Really great novel. Still to few chapters in it, but a good start nonetheless. The main character feels interesting, yet relatable enough. The world building is particularly good with this one, and I really look forward to what can be made of this over time. Keep up the great work!
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An interesting premise. Not just the average isekai. The world building feels like it is well done, and the characters feel like real people, and not cardboard cutouts only existing for background noise. The grammar and style of writing is good, which mean there is pretty-much nothing wrong with the novel. It even has a sense of... anticipation, excitment and dread on how the mc will survive, which is also a plus. Keep up the good work author!
No flashy over-the-top vocabulary that makes you stop reading to check the meaning of words. Those do end up ruining the immersion one would require from Webnovels. I like the wording of this novel. Good pacing and a good, thought slightly generic plot-basis. The plot itself is well made and shifts drastically from the run of the mill reincarnation with system plots, which makes it a good fund read. World building and character dialogues feel realistic, and not as though some child had written them, which is always a plus.
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At his words, a smile tugged at the official's lips. Who wouldn't be pleased with an invitation to the most luxurious brothel in the county?
Anime & Comics · Shadow_Magus
This is not my original novel. It is an mtl that I am editing and putting here for my own reading and other's reading.
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Anime & Comics · Shadow_Magus