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My Dragon System
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Sen, the last and most powerful dragon left roaming the skies causing chaos and destruction across the land. When all hope is lost the human race call upon their last hope, a powerful witch. Unable to destroy the dragon the witch uses the last of her power to cast a spell. Sen has not been defeated but has now been reborn as a human.
How will Sen live his life now as a human who he once despised and saw as weak?
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Ga Ga Ga!!!" This is how the main character laughs, right? Just a joke. Anyway, please don't expect expert advice from someone like me. Because I'm not an expert editor, so I'll tell you my honest feelings. At the first chapter, I thought that I'm reading a typical reincarnation novel. But there's something more to it. As you read it further, you will be slowly attracted by it. Seriously, no joke! Before I knew it, I'm already at Chapter 5! Although, I read your story for the review swap, I'm going to continue reading it now. Keep up the good work!!!
It's ok... a lot of weird things happen, and anytime someone points it out someone else says "ITS A FANTASY." I mean sure it is, but if you going to have something different from the standard explain it. For example, there is an Acadamy for swordsmen, and the entrance exams are at 5? The only time I remember from history where training started, so young was for Samurai, and even then they didn't really start until 5-7. You may say he starts at 5, so what do you mean. No, he started at 3 the exams are just at 5. And if you fail your out from what I can tell that just makes no sense no one shows there potential at 5. The other big thing is he is a 1000-year-old dragon and acts like a 4-year-old like his human age, which doesn't make sense to me. While other 4-year-olds act like 18+ year-olds. He got beat up by a 4-year-old who had knight training? What he is 4 how does he have knight training. Anyway, I'm bashing at this point I'm no professional just what I noticed, so I'd say it's not a bad read just weird read you have to ignore things to really like it.
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This is a different and unique take on the classic dragon story, as you can probably glean from the title. And the author wastes no time--you're immediately plunged into what can be considered a dragon's existential dilemma: what happens if the predator suddenly becomes reborn as its usual prey? There are some punctuation and capitalization errors tht I hope the author can polish, but if you can get past that, this is an entertaining story. I also like the humor--the baby's seemingly innocent behavior and antics turn out to be actually the dragon's "rebellion". And that's only for starters. Currently, the pacing is fast, so I'm intrigued where the entire tale would lead to. Can't wait!
This novel is good, but it has a serious flaw: The MC is a child with a draconic system, not a reincarnated Dragon. The MC has 0% of the wisdom of a millennial dragon.
So I should leave a review since I had great hope for this novel, but was disappointed. I will list the problems: 1. Grammar ...simply, it sucks. I can understand that English is not the author's first language, but there are like 10 grammar mistakes each chapter. Please, use a proofreader it's really distracting from the story. There, they're and their are different. Please learn it. 2. Writing style The limites of the language hits hard in the style department. Since the author doesn't master the language, phrases are always linear and simple, concepts are expressed one at a time etc... This impacts the story since it seems the actors themselves are basic. 3. Plot holes, world building, etc I understand you don't want infodumps, and you also don't want to spoiler the story but... Seriously, try to give a reason for things happening, and not at chapter 1000 since people will not arrive there. Sen is acting like a true 5 yo even being a 1000 yo dragon. Is there a good reason? Maybe. Without explaining, or even an hypotesis, this is simply a plot hole. Whatever is inside the mind of the author doesn't count, only what is written. And don't go "but normal books can explain after 200 pages, why can't I?" Normal books are supposed to be perfect in language use, have been read and revisited multiple time by the author and the editor team, so the reader is somewhat assured that the story is somewhat decent. On webnovel the author publishes BEFORE finishing the story and often before checking for errors. Maybe in chapter 300 the author is like "oooops for plot reason I need this in chapter 30... Too bad it's already published. Let's hope nobody notices" while in a normal book you would go and modify chapter 30 to be coherent. Now, I have gone for a bit of a rant here. TL;DR: the story is simple but ha potential... Wasted because of poor English and oversimplification
Author makes an effort but the story has little internal consistency. The main character is an ancient dragon reincarnated as a human. He also has a system. He basically doesn't use either. It's fine and good that he has difficulty understanding humans and human emotion, but it's not okay to give him a clear path via the system to increase his strength, even assuming he can't apply any of his dragon knowledge to strengthening himself as a human, then let him spend no time training during a ten year timeskip. Especially when he desperately needs to improve his strength to save someone. The author claims from the start the MC wants to get stronger, but the MC keeps doing things ineffectually with out any in world justification. Any average isekai from our world would be a 100 times stronger than this MC by chapter 50.
