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World of delusion

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Sol had always had this belief, this delusion that under the mundane veil of reality there was a fantastic magical world with answers to it all.
After his death, his guess is proved right when he finds himself in the world of his delusions.

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Shadow_Magus

Honestly, the quality of the work itself is really good. I could find almost no errors in grammar or spelling, at least nothing that made me stop to realise it was a mistake. Story development: A decent pacing with an interesting way of keeping things moving without lingering too long on a single place. Character design: By far the best part of the novel so far. Fresh and interesting characters not simply revolving around the usual tropes that get really boring. Each character is unique in their own way and thinks for themselves, which I honestly just love. World Building: A mysterious world of magic and technology in a mishmash that created an interesting setting for the mc to thrive. Still only a few chapters in, but hoping for more chapters quickly Pls do give me my review so we can decide and upload them

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Broken_Warrior_WN

It's definitely one of the most unique concepts I have seen xd ❤️

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bearateme_

Okay I love the book idea and how smooth the transition of the transmigration was , the language is pretty good tooo. Added to library and look forward to more chapters [img=recommend]

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LanumKing

i liked the story good start and its original it properly introduces the read to the world without being generic or copy pasting by making mc die or suddenly end up in dark void etc

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