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Adopted Soldier

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作者: lynerparel

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Raised to be the perfect soldier for battle, Alexander had risen to be the youngest S rank Merc. After attaining the strength he so desired, his adoptive father had forcefully made him leave the battlefield.

Alex unwilling to acknowledge his retirement was given a mission by his adoptive father.

"The mission objective is to find a girl in the public High School you'll be attending and protect her."

Triggered by the words mission objective, Alexander who had a 100% completion rate, accepted the conditions of the mission.

Follow Alexander in his weird, almost comedic high school life.

Alex's father: Hey Alex, did you get to school properly?

Alex: Affirmative, I reached the designated place on time.

Alex's father: So why did you call?

Alex: The target I have picked is situated in classroom 1-B, while I'm in classroom 1-A. Asking permission to threaten the Principal into placing me in classroom 1-B

Alex's father: DENIED!
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*This is the first part and there is a second novel called Adopted Soldier 2: Changing tides.

*The novel is already completed, I'm just adding some after stories.

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Myumara

Kinda story you just wanna snuggle up in bed and read all day long. I didn't use the words literary masterpiece easily, but 200 years into the future this may be the new Romeo & Juliet.

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lynerparel

Hi author here, this is my entry to the writing prompt for the school life theme. Once again hoping for support and for those who are reading Overwhelming Path don't worry not dropping that.

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PixelKid

The story is good and its not rush... I especially like how the MC interacts with his Father... at first I thought that this story will be like his other novel, Overpowered MC with no goal xD... but boy I was wrong... I like this novel very much and also the other novel of yours especially his little wife Ellise personality is really interesting xD

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Crow_OF_Judgement

Another one. This is like those korean k dramas where the mc is a martial artist, gets a job and just can't fit in. There was a guy who was writing things about his uncle being in the army and how he had a bad time adapting. Well, this is going to be harsh, but your uncle probably isn't the same level of genius as the mc here. The mc is a genius only when the author wants it. I don't know if I offend someone but I think even if people are in the army they have common sense. I am not in the army but I can tell that it's not always training and people converse with each other too. If you have read some novels like beauty and the bodyguard you can find 60% things that are similar to that novel here. But keep going.

6yr
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Scarlettbunny

Don't stop writing this! Even if the contest is over keep going this is so freaking cute I am dying from nose bleeds! 😀😀😀😀 I need more Alex and his awkwardness!!! Keep up the good work and don't let anyone bring you down.

6yr
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EnderPL

The first and second chapter gave me hope... and that’s it. There is nothing special about this story. It’s just potential being destroyed. The character with great intelligence can not adapt, the whole story is just boring. Still, respect for trying.

6yr
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F5_Sektleader

Its a nice try to copy the MC of fullmetal panik and the storyline ( even if it is a little bit different). But the story is shallow as if written by EA, and the jockes are as lame as ****ing on youre girlfriend and telling her that it is a sign of love. Its like a kid who trys to play a prank, known by you and it think its funny like hell. Just dont waste youre time, couse no on will give it back to you.

6yr
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Huuurtme

The plot is extremely predictable and for me is boring in every way. Just reading this made me wanna puke, the characters are no joke retarded and overall this **** is hella cliche

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J_Enyl

This novel is a GEM!! I'm telling you guys this is a good one. A very refreshing story compare to other cliche plots. You'll fall in love with this story. A mix of action romance and humor. I intensely recommend to give this novel a shot... Its worth your time. A doting father with masterful skill connections and knowledge! ML with high IQ but low EQ! FL which is most normal with her friends! A rival of FL who is head overheals with the ML! Supporting Characters which are narcissistic, love to fantasize , spontaneous and bubbly! Well there's more to take note of... I'm rooting for this novel thank you Author for sharing this work with us! Please give us more!

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ilsunny

It's so lame that it becomes funny with all the cold jokes. Typical orphan op mc acting like an idiot trying to act normal but always have insane choices like shooting the policemen because they prevent him going home.

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RainbowDuck

It’s an interesting plot and the beginning has a really good start. I quite like the whole idea of the MC being a soldier. So far, it’s amazing and I can’t wait to see how it works out.

