the readers discover them NYAHAHA~!!
3.) As much as the request for romance and such I won't get to length much about it if it's harem or a perfect couple going on but I'll say this I will try to occupy the reader's taste but still remember the end result may not be much of what you like because your not the only reader the poor and lonely author is gonna try to feed and the builder of the ships is only one man and you guys were the once that will try to steer them anyway~.
4.) Lastly and more important the mischievous yet not so lovable author needs some breather also and will not be shackled and enslaved by the hungry readers Nyahahaha~!! *Cough* I need to still live in real life as much as I want to write I need to continue my own story you know :3 and I still need enough amount of sleep cause I'm a grower ^w^
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Too much useless information. You are breaking the 4th wall too much. Haven’t seen character development and some things happens without reason, I am seriously confused. So I’m done, good luck breaking the 4th wall as you probably already saw my reaction to reading this.
I hate the way you're breaking the forth for world building. Your devaluing worth or importance of a character when you're introducing them. My point is why should we as reader care of your character do in the future or why should we invest in a character if he's worth is none existent. If you're doing it for a gag then is not funny or should I say it's a waste of time.
13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall" 13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall" 13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall" 13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall" 13 chapters still no development.. MC is stuck on explanation and "Breaking the 4th wall"
Author here having a shameless review~ This is my first time writing my own novel so I don't know what to do much so please bear with me~ I plan for this story to have a more balanced world building making the main character strong but not too strong in his own right~ As other's kept on asking Yes it would have a harem....
This is crap, that's all I have to say. The words and paragraphs needs more improvements. This novel is not good, but I advice you author to take my criticism positively.
I am the soul of my account Exp is my body and coin is my blood I have created countless reviews Unaware of the congruity, Nor aware of the quality Withstood critics to create reviews, waiting for one’s acceptance I have no shame. This is the easiest way. My whole life was Unlimited Useless Previews!
Just straight up breaks 4th for everything. No idea what’s going on at any time. rip rip riprap ripripritilripriprip ripripritilripriprip ripripritilripriprip
Good story original, world is original, the MCs name not so heroic for a hero, the chapters are short, good use of the system pretty much how Asians use them. I'm slow at reading. Got addicted to reading manga with the ladies dying and rebirth to noble ladies or noble ladies getting sick and remembering past life or otome games. just like this: the abandoned empress it's 👍.
I hate the way you're breaking the forth for world building. Your devaluing worth or importance of a character when you're introducing them. My point is why should we as reader care of your character do in the future or why should we invest in a character if he's worth is none existent. If you're doing it for a gag then is not funny or should I say it's a waste of time.
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The Story Is Very very very Trash... I dont know this novel comedy is to low... cant make u laught... and what happen with servant make a joke woth author.. this is Gintama ??????????¿¿¿¿¿¿ I dont want to keep fanfic novel like this in ky library
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It’s like a Person imagines a story in their head and just cramped all the information and the story into multiple paragraphs and is really confusing and at the same time very irritating to read. But atleast it has a decent update.
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Everything’s a 5 for me except in writing quality and story development as in the first 13 chapters, i was a little but disoriented on how the sentence format worked and there’s this case of 4th wall breaks that, not only acts as a plot point but also mixes the dialogue, making me confused as to whether its a direct quotation, a thought, or whatnot. Besides that, everything else is good, you got my attention, thank you author-san for making this, and I’ll be waiting for more, because it’s nice.
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Writing Quality: 2 Update Stability: 4 Story Development: 2 Character Design: 3 World Background: 1 I have no idea what is happening for 90% of the story, or who anyone is. I can’t tell if this is due to world background, character design, story development or writing quality. But I guess all of that is really under writing quality.