Shadow_Magus

Shadow_Magus

male LV 4

Currently writing my fanfic about Lord of the Mysteries. I really like the way things have turned out so far.

2019-05-08 Bergabung United Nations
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Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Replied to Simma_boi

Thank you for the review!

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Posted

Really great novel. Still to few chapters in it, but a good start nonetheless. The main character feels interesting, yet relatable enough. The world building is particularly good with this one, and I really look forward to what can be made of this over time. Keep up the great work!

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Replied to KnightofOrder

Thank you much!

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Posted

An interesting premise. Not just the average isekai. The world building feels like it is well done, and the characters feel like real people, and not cardboard cutouts only existing for background noise. The grammar and style of writing is good, which mean there is pretty-much nothing wrong with the novel. It even has a sense of... anticipation, excitment and dread on how the mc will survive, which is also a plus. Keep up the good work author!

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Posted

No flashy over-the-top vocabulary that makes you stop reading to check the meaning of words. Those do end up ruining the immersion one would require from Webnovels. I like the wording of this novel. Good pacing and a good, thought slightly generic plot-basis. The plot itself is well made and shifts drastically from the run of the mill reincarnation with system plots, which makes it a good fund read. World building and character dialogues feel realistic, and not as though some child had written them, which is always a plus.

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Replied to Emarleetah

lmao

At his words, a smile tugged at the official's lips. Who wouldn't be pleased with an invitation to the most luxurious brothel in the county?

Myst, Might, Mahem

Myst, Might, Mahem

Anime & Comics · Shadow_Magus

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Replied to Goro_Mou

This is not my original novel. It is an mtl that I am editing and putting here for my own reading and other's reading.

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Replied to Emarleetah

Thank you

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Replied to Goro_Mou

Thank you so much!

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus
4 days ago
Replied to Emarleetah

Thank you so much!

  • Myst, Might, Mahem original

    Myst, Might, Mahem

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE WEAKTOSTRONG DARK CULTIVATION VILLAIN SURVIVAL

    Baru Diperbarui

    Jeong, the Scythe Killer Demon, felt joy in killing others. He happened to look just like Mok Gyeongwoon, the third young master of the Mok Sword Manor... "If you pretend to be me and live my life. I will let you out of this prison." "Will you really give me that chance?" *Slash* He killed the third young master and now he will live his life pretending to be him. Will the fake Mok Gyeongwoon survive this life? The serial killer began his new life as the third young master of the great Mok Sword Manor. --------------------------------------------------------- Essentially this is the prequel to the incredibly famous Nano Machine. For some reason, I could not find the translated version here, or just about anywhere on the net. So I have decided to bring it over from a very small website, translating and editing bits and pieces. It is a fanfic so I am not making any money from this and it is only here because I like the tts function of webnovel. This is my first time doing this kind of thing, so please tell me anything I do wrong. I do not own anything here at all. None of it. Even the cover is not mine. Please tell me if the original owners wish for me to remove it, and I will do so immediately. I hope everyone likes it.

    22 Chs 30 Koleksi

  • Singularity: Lord of Mysteries original

    Singularity: Lord of Mysteries

    Book&Literature ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY DARK SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION TRAGEDY KINGDOMBUILDING

    4.54

    Members of the Aurora Order had brutally murdered Max, a child of the age of 15. In the body of this unfortunate child, enters the memories of Samuel, a not-so-innocent person in his previous life, whose life choices finally caught up to him one day and ended up killing him. However, he is reincarnated in the world of Lord of Mysteries, a horrifyingly tragic world where humans struggle against inevitable monsters of epic proportions by gaining Beyonder powers that ultimately either end up consuming them and causing them to lose control, or become strong enough that the will or the original creator takes over their souls. In this world of steam and machinery headed towards a prophesied apocalypse, armed with a Pathway that did not exist in the fictional novel, that will either lead to his ascension or his demise, Max must strive to survive and save the world... or would he? ---------- P.S. This is my first Fan-fic so go easy on me and give me pointers. Positive criticism is welcomed. If you don't like it or the writing is terrible, Ok. Just leave and don't rub it in my face T-T Anyway, I will post chapters hopefully daily, and I hope you guys help with the creation process of the novel. compared to my other novels, I will be writing this one with no fixed story in mind, so I will depend on you guys to give me pointers on what should come next. As of now, I have only written 2 chapters and will try to write one a day and keep up the upload schedule. Note: I had read the novel quite some time ago, and I do not wish to read 1400 chapters of something I have already read. So I went to the wiki and read through the summaries, and got the just of at least the Tingen Plot. Unfortunately, I do not want our first arc to be in Tingen for obvious reasons; Adam. Also, for those thinking his pathway is super overpowered after reading the first chapter, be warned that despite this, as long as he does not reach the highest Sequence and beyond, he is still too weak to survive in this chaotic world. Also, anything powerful comes at a cost, and you will see the cost when he tries to become a Beyonder. Anyway, I hope everyone likes the story and please comment and leave a review so I know where to fix the the fan fic.