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Ars3215Lki

Surprisingly Good. I admit that I kinda didn't liked the first five chapter, but the following chapter really got my interest. Although the MC is a bit OP-ed but still his a bit balance with the unique personality. I could tell what anime this story got its reference from, Full Metal Panic. That's why my expectations for this story is higher as well other fan of this anime. Good Luck!

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Rawr_Kitten

Auto nope because the ml puts 0 thought into who to protect he clearly isnt much of a soldier if he cant even plan and do backround checks on who he plans to protect then pick someone who deserves it

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NoirZero11

One of a kind novel I read so far, it kinda like the mixture of Fullmetal Panic + Gintama and its not harem but kinda like have the possibility of becoming one. My point being.... I FREAKING LOVE IT!!!!

6yr
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Company
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This is great. The writing and plot development leaves much to be desired, having a open background lets you add characters and elements into the story anywhere you want to but it's a bad habit to make. You need to foreshadow and plan more how things can go, stacking events and descriptors one on top of the other does not a story make, that's just bad writing. Even as a comedy you tend to lean towards the more serious side whenever a harsh topic comes up. It's too careless to just change the tone, you have to break the tense atmosphere properly before running with a joke. At times, you corral your character's personality into single sentence or single word statements. If this was purely comedy it's fine but when you mix drama you need to avoid pigeon-holing your characters to stereotypes. This makes them less a person and more like a set piece used to work the scene. You rely too much on light novel tropes who also rely too much on anime tropes. If you're good it works, but like most light novel authors you don't quite realize certain gags work better visually than on text. You should read more wholesome literary comedies or watch more British humor to balance your slapstick with punny wit.

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Hanma_Jack

Amazing novel. Easily better than most translated novels of this genre. It's pretty realistic as well, there are no villains calling MC a "thrash" at every corner and stuff like that. Romance is great, characters are great, both female and male lead. One advice I would give to the author is to actually make this novel short so he could actually finish it. There is no need for 3000 chapters like some translated novels have.

6yr
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Chenglei

Amazing!! In fact if I do say so myself this Novel is better than the previous one!(Overpowering System) This doesn't mean I don't like his previous one though, i'm just saying it's better. Some may say that is sounds exactly like Beauty and the Bodyguard, but trust me it is NOT. Its may be similar but it different at the same time. Also for those who have a family Member in the Army or in some Military position, thid Novel's MC is a total Military Brat, so highly relatable! ~ Over all another Amazing Story by Lynerparel!

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Smirk_

I guess it's a fine novel. That remind me a lot Full Metal Panic that I watched years ago when i was still a kiddo. Some kind of comedy/slice of life/misunderstang/romance. Even though, i didn't read a lot (40 chapters) i think i mostly saw everything than can be shown and in the genre that seem quite easy to guess what will happen/will happen not. A good read to relieve you from some boredom. But I will quickly end my read on it for a single big reason. It's premium since chapter 85, they're more than 200+ chapters. That's way too early, i barely got 20-25 gemstone per day (if i don't forget to check). Not adding the fact, it's not some kind of addictive novel, you read it, you can creep a smile time to time but that's all. That's also why the novel is falling in the ranking again and again the more chapters is going on. I can't check if the quality is going down but i don't think so. Think that's simply because it's a premium original with a lot of chapters and the story isn't addictive enough to throw all your wealth into it. They will be some fun joke and funny moments but you can found these moments in others stuffs without having to sacrifice your read on your favorites novels who are more unique. Wishing still good luck to the author, i think that if he's writing that novel just for his own pleasure. That's perfect. If he's writing it to get a living on it, that's going to be a bit more difficult.

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Lord666Acedia

Gawd and here I was looking for the perfect blend of action and romance Where we're u all my life This novel is phenomenal Lurving every bit of it Lmao Hope u keep the updates stable along with the quality of the chapters I've read soo far Best of luck op =P =2

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BattleLord

This novel is a real gem 💎. In this dystopian modern world, countries war with none mass destruction weapons. The protagonist Alex has grown up on the battlefield to be an S rank mercenary. Due to his father’s injury Alex retires with him to civilian life. The story revolves around Alex’s climatization to high school life and the drama 🎭 of being a teenager. That “drama” includes plenty of combat and action in and out of school, for Alex and the “Mercenary Club” they form.

