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I Received System to Become Dragonborn
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Five years have passed since the Elves invaded Earth.
The poor and criminals of the Republic of Ascaria are forced to join the ranks of the soldiers on the front lines while the rich and high-ranking government officials hide behind walls.
Erend Drake is a young man who must go out and fight so his family can live in a squalid shelter within the walls.
One night in the battle Erend had to die because he was killed by the Elves.
But suddenly he wakes up the next day with a mysterious power.
[Congratulations, you have been chosen to be the holder of Systema.]
[Please choose the available skills]
[ Dragon Armor ]
[ Dragon Claw ]
[ Dragon Eyes ]
[ Dragon Wings ]
[ Fire Breathing ]
Erend did not expect that he would become a Dragonborn. The strongest race was feared by the Elves and the humans. Even feared by all Gods.
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the story is great I just feel like the MC is an idiot he keeps falling for the same thing like things covering his face but doesn't call the slime or takes a beating when he doesn't have to by withholding his transformation..... But other wise good job Author
Childish, naive and average. There is literally no background to anything. No information about the world or how it came to the state it is now. No information about any sort of past of our MC. The MC himself is naive and beta. Alien race (elves) attacks earth, kills millions of ppl, kills his comrades in arms in a prolonged war, and he decides to trust and help the aliens, because of a woman he met twice and barely even spoke to. The entire idea that a random lieutenant can agree to an invitation to peace talks from enemies, without reporting anything or orders from high command is a joke. There is no immersion, and all the characters, MC included, are 2D (not only do we have no background, the entire plot is rushed and fast paced, we have no idea about MCs feelings or inner thoughts). The plot itself, at least until what I've read (30 chapters) was cliche.
First off, the title is very deceptive. The Author used the term 'Dragonborn' to draw in people thinking it'd be linked to The Elder Scrolls. It isn't. It's a sh*tty cliche ridden story with as much creativity and depth to it as a five year old's crayon drawing. The Protagonist is a insufferable fool with no spine, there is no proper world building or background AT ALL, and it uses so many tropes that if this novel were a building it would be foreclosed then bulldozed. One of the examples is how the protagonist supposedly was fighting on the front lines against the Elves for five years, witnessing the deaths of many friends and fellow humans but he fell in love at first sight with a Elven Princess from the race that murdered millions of Humans in an unprovoked war of aggression. Not only that but the Princess of the Elves somehow knew that he was the system user, teleported to him then then betrayed her race by telling him about an upcoming attack on that city simply because she felt his magic dragon transformation due to her super special secret talent and desperarely wanted his dragon c*ck-*cough* I mean dragon magic. Even worse is how Erend is STILL an incompetant coward that shakes in his boots and freezes up when the Elves attack after five years of fighting on the frontline. He even gets shouted at to remind him to shoot at the enemy in the first chapter! 2/5 Stars.
the story is good and all but like come one... so many things just don't make sense and are so stupid and frustrating 😫
Good idea but author threw it out the window, but deceide for yourself:-MC gets OP system that helps him turn into the only dragon, from early on-The elves attacked the humans because one puny thief stole some key-MC with his new powers, helps the elves(for no reason,he also says that). And waits for human commands because he is a soilder...-The president protects the thief........so yeah i really dont know how stupid the MC can be to not kill at least some of them. No brainer.
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sorry to say this bro because i hate to be a bad guy. but your story pace is so slow and fighting is too slow and prolonged i feel like MC and every good guy is stupid and idiot beyond reason. you may enjoy a long and winding and slow and very very delayed battle but i sure not enjoy it. . i give honest star review at least, but for now i dropping your story for good
So far the story is really enjoyable, but I feel like at the beginning it was too fast-paced. Everything felt a little rushed. But other than that it's a good read.
Nice novel with and interesting story. Recomanded to read! nothing: 5igjy4e7irtd6hiv6d4d6vivtg7b7h6zjuh7h7g7vug7hug6h7czg67u9jug7hohe6tofw6gug7vzg7hic6v7v7vivuvijih7h7vibibibi
hi author I just want to ask if there will be harem or no ..............................................................................
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So I kind of liked it at the beginning, like the first 5 chapters because I felt the mc was cautious and would develop well. Then, the power he gains is poorly developed, and by power, I don't mean the dragon powers. I mean the system, it had serious potential, but the way it is designed leads to werid and unable to be understood power, and the way he gains exp is simple but bad in the grand scheme of things only allowing slow growth. plus, nothing is explained at all. How much power do you gain when activating your dragon power? oh, I don't know, a lot, I think.. oh then, how much speed do you gain when you put points into agility? oh, I don't know, but now I'm faster than a human. OK, how fast is a normal human in this fantasy setting, then? oh, I don't know. listen, I know that humans, on average, are around the 20 to 25 mph mark, but this doesn't have to be true in his world. as an example, the elf guy prince is so fast that it's hard to see him move. Next is the world in the first 40 chapters isn't flushed out, all you get to know is that there is 2 worlds and on the human side they have a wall and a palace and on the elf side there is fantasy land with a elf palace and other races.next is the Mc doesn't have a reason to do anything. He says he has a family but can't see them. he saves the elves for no reason. he trusts 3 randos just because and fights for humanity with blind faith for no reason, never even questions humanity even when shown evidence. I get that he is human and has been fighting for 5 years, but the people behind the wall and the people defending are different and have a sorta mistrust between them. it could have shown that Mc isn't blinded and is just cautious if he had doubts about the inside of the wall. if for a moment he didn't trust the upper echelon of the military and stayed awake because of it. all of these points are from 1ch to 35ch. Now, the story has potential for growth, but I must drop this because I won't pay for a maybe. I wish that the author continues to write but adds more info and really describes the abilities and how they affect the Mc more.
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Things were fun and game until you died and wake up to the sound "Hey you, finally awake?"
loving the novel so far. would love to see a chapter or few detailing the lore of the two worlds at some point, like is there anything more than the walled city or what happened in the early days of the war with the elves. maybe even a few details about the elves world just so we have a better understanding of what might be happening in the world d even of the Mc doesn't.