“Quinn released” should be “Quinn realized”.
"Wait!" Quinn shouted. They were so close that Quinn didn't want to ruin the deal they had. So far, he had stayed true to his word and Erin didn't have a mark on her. He felt like he was so close to solving the problem with Peter, but after hearing Vorden's words, Quinn released how selfish he was being. Erin had no reason to be involved in their affairs.
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“Comply tangled” should be “completely tangled “.
Peter had fallen to the ground and was now comply tangled and tied up in some type of string. "It's a shame, if you worked for me I could turn you into a really good puppet. Your quite strong for a ghoul, it took more strength then I thought to slow you down."
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Thank you! I definitely agree. I've also taught pre-kindergarten and kindergarten. Many young children are quite knowledgeable and ask very mature questions. I had one who knew all the different types of dolphins and where they lived, etc. Most children are curious and want to learn about what interests them, they just want to be able to have fun doing it. I even asked one of my students why she liked one of her classmates. Her response was unexpected. The only reason she liked him was that she thought he would be good-looking when he was older.
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“None of do” should be “none of us do.”
"Well, he didn't really understand what was going on, none of do?" Peter replied.
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