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Chapter 419: Ambushed 3 years ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    The End and the beginning 6 years ago
  2. 2
    Entering a new school 6 years ago
  3. 3
    A weird meeting 6 years ago
  4. 4
    Classes 6 years ago
  5. 5
    Heading home 6 years ago
  6. 6
    Police Station 6 years ago
  7. 7
    Restart of their first meeting 6 years ago
  8. 8
    Chuunibyou 6 years ago
  9. 9
    Changing for P.E class 6 years ago
  10. 10
    I'm protecting you from UV rays 6 years ago
  11. 11
    Eating Lunch 6 years ago
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    Tennis Match 6 years ago
  13. 13
    Club 6 years ago
  14. 14
    Forming a Circle 6 years ago
  15. 15
    Meeting the Family 6 years ago
  16. 16
    It's her Mother 6 years ago
  17. 17
    Master?! 6 years ago
  18. 18
    Amnesia 6 years ago
  19. 19
    Shadow Mercenaries 6 years ago
  20. 20
    Confused Alex 6 years ago
  21. 21
    Letters 6 years ago
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    Mercenary Circle 6 years ago
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    Student Council President 6 years ago
  24. 24
    Meeting once more 6 years ago
  25. 25
    The Birth of the Mercenary Circle 6 years ago
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    Newspaper Club you are dismissed 6 years ago
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    Sayaka 6 years ago
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    kendo club 6 years ago
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    Ryuuji's Fear 6 years ago
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    Kendo Match 6 years ago
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    Oliver's unexpected skill 6 years ago
  32. 32
    Going Karaoke 6 years ago
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    Karaoke Room 6 years ago
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    An ordinary day 6 years ago
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    Meeting on Sunday 6 years ago
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    Perfect Guy 6 years ago
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    From a circle to a club 6 years ago
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    Welcome Back 6 years ago
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    Maturing... or simply adapting? 6 years ago
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    Meeting in the clubroom 6 years ago
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    Lyner 6 years ago
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    Let's play tag 6 years ago
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    Preparing to play tag with a demon 6 years ago
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    Playing tag with a Demon 6 years ago
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    Two legends fight 6 years ago
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    The end of the game 6 years ago
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    The aftermath of the game 6 years ago
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    Rachel and Alex's shopping date 6 years ago
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    Evangeline contemplating 6 years ago
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    What a cliche... or not 6 years ago
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    Alex's side story: Rank C fighting a Rank A merc. 6 years ago
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    The Mercenary club's thoughts 6 years ago
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    Side Story: Rachel and Saya's talk 6 years ago
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    Poster 6 years ago
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    Looking for New Members 6 years ago
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    New members 6 years ago
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    Kei's worries 6 years ago
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    Gaming Club 6 years ago
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    Meeting the gaming club 6 years ago
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    What did you say? 6 years ago
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    Apologize 6 years ago
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    FPS 6 years ago
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    Playing for the first time 6 years ago
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    Side Story: Oliver's Descent to Chuuni 6 years ago
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    Dan Regius 6 years ago
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    Reunion 6 years ago
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    The Regius Family 6 years ago
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    Rachel and Alex talk part 1 6 years ago
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    Lyner's side story: The birth of a legend 6 years ago
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    Rachel and Alex talk part 2 6 years ago
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    Today is just not my day 6 years ago
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    Rescue Mission 6 years ago
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    Silent Flash 6 years ago
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    The truth about the kidnapping 6 years ago
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    Artificial Human 6 years ago
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    Lilitth 6 years ago
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    It's my turn 6 years ago
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    Mission Success 6 years ago
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    Finally 6 years ago
