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Jack, upon returning home from a short day of stress free work, had his front door explode on him, causing him to die on the spot.
Waking up, he finds himself in a white space where he spends uncountable years driven to the edge of madness before reaching enlightenment.
However, his consciousness is fought over by some indefinitely strong beings, resulting in him being thrown into the void to be torn to shreds by his own velocity.
However, an even stronger being finds him and rebuilds him before placing him in a new world, as a System?
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This is a nice bk, still too short to say anything concrete. But it's unique and interesting, if you like System's then it's probably for you. The only "negative" point that come's to mind, are the "short" chapter's. But the update rate is daily, so it's not a problem. The grammar is okay too, not perfect, but you don't need to read a sentence 10 time's to understand it. But there are mistake's, small one's, but they exist. But not stupid stuff like, he/she/her/him, and if, i didn't see it and it probably was a 1 time thing. Im not gonna talk about the content of bk itself, you should form your own opinion and not get influenced by reviews too much. I think it's self-explanatory what this story is about. I just wish this book had 100 chapter's already, but no, i needed to find this while it had 20 chapter's only...Anyway, i hope the Author doesn't drop this, and good luck!
This is the first time I read something like this. I thought, hey, isn't this one of those niche? But damn, it's a lot more different. and that makes me so curious and anxious, like what next? Would the system guys pay him obedience or will they revolt against him later on? I'm seriously curious and also, I'm wondering how long does he want to exist like that? Then again, I like the fact he seems godlike but yet he is not OP himself. He's just a stragglers trying to survive, growing from weak to strong too. lol. it's a nice read. come join me
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So this is a good book and I am looking foward to how the mc grows mentally as this is part that many books miss and the mc just get repetitive and annoying. I would also like to ask if you can add a character with the name Sena or have Sena somewhere inthe story? I’ve only hadn by one person do it before and i want to spread my name like a virus just cause I think its funny. Once again thank you for such a good book and hope you finish it with lots of chapters.
I am sorry for this Author, the "spaw" is for zhanye, some brazilians didn't