    135 Chs 1.8k Koleksi

  • Tales of Survival original

    Tales of Survival

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG VILLAIN CONQUER KILLER ORDINARY RIGHTEOUS NPC

    4.74

    Kai; is a miserable orphan, abandoned by his parents, the government, the orphanage, and seemingly fate itself as he meets his end not too long after he is born. Although this time he lived on Earth was his entire life, it was relatively short in reality; just a few years. Kai; the child of a baron, also awakens from his comatose state, with mixed memories of himself and the Kai from Earth. A super-chip, which was inserted into Earth's Kai and ultimately led to his demise somehow followed its way to the Kai of this world as well. However, the most important news to Kai was that he was now in a fantasy world like in the novels and movies he had seen, where not just martial arts, but superpowers and even magic existed! ... A few years later, to Kai's dismay, this world was not all that it seemed, as mysterious immortal beings slowly appeared in the world, their very existence; a contradiction to existence itself. ... How will Kai survive in this new world? Will he be able to escape his fate; being a 'character' in this world? Will he be able to defend himself and those he cares for? Read to find out.

    100 Chs 304 Koleksi

  • TETHER original

    TETHER

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG SURVIVAL BETRAYAL KINGDOMBUILDING LEVELUP CONQUER MMORPG

    4.76

    United Human Calendar Year 4701. Almost 5000 years after humans discovered they were not alone in the universe and began their long war with the other two intergalactic civilisations of Draconians and Dwarves. Suddenly, a sound seemingly as though reality itself was being torn apart was heard by every single intelligent life-form in the universe before a voice followed. The voice told them that it would create a virtual platform called Tether, where all the rates would conduct their conflicts with each other. From now on, any large-scale massacres or wars between the civilisations, which could regress the technological, cultural and intellectual progress of the civilisations would be considered treason, and they would be erased. to prove its point, the voice declared a leader from each of the three civilisations; who had conducted such massacres, as dead, and they died instantly, along with all their wealth and belongings. 20 years later, the entire universe is playing the game, not only due to being forced to do so by their governments but also the various rewards, both monetary and otherwise found inside. Jack, a normal human who lost a large part of his family, enters the game after a few years in the military, and a few months of being a free mercenary. However, he comes across a 'stone', which is both a blessing and a curse, giving him incredible powers in the game, but also making him the target of all the powerful and influential humans and other species. Ultimately, all the powerful humans band together, and first rip away his guild from the inside, before laying siege to his home base and finally seizing the item by killing him. ... However, the 'stone' seems to have powers beyond the game and brings Jack back to his past before he lost his family. What will Jack do? And how will he get revenge on those who caused him harm?

    23 Chs 72 Koleksi

  • Evolution online original

    Evolution online

    Sci-fi ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM VIDEOGAME EVOLUTION HIGHIQ

    4.79

    Federation Calendar; the Year 2622. Axel finds himself facing his impending death by an assassin who sneaks into his prison cell. After a little struggle, his miserable life was finally put to an end. However, that wasn't the end of the story. Federation Calendar; the Year 2612. Axel finds himself gone back 10 years into his past self. With revenge burning in his heart against the one who conspired against him and his parents, will Axel be able to overcome the hurdles his enemies throw at him, and ascend to becoming the leader of the newly released game 'Evolution Online'? Would this game, that within just 2 months of its release, became the only VRMMORPG within the federation, and had the interest of countless powerful groups and casual players alike, would become the hammer that forges Axel into the greatest player with incredible fortune, or the burial ground for his miserable life once more? What is the secret behind the game? Which took over the federation like a storm, and having its major powers put in their all, just to get a small crumb of the pie? Join my discord server for some behind the scenes, and updates on when chapters are released https://discord.gg/gmfXHdm5f5