I don't know whether or not this is the author's first book or if they have lots of experience. I wouldn't necessarily say this book is bad. Because the concept is actually very good. And if this is the author's first or one of their first books, then they did a fantastic job. And I would tell them to keep writing. However there were some parts of this novel that I myself did not enjoy. And I frankly felt did not make sense. The mc, an old and experienced dragon, was reborn as a child. Makes sense how he acts and all that in the first half of the chapters. However then his father got sick and the book went down hill from there. The knight academy he went to for 10 years felt so forced. It was just an excuse for a time skip. And a terrible one at that seeing as he did not grow stronger at all in those 10 years EVEN THO he was supposed to be doing it to find the cure for his dad. Then, he finally leaves and goes to another academy where he hides his strength and all that. Here is where things get confusing for me. He has killed intermediate beasts before. That's a fact. And we were also told that average knights would not be able to defeat an intermediate beast . Ok. But then he enters a school and gets beat up by a second-year student who would technically only be 16. So, this 16 year old is better than all average knights? Ok, he must be the best of the best. Nope. Rank 50. And the match wasn't even close. Honestly, they're trying to make him struggle, which I understand, but they're focusing more on the physical struggle than the mental struggle which I believe is a mistake. as a former dragon even if he does not have magic in this current body he has been given the tools which would allow him to rule over everyone else quite easily if he would stop being forced to waste away his time in the academy learning almost nothing. To make up for his incredible skills, the author could have given him a greater mental and emotional struggle. The struggle between the mind of a beast in the heart of the human. Idk, there's honestly a lot of good concepts in this novel however I'm going to have to drop it because I just don't wanna read any more of a novel where the mc is forced to be weak when there is a clear path to strength. Keep trying Mr./Miss Author
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I have been loving this story so much. I mean, at the start, Ray acted like he did as a dragon. But as the story has progressed, he has learned about and felt human emotion. He’s made his own family, and I’m exited to see where this is headed!
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I have come to see or read as ruthless mc but got heavily disappointed. I really hated when even though they get reincarnated but still naive and act like hero but still ended up being backstab or even more hated by others. seriously dude how much more time you need to mature. big disappointment.
MC is naive and foolish for someone who lived for so long. MC is weak. He doesn't have Magic. Dude I m not some fan of swordmanship. Theres no way A MC doesn't have Magical power. bull****
Novel has many basic grammar errors, that could be fixed with a draft. Protagonist is disappointing and lacks character. The plot and setting are also both rather cliche, but ok.
So I'm going to keep it short, because I've wasted too much of my time on that novel. I've read this story because it is the first in JKSManga's System trilogy. My Vampire System has been continuously ranked in Webnovel's top ten for over a year and I want to read its prequels before I get to it. Well, MDS is a beginner novel and it shows. The MC is good, some side characters are alright, but the rest of the cast is average to bad. The background is barebone. The power system is vague, badly implemented and the worst I've ever read. The story is awful, incomplete, full of deus ex machina and feels overall artifical, leading to a rushed and unsatisfactory ending. Finally, the writing is terrible, full of typos, bad grammar, characters confusions, mistakes on homophones. Really, I work as an English teacher, and none of my students, even the worst of them, would make so many errors. I hope JKSManga took an editor/proofreader with his other novels, otherwise, reading them will be a torture. So, I hope the next volumes of the My System trilogy are better, it seems they are, but after such an experience, it will be some time before I read the second book. My final verdict is a 1 out of 10 (my first). If you want to read a very good/excellent dragon-themed novel, go for Coiling Dragon by I Eat Tomatoes, that's the novel that brought me to Chinese novels, and it is awesome. Now if you excuse me, I'm going to read Martial Arts Master by Cuttlefish That Loves Diving, an excellent author, who so far never has disappointed me. Kergonan out
I dropped the book after 500 chapters because the author just doesn't seem to care about typos and other errors. It's unfortunate because the storyline is decent.
