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Winter's Chill: She Wept in Sorrow

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作者: Leialeial

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Mai had one purpose in life: to be a sacrifice. As such, the villagers of the village that Mai lived in treated her as just a sacrifice- she was treated with disdain and dislike.
Not to be discouraged, Mai blatantly accepts her fate, determined to tell God that asking for sacrifices was stupid. When she had finally turned 12-years old and about to be buried alive underneath the cold, hard ground, something surprising occurs.

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Release rate: ~1,500 word chapter at least once a week

Slow romance. Mythology. Reincarnation. 2 POVs starting from Chapter 8.

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Leialeial

Hi, the author here! I was previously planning on continuing with this novel until the 10th of June, but my plans have changed! I will be updating everyday starting from today, so I'm sorry to the frustration that my previous plans may have caused any of you. Please forgive me for any grammar, spelling, or other mistakes. I am a first-time author and have a busy life (I am a medical student). I will try my hardest to update every single day, but if I miss one, call me out on it and I will do a double release for every day starting today the 12th of May. (For example, if I released a chapter today but fail tomorrow, I will release three chapters on the 14th). Someone keep track of that. Honestly, I truly hope that all of you will give this novel a try. And I accept all comments. Please just comment/review/etc. This author is needy and needs support. (p.s. I am also shameless, so I gave myself 5 stars to motivate myself in keeping my goal. Yay. Have a nice life!)

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Mundane_World

I know that shocking truth!! As Mai was buried under the earthly soil something came to her mind like a rumbling thunder that could pierce through her mind. She realized I who has been taught to be a sacrifice ever since young was buried alive as a sacrifice for earth and not heaven. Then a chilling thought came to her as if the devil himself whisper to ears, telling her that she would be in the netherworld and not heaven. “I’m an pretty sure that is truth hehehe sounds about it right?”

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LOLI404

I've read the first and second chapter and it's kinda giving me the Persephone and Hades romance. When is the next update... i'm exited to know what happened next😊😊😊

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DeJeL
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters.* Constructive Criticism: I would like to see a bit more of the structure of her current world... also, the first two chapters felt very slow when I was reading them though you came in with a good story shortly thereafter... I don't know a way to correct this if it can be, but I do suggest that you ask people to read at least 3 chapters before deciding whether or not to read your book, for it does take that long to be clear if one would like the story or not.;,;. Positive Feedback: Very good character development and decently clear plot and world design. Personal Feedback: At first I thought that this novel was going to be prosaic, however, after reading all the way to chapter five, I actually found it to be very alluring. I did not want to stop, but I have other stories to both review and to catch up to, so, for now, I have to (metaphorically) put the book down. I will pick it back up when I am able.;,;.

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SweetsTomato

I'm not good at grammar so i'll skip the grammar matter and give it to those experts. The story is slow developed as author stated but after read for 6 chapters i still can't find the reason for sacrifice. In ancient time usually sacrifice offered to God for the blessing or to remove disaster/plague. In this story i don't know what this sacrifice use for. Thrill that build in first chapter somehow disappears until the chapter when sacrifice conducted, and that's quite long. Character design is good, reader step by step can judge how the main character personality developed. For reader that enjoys romance, this romance story maybe will suit your taste.

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AkitaToyama

If you love reincarnation. Betrayals. Love. And suspense. Please read this book. I love it. At first I was iffe because of the cover, but the way the book is I love how the cover is included with the story. Thank you! And please continue!

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Theveetah1

Saw this story, it sounded like a good read, haven't read it yet, but since it's an original work, I figured as a fellow author I'd stop and give it a review. If it lives up to the review, I might just write another, or at least comment on this one and say that It lives up to my expectations. Maybe I'll write a review on it on my blog. But, if I do....don't take anything to heart, when I write a review on my blog, it's seldom entirely positive.....but that's just me. I b*tch about the things I like and the things I hate....

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AmeraliaPrincess

Seems good so far! Excited for me. Just wondering if says 20 chapters so far but for some reason I can only see chapter 1 on my phone. Please keep up the good work! I am so excited for more.

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Maeyang
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I love how the story develop and it really pique my interests. I somehow feel that it's some kind of a mythology and I'm so interested in that kind of literature. I give you that kind of rating coz I'm hoping for a stable update. After reading those chapters I decided to add this to my library. I really love the MC.

