Kevin_Manzo

male LV 14

no

2019-08-13 Bergabung United States
Lencana 15

Moments 6
Kevin_Manzo
Kevin_Manzo
1 years ago
Posted

this story is stolen/ repost. the original is available on Amazon Kindle unlimited, under the same name. DO NOT SUPPORT STEALING AND REPOSTING

Kevin_Manzo
Kevin_Manzo
1 years ago
Commented

wasn't she rank 5

Kat shrugged, "I can sort of flick it to 'settings'? I guess? I also instinctively seem to know how much strength is potentially lethal… but for inanimate objects? I've only really handled things at 'base' strength, I have no idea what the appropriate level for this sort of thing is. Things are… flimsy now that I'm rank three. I don't know how much Thyme will reinforce the paddles… but I'm just a bit worried ok?" 

D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

Fantasy · Vongrak

Kevin_Manzo
Kevin_Manzo
1 years ago
Posted

this should not be so highly rated. Poor characters and world building

Kevin_Manzo
Kevin_Manzo
2 years ago
Commented

i thought she was at the sky realm

Kevin_Manzo
Kevin_Manzo
3 years ago
Posted

this is a story that feels like it goes nowhere. mc has stupid luck and has several quests with a time limit that can ruin his character. most of the characters have no personality and the world building is very shallow

Kevin_Manzo
Kevin_Manzo
3 years ago
Posted

this story is completely unoriginal, its basically just a copy of my vampire system which is not that good of a story. But this just speeds past all the world building and mysteries because it just copies from mvs.