Overall a good story. It's similar to how supreme Magnus starts with a cold mc but as time goes on he starts to open up and learn how to be human. I've read about 165ish chapters of this so I have a decent grasp of the book. I love the characters that he made. On the other hand, there is very little depth in the world. Granted they are mainly stuck in the academy so I'll give it a pass. Finally, I wish is that he would combine some of the chapters to lesson the daily cost of the book. On average, it costs about 2-3 passes daily to stay up to date on. You only get 3 passes every day (plus 1 on Sunday). That leaves no room for other books.
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When i read dragon that reincarnated as a human: How about other creatures like slime and cockroach? It would be very fantastic if other creatures could become human after their death with their own skill based on their previous physical or mental skill. Let's say a cockroach. Would it be reincarnated as an un-killable human? Your story is honestly good. Keep up!!!
This novel has a pretty interesting story so I gave it a read. After reading 70 chapters, this is what I have to say. Keep in mind that this is my personal opinion and some of you may not agree with my point. I can tell that the author is writing what comes to his mind and isn't trying to write something perfect. Although this kind of writing is the most easy and the most fun, it will make some loopholes in the story. And those are the exact things that made me drop it. The characters are pretty good and the dialogues aren't bad. But I felt a lot of small problems that bothered me and that made me drop it. For starters, the MC doesn't feel like an old dragon at all. We weren't given much information about the time that he was a dragon anyway. But still, doesn't act mature at all. Take the hole dragon story away and just say that he was an elf child that lost his hole family to humans and it will still make perfect sense for the most of the story. The point of the story is that he was an old dragon that lost all his friends and family to the humans and fought with them and finally got killed by them. But he just feels like the demon lord loli from some comedy anime if you get what I'm meaning. Of course this gets much better as it goes further so, that's not a big problem. But I have to say, there will be a lot of place that you might think "wait, why didn't he just do this?" or "Wasn't he like this? Then why did he do that?" Or something similar. And one of the things that annoyed me was the so called 'beast form' of his. I think it was a very impractical and stupid idea that I hoped would end after learning Ki and martial arts, but it didn't. If you are like me and things like these annoy you, then this isn't for you. But if you don't care, then this is a pretty good read.
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The beginning of the story is different as compared to another novel on reincarnation. The length of the stories is perfect. The stability of the chapters is fair. I'm looking forward to more episodes and a good finale.
Started reading this out of curiosity about the MVS prequel. Interesting story! I enjoyed reading it, but I felt the ending was a bit rushed...
What happens when a dragon who had to watch as all of his kin were killed at the humans' mercy before finally falling himself and being reincarnated as a member of such detestable race? Sen, who convinced himself that he will destroy humanity as revenge, finds himself as part of this complicated species that constantly tests his true intentions. There is the kind and loving family along with agreeable friends on one side, and the rest of the world on another. The once-dragon is stuck in a conundrum where his newfound care for certain individuals is constantly clashing against his ever increasing list of reasons to end humanity, and kindness is losing. The story could have been more well written, as grammar mistakes aren't that rare to find – some repeated so often they make me question whether it is my knowledge of English which is lacking. The story of the world around the protagonist could have been better exposed, and so could the development of the story itself – though I don't particularly have any insightful recommendation for this. Character development is without a doubt the best this story has to offer, everyone has their own qualities and their own thinking, their actions are also always in accordance to their beliefs and absolutely do not need the MC to do anything with their lives. Promising story overall with qualities rarely seen on web novels, plus Sen's moments of senseless arrogance are definitely entertaining!