Well, this is an interesting first chapter. A flawed MC with a flawed fiancee that left him because of emotional heartache.
You can really tell in these last few chapters how the author wrote himself into a corner. The patriarch was too strong for Xiao ran to just one shot. He might have had a difficult fight, and we can't have that happen. Otherwise, it might have been interesting, and that is not allowed in this story. So he had to magic these two in order to destroy the Cui family. This is proff positive that "enemies" are only piñatas for Xiao ran to hit and for goodies and candy to fall out of.
This show is getting more and more frustrating. Congratulations, Xiao ran is a Villian. He could have saved that girl but chose not to. He has so much BS that you can not convince me that he could not save her.
Do you want to know why you get so few votes. it's because you have made the main character so unlikable. I am now actively routing against him. I just want someone to completely crush him. To face an enemy that can overcome all of his BS abilities and he needs to be rescued.
As I suspected, but You still have a chance to make that other demon a little bit of a challenge.
so far I am liking this story. Even with an amazing cheat ability he still has to work hard to make his powers grow. Hope this continues throughout the story.
3 weapons a day is this much, 2 weapons a day would make more sense. Also what's the point in armor if the standard sword can cut through it. The test should be that the standard weapons can cut and peirce flesh and bones. Weapons can damage armor, but not make them pointless. A yellow rank weapon should be able to defeat standard armor.
OK he is using his power to fight 2 Combat Venerables and they figured out that he has been hiding his true power. Now I am going g to assume that he will defeat them within 1 or 2 Chapters. So now everyone else will notice Xiao ran defeating them and they will realize just how strong Xiao ran is. If one notices then that means we are not watching people, we are watching a bunch of manicans.
I bid goodbye to the He family patriarch. You were a man of integrity.
A typical barbell weighs 45 pounds or 20 kilograms. There are indeed 100 pound or 45 kilograms plates, but besides that, if we take your numbers at face value, he would lifting 110kg or 242 lbs. It's not bad, but not that impressive. I can squat, deadlift, and bench that weight for multiple reps. I do not consider myself that strong, especially comparing myself with genuine people who can lift this weight after a month of training. Or the freaks of nature that can manhandle this weight on their first day. Yes, this world has people who can do that and more! Now, as far as Drake is concerned, I have no idea if this is impressive or not. If he had done a little monolog about how much he could lift before, I could understand his current condition better. Overall I am enjoying the story so far.
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Fantasy · Diyen_Pi