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    Eva falls deeper 6 years ago
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    Daughter 6 years ago
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    Tour 6 years ago
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    Playing with the little sister 6 years ago
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    Teach me 6 years ago
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    Test 6 years ago
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    Lilitth prepares for school 6 years ago
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    Lilitth goes to school 6 years ago
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    Alex improves his Multiplayer skills 6 years ago
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    Alex play style is F*cked up 6 years ago
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    Lilitth's first day of school 6 years ago
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    Niki Rayheart 6 years ago
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    A bit of trouble 6 years ago
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    Creating even more trouble for oneself 6 years ago
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    Creating trouble for onself (part 2) 6 years ago
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    Creating trouble for oneself (final part) 6 years ago
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    Alex interferres 6 years ago
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    I'm her Onii-sama 6 years ago
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    The bet (part 1) 6 years ago
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    The bet (part 2) 6 years ago
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    The bet (part 3) 6 years ago
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    The bet (part 4) 6 years ago
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    The bet (final part) 6 years ago
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    The answer 6 years ago
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    Invitation to have fun 6 years ago
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    Surrounded 6 years ago
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    The arcade 6 years ago
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    Receiving a message 6 years ago
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    Playing in the arcade 6 years ago
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    Instantly famous 6 years ago
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    Foreboding 6 years ago
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    The day before the FPS tournament 6 years ago
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    Return 6 years ago
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    The meeting 6 years ago
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    Emily 6 years ago
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    FPS tournament (part 1) 6 years ago
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    FPS tournament (part 2) 6 years ago
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    FPS tournament (Part 3) 6 years ago
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    FPS tournament (part 4) 6 years ago
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    FPS tournament (part 5) 6 years ago
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    FPS tournament (part 6) 6 years ago
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    FPS tournament (Finale) 6 years ago
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    After the tournament 6 years ago
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    Let's all cosplay? 6 years ago
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    Getting attacked 6 years ago
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    Couldn't help but laugh 6 years ago
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    Alex lectures 6 years ago
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    I want to cosplay! Damn it I want cosplay! 6 years ago
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    Anime 6 years ago
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    Watching Anime 6 years ago
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    Magical Girl Harurun 6 years ago
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    Rachel and Lilitth 6 years ago
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    Planning to go to the Amusement Park 6 years ago
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    Mercenary Club walking at full force 6 years ago
  134. 134
    Onto the next club 6 years ago
  135. 135
    The Main Character 6 years ago
  136. 136
    To the amusement Park 6 years ago
  137. 137
    The Amusement Park 6 years ago
  138. 138
    The Amusement Park (part 2) 6 years ago
  139. 139
    Sword Master 6 years ago
  140. 140
    Fight for Lilitth's affection 6 years ago
  141. 141
    The Operation 6 years ago
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    The Amusement Park (Final part) 6 years ago
  143. 143
    For my children 6 years ago
  144. 144
    The Drama Club 6 years ago
  145. 145
    Kyle Hunt 6 years ago
  146. 146
    Preparing to train the Harimas 6 years ago
  147. 147
    Training Begins 6 years ago
  148. 148
    Torturous Training 6 years ago
  149. 149
    Mother and daughter talk 6 years ago
  150. 150
    Brother and sister 6 years ago
  151. 151
    Rewrite the script 6 years ago
  152. 152
    Lilitth's being targeted 6 years ago
  153. 153
    Attack on the Rayhearts 6 years ago
  154. 154
    The Granado Empire 6 years ago
  155. 155
    Friends 6 years ago
  156. 156
    The Gears begin to turn 6 years ago
  157. 157
    I will protect you 6 years ago
  158. 158
    Alternate ending: Journey to eternity 6 years ago
  159. 159
    Stay with me 6 years ago