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最新リリース:
Chapter 59: Second Lifetime: Dream (2) 6 years ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    The Bu Hai Village 6 years ago
  2. 2
    She Calls Him Dir, He Calls Her Mai 6 years ago
  3. 3
    The Teacher from Ymir Academy 6 years ago
  4. 4
    Different People have Different Talents 6 years ago
  5. 5
    Family 6 years ago
  6. 6
    Her Harvest 6 years ago
  7. 7
    Two days After in the Bu Hai Village 6 years ago
  8. 8
    Mai's 12th Birthday 6 years ago
  9. 9
    The Trouble With Curses 6 years ago
  10. 10
    <Myth> The True Story of the Creation of Everything 6 years ago
  11. 11
    Her First Lifetime (1) 6 years ago
  12. 12
    <Myth> How the God of Slumber Got His Name 6 years ago
  13. 13
    The Makings of a War 6 years ago
  14. 14
    1st Lifetime: The Village 6 years ago
  15. 15
    <Different POV> Teacher Claire AND Aldrich "Dir" 6 years ago
  16. 16
    The Big Decision 6 years ago
  17. 17
    1st Lifetime: Syndicate (1) 6 years ago
  18. 18
    <Myth> How the Goddess of Love and the Goddess of Oracles and Forbearance Met (1) 6 years ago
  19. 19
    1st Lifetime: Syndicate (2) 6 years ago
  20. 20
    1st Lifetime: Being Orioles 6 years ago
  21. 21
    <Myth> How the Goddess of Love and the Goddess of Oracles and Forbearance Met (2) 6 years ago
  22. 22
    <Different POV> All According to Plan 6 years ago
  23. 23
    1st Lifetime: Revolution 6 years ago
  24. 24
    Unintended Consequences 6 years ago
  25. 25
    <Different POV> God of Trickery and Deceit 6 years ago
  26. 26
    1st Lifetime: Being a Leaf In a Forest 6 years ago
  27. 27
    <Myth> How the Goddess of Love and the Goddess of Oracles and Forbearance Met (3) 6 years ago
  28. 28
    1st Lifetime: Being a Leaf in a Forest (2) 6 years ago
  29. 29
    1st Lifetime: Mission (Not) Accomplished 6 years ago
  30. 30
    <Myth> The Story Behind Lupa and Heshe (1) 6 years ago
  31. 31
    1st Lifetime: Mission (not) Accomplished (2) 6 years ago
  32. 32
    1st Lifetime: The Other Plan 6 years ago
  33. 33
    It Went Horribly Awry 6 years ago
  34. 34
    <Different POV> Brqi'a's Plan 6 years ago
  35. 35
    <Different POV> Traitor 6 years ago
  36. 36
    2nd Lifetime: Vestigal Priestess 6 years ago
  37. 37
    2nd Lifetime: Vestigal Priestess 6 years ago
  38. 38
    <Myth> When Gods Promise Other Gods Favors 6 years ago
  39. 39
    2nd Lifetime: The Prayer 6 years ago
  40. 40
    2nd Lifetime: Prayers 6 years ago
  41. 41
    <Myth> Qori, Goddess of Medicine and Uyir, God of Nature 6 years ago
  42. 42
    2nd Lifetime: Jaquine 6 years ago
  43. 43
    <Different POV> Head Priestess 6 years ago
  44. 44
    <Different POV: Unknown> Secrets 6 years ago
  45. 45
    The Three Great Rules 6 years ago
  46. 46
    <Myth> The Great War 6 years ago
  47. 47
    <Myth> To Protect 6 years ago
  48. 48
    Mountians of Geva and Soulful Flowers 6 years ago
  49. 49
    2nd Lifetime: The People 6 years ago
  50. 50
    2nd Lifetime: The Cardon Faction 6 years ago
  51. 51
    Sending Them Off 6 years ago
  52. 52
    2nd Lifetime: The Graveyard 6 years ago
  53. 53
    2nd Lifetime: 'Saving' Jaquine 6 years ago
  54. 54
    2nd Lifetime: Finally Learning About the Different Factions 6 years ago
  55. 55
    <Different POV> Eolia 6 years ago
  56. 56
    <Different POV> Eolia (2) 6 years ago
  57. 57
    2nd Lifetime: Dream (POV Minas & Mai) 6 years ago
  58. 58
    2nd Lifetime: Dream (I) 6 years ago
  59. 59
    Second Lifetime: Dream (2) 6 years ago

作者 Leialeial