    29 Chs 489 Koleksi

  • The Epoch of Magic original

    The Epoch of Magic

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG SHOUNEN

    4.89

    Daron, since childhood has been engrossed in his fantasies of magic coming to the earth, or some way in which he gets to learn magic. As his life progresses, he cannot part with these imaginations, and instead decided to go down the path of a novelist, and spread his fantasies with the world. Over time, his fame grows as his novels become increasingly popular among people of most ages. At the age of 59, the world seems to have literally gone against him as countless lightening bolts strike his house. Thankfully, the lightening rod protected him, which angers the world. After countless fruitless efforts, just as the world is about take take more drastic measures to kill Daron, he suddenly chokes himself in a wicked twist of fate, with his own tongue and dies a hilariously horrible death. When he regains consciousness, he finds himself an unborn child still in the womb of his mother, with his AI assistant from his laptop in his head. Follow Daron as he progresses through this new and mysterious world he had been reincarnated into. Join my discord server for some behind the scenes, and updates on when chapters are released https://discord.gg/gmfXHdm5f5

    135 Chs 741 Koleksi

  • I am System original

    I am System

    Fantasy ACTION REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC

    4.7

    Jack, upon returning home from a short day of stress free work, had his front door explode on him, causing him to die on the spot. Waking up, he finds himself in a white space where he spends uncountable years driven to the edge of madness before reaching enlightenment. However, his consciousness is fought over by some indefinitely strong beings, resulting in him being thrown into the void to be torn to shreds by his own velocity. However, an even stronger being finds him and rebuilds him before placing him in a new world, as a System? Join my discord server for some behind the scenes, and updates on when chapters are released https://discord.gg/gmfXHdm5f5

    84 Chs 1.5k Koleksi

  • The Supreme Sage original

    The Supreme Sage

    Fantasy ACTION REINCARNATION MAGIC VIDEOGAME

    4.72

    Luke, an average player, and fan of the popular fully-immersive MMORPG 'Ultimatum' and is just about to log out and leave the game after it's shut-down had been announced. However, as soon as he pressed down on the illusory button, a sharp pain attacked his mind, causing him to lose consciousness. When he woke up, he finds himself in the body of Lucas, a slave in the outskirts of the capital of the Leon Kingdom, Sozra. The catch is, that the Leon Kingdom was said to have been destroyed a long time ago in-game. Also, within Luke's status, there is a notification; [Beta testing begins in 92 days, 02 hours, 39 minutes, 12 seconds] Beta Testing? Does this mean that he was brought to the time before the game was released, and even before the open betas? Lastly, his status is slightly different to normal player's. It says [NPC status] ... Discover, explore and grow together with Luke, as he tries to find the truth behind his appearance in Ultimatum, 23 years back in time than the moment he was going to log off. What will happen? Will he be able to survive in a game world? Read it to find out! -------------------------------------------------------------------- Do you like The Legendary Mechanic? Then you will love this! Join my discord server for some behind the scenes, and updates on when chapters are released https://discord.gg/gmfXHdm5f5

    104 Chs 1.8k Koleksi

  • Return of the last survivor original

    Return of the last survivor

    Action ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM SURVIVAL LEVELUP CONQUER SHOUNEN

    4.69

    Merlin, the strongest human elementalists remaining, is fighting the otherworldly zombie monarch; Zero, along with the rest of the handful survivors of the human race. However, Zero suddenly grins and unleashes a truly terrifying attack wiping out everything. However, when Merlin opens his eyes, he is alive, and back to the time just before it all started. Before Zero, before the zombies, before the apocalypse. Now he must move forward in order to protect those he couldn't before, and change the fate that awaits Earth. Join my discord server for some behind the scenes, and updates on when chapters are released https://discord.gg/gmfXHdm5f5

    128 Chs 2.6k Koleksi

  • Asura- Enemy of Gods original

    Asura- Enemy of Gods

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC

    Ves, the second son of a Viscount, awakens just after recovering from a deadly unknown disease which reaped the life of his elder brother. However, Ves wakes up with certain differences compared to how he was before the disease nearly killed him. Follow Ves as he explores the world of Magic and Swordsmanship, while trying to find the truth about the world he lives in that is ruled over by Gods. In a world where the Gods are hiding an enormous secret, blinding the mortals into following them like sheep, Ves will use his abilities to grow stronger and uncover the truth. The Truth that is being hidden, and the Truth than no one knows about.

    20 Chs 66 Koleksi