卷 2

  1. 160
    Let me sleep with you 6 years ago
  2. 161
    Tell me what to do 6 years ago
  3. 162
    Can I do it? 6 years ago
  4. 163
    Oliver's memories 6 years ago
  5. 164
    Interruption 6 years ago
  6. 165
    Sleepover 6 years ago
  7. 166
    Truth or dare 6 years ago
  8. 167
    Free SS and announcement, also in the end of chapter four more free SS codes 6 years ago
  9. 168
    Let's play 6 years ago
  10. 169
    Let's play middle part 6 years ago
  11. 170
    Let's play last part 6 years ago
  12. 171
    Ghost Stories 6 years ago
  13. 172
    Ghost stories Emily version 6 years ago
  14. 173
    Questioning 6 years ago
  15. 174
    Hallucination? 6 years ago
  16. 175
    Can't sleep 6 years ago
  17. 176
    What?! 6 years ago
  18. 177
    Assassin 6 years ago
  19. 178
    Scared 6 years ago
  20. 179
    Changing Perception 6 years ago
  21. 180
    Confession 6 years ago
  22. 181
    Confession final part 6 years ago
  23. 182
    Female lead 6 years ago
  24. 183
    Facing a final Boss 6 years ago
  25. 184
    Come with me 6 years ago
  26. 185
    Oliver's date 6 years ago
  27. 186
    Alternate Ending: I'm the messenger of Death 6 years ago
  28. 187
    Escaping 6 years ago
  29. 188
    A battle with Specter 6 years ago
  30. 189
    Messaging 6 years ago
  31. 190
    Under my scope 6 years ago
  32. 191
    An old acquaintance 6 years ago
  33. 192
    Coward? 6 years ago
  34. 193
    Fleeing 6 years ago
  35. 194
    Chase 6 years ago
  36. 195
    One minute 6 years ago
  37. 196
    Towards my glorious death 6 years ago
  38. 197
    A talk between rivals 6 years ago
  39. 198
    Grant me strength 6 years ago
  40. 199
    Evangeline's resolve 6 years ago
  41. 200
    Rachel's living with Alex 6 years ago
  42. 201
    Dining room 6 years ago
  43. 202
    To the Southern Union 6 years ago
  44. 203
    Saturday 6 years ago
  45. 204
    Saintess Anita 5 years ago
  46. 205
    Emily and Kei 5 years ago
  47. 206
    Alternate ending: James Bourne 5 years ago
  48. 207
    Alex's subordinates the Harimas 5 years ago
  49. 208
    Alex's thoughts 5 years ago
  50. 209
    In the promise place 5 years ago
  51. 210
    Can I be your wife 5 years ago
  52. 211
    Alex made to go on a date 5 years ago
  53. 212
    Walking around with three girls 5 years ago
  54. 213
    Matthew is amused 5 years ago
  55. 214
    Finally I'm able to go home 5 years ago
  56. 215
    A fight between SS ranks 5 years ago
  57. 216
    Battle between SS rank Conclusion 5 years ago
  58. 217
    Unsuspecting Transfer 5 years ago
  59. 218
    Specter searching for Margie and Phil 5 years ago
  60. 219
    Meeting the traitors 5 years ago
  61. 220
    The truth about James Bourne 5 years ago
  62. 221
    Truth upon Truth 5 years ago
  63. 222
    A surprise 5 years ago
  64. 223
    Carlo returns 5 years ago
  65. 224
    A Mother! 5 years ago
  66. 225
    A fight between parents 5 years ago
  67. 226
    Families getting along 5 years ago
  68. 227
    The Kains coming for dinner 5 years ago
  69. 228
    Looks like a marriage interview 5 years ago
  70. 229
    Mission accomplished 5 years ago
  71. 230
    Into the shadows 5 years ago
  72. 231
    Oliver and specter 5 years ago
  73. 232
    Kyle and the teacher 5 years ago
  74. 233
    Emily spies on her brother 5 years ago
  75. 234
    Tell me 5 years ago
  76. 235
    News from the Harimas 5 years ago
  77. 236
    The three who were never meant to live in the same era 5 years ago
  78. 237
    Duel 5 years ago
  79. 238
    Until the day I surpass you 5 years ago
  80. 239
    Ominous feeling 5 years ago
  81. 240
    Is that all? 5 years ago
  82. 241
    Stalking 5 years ago
  83. 242
    The subtle movements 5 years ago
  84. 243
    Regius Family 5 years ago
  85. 244
    The beginning of the day that changed it all 5 years ago
  86. 245
    Doorknob 5 years ago

卷 3

  1. 246
    Before the play 5 years ago
  2. 247
    Gathering for the play 5 years ago
  3. 248
    The play 5 years ago
  4. 249
    The beginning of the end 5 years ago
  5. 250
    Shadow Mercenaries arrive 5 years ago
  6. 251
    Towards our deaths and glory! 5 years ago
  7. 252
    Shadows lurking 5 years ago
  8. 253
    Soldiers of the Empire 5 years ago
  9. 254
    The Hunt siblings 5 years ago
  10. 255
    I am who I am! 5 years ago
  11. 256
    Evangeline and Rachel 5 years ago
  12. 257
    Matthew giving a helping hand 5 years ago
  13. 258
    Hektor 5 years ago
  14. 259
    Oliver's choice 5 years ago
  15. 260
    Come onto my mountain and die 5 years ago
  16. 261
    Final mission 5 years ago
  17. 262
    Alex's determination 5 years ago
  18. 263
    The Hunt siblings wreak havoc 5 years ago
  19. 264
    Have I become a true merc? 5 years ago
  20. 265
    I'm your grandfather 5 years ago
  21. 266
    A past long forgotten 5 years ago
  22. 267
    Alexander and his grandfather 5 years ago
  23. 268
    The monster and the hound 5 years ago
  24. 269
    The monster versus the hound 5 years ago
  25. 270
    Five days 5 years ago
  26. 271
    Alex trapped in a box 5 years ago
  27. 272
    War begins 5 years ago
  28. 273
    Oliver hunting down Hektor 5 years ago
  29. 274
    The strongest of the SS rank mercs 5 years ago
  30. 275
    Side story: The current SS rank mercs 5 years ago
  31. 276
    Alex's tests 5 years ago
  32. 277
    Rachel's determination 5 years ago
  33. 278
    The orphanage 5 years ago
  34. 279
    Niel's true nature 5 years ago
  35. 280
    Shadows never die 5 years ago
  36. 281
    Sayaka's decision 5 years ago
  37. 282
    Simulation Game 5 years ago
  38. 283
    I'm scared 5 years ago
  39. 284
    The truth about the Greyhounds 5 years ago
  40. 285
    Side Chapter: The History of the Greyhounds 5 years ago
  41. 286
    I'll be going now 5 years ago
  42. 287
    The Angel of Death 5 years ago
  43. 288
    The Status of the War 5 years ago
  44. 289
    Heading out 5 years ago
  45. 290
    To make you a true Greyhound 5 years ago
  46. 291
    The monster of Berdonia meets the monster of the Granado Empire 5 years ago
  47. 292
    The fight between monsters 5 years ago
  48. 293
    A beautiful dream 5 years ago
  49. 294
    The news of his death 5 years ago
  50. 295
    Eulogy 5 years ago
  51. 296
    Ones own path 5 years ago
  52. 297
    Mercenary Club 5 years ago
  53. 298
    Lilitth's Training 5 years ago
  54. 299
    It is time 5 years ago
  55. 300
    What will you do? 5 years ago
  56. 301
    Nearly there 5 years ago
  57. 302
    I might spare her life 5 years ago
  58. 303
    Let me have your eyes 5 years ago
  59. 304
    Be mine 5 years ago
  60. 305
    Time to get serious 5 years ago
  61. 306
    Angel's smile 5 years ago
  62. 307
    Side Chapter: The Mercenary System 5 years ago
  63. 308
    Best present 5 years ago
  64. 309
    It's already over 5 years ago
  65. 310
    Shadows 5 years ago
  66. 311
    Tell me 5 years ago
  67. 312
    The torture would never stop 5 years ago
  68. 313
    Richter's anger 5 years ago
  69. 314
    Cornered 5 years ago
  70. 315
    Rachel going all out 5 years ago
  71. 316
    Berserk Rachel 5 years ago
  72. 317
    Hektor's plans 5 years ago
  73. 318
    Matthew and the cat 5 years ago
  74. 319
    James and the Shadow Mercenaries 5 years ago
  75. 320
    Richter's right hand man 5 years ago
  76. 321
    Side Chapter: The Executioner 5 years ago
  77. 322
    How could it be you? 5 years ago
  78. 323
    Seventy Percent 5 years ago
  79. 324
    This isn't enough 5 years ago
  80. 325
    How do I decide 5 years ago
  81. 326
    Richter talking to Rachel 5 years ago
  82. 327
    Richter playing with Rachel 5 years ago
  83. 328
    A new start 5 years ago
  84. 329
    The decision of a commander 5 years ago
  85. 330
    Richter meets Evangeline 5 years ago
  86. 331
    A game of chess 5 years ago
  87. 332
    Sneaking Around 5 years ago
  88. 333
    Sayaka faces James Bourne 5 years ago
  89. 334
    Sayaka battles James Bourne 5 years ago
  90. 335
    Offer 5 years ago
  91. 336
    How foolish 5 years ago
  92. 337
    Side Chapter: Richter Greyhound 5 years ago
  93. 338
    Deaths 5 years ago
  94. 339
    Two swordsmen 5 years ago
  95. 340
    The strongest squad 5 years ago
  96. 341
    Niki and Lilitth 5 years ago
  97. 342
    On the way to the house 5 years ago
  98. 343
    Lilitth's room 5 years ago
  99. 344
    Night attack 5 years ago
  100. 345
    No one touches my daughter 5 years ago
  101. 346
    Teach me how to beceme a merc 5 years ago
  102. 347
    Training 5 years ago
  103. 348
    Decide now 5 years ago
  104. 349
    The birth of a new legend 5 years ago
  105. 350
    Alternate ending: BAD END 5 years ago
  106. 351
    Alternate Ending: GOOD END 5 years ago
  107. 352
    I love you 5 years ago
  108. 353
    I have a plan 5 years ago
  109. 354
    The Executioner's identity 5 years ago
  110. 355
    Does it matter? 5 years ago
  111. 356
    A talk before the fight 5 years ago
  112. 357
    Fake fight? 5 years ago
  113. 358
    Heart broken 5 years ago
  114. 359
    Counterattack 5 years ago
  115. 360
    Matthew and the squad 5 years ago
  116. 361
    Follow orders or die! 5 years ago
  117. 362
    Begin operation 5 years ago
  118. 363
    Shadow uncovering the truth 5 years ago
  119. 364
    Operation start 5 years ago
  120. 365
    I wish to see 5 years ago
  121. 366
    Battle intensifies 5 years ago
  122. 367
    Grandfather vs Grandson 5 years ago
  123. 368
    Grandfather vs Grandson part 2 5 years ago
  124. 369
    You are a true Greyhound 5 years ago
  125. 370
    Seperate paths 5 years ago
  126. 371
    The death of a loved one 5 years ago
  127. 372
    Side Chapter: Emily=Fear 5 years ago
  128. 373
    Side Chapter: Tanya 5 years ago
  129. 374
    We won't run 5 years ago
  130. 375
    The executioner fights a devil 5 years ago
  131. 376
    Transcendance 5 years ago
  132. 377
    Sorry 5 years ago
  133. 378
    Side Chapter: Neighbors 5 years ago
  134. 379
    What is this? 5 years ago
  135. 380
    I will kill you! 5 years ago
  136. 381
    It's finally time 5 years ago
  137. 382
    Side Chapter: Into the mountains 5 years ago
  138. 383
    Kei going into action 5 years ago
  139. 384
    Another one 5 years ago
  140. 385
    The full might of the Mercenary Club 5 years ago
  141. 386
    Victory is mine 5 years ago
  142. 387
    Confessions 5 years ago
  143. 388
    The day when the world changed 5 years ago
  144. 389
    New Organ 5 years ago
  145. 390
    The Shadow has come 5 years ago
  146. 391
    Side Chapter: Mutsu Clan Assassin Family 5 years ago
  147. 392
    It's like I woke up in a different world 5 years ago
  148. 393
    A world that's different yet the same 5 years ago
  149. 394
    The change within themselves 5 years ago
  150. 395
    Side Chapter: What if Alex was a normal rich boy 5 years ago
  151. 396
    Basic understanding of the change 5 years ago
  152. 397
    Usage of the new abilities 5 years ago
  153. 398
    Giant snake 5 years ago
  154. 399
    I'll be waiting 5 years ago
  155. 400
    Side Chapter: Home 5 years ago
  156. 401
    Moving onward 5 years ago
  157. 402
    A battle for survival 5 years ago
  158. 403
    Returning Home 5 years ago
  159. 404
    Rika calming Alex down 5 years ago
  160. 405
    I'm sorry 5 years ago
  161. 406
    I'm home 5 years ago
  162. 407
    Let's talk 5 years ago
  163. 408
    Epilogue 1 5 years ago
  164. 409
    Epilogue 2 5 years ago
  165. 410
    Final Chapter: Valhalla 5 years ago
  166. 411
    After Story: Emily's proposal (1) 4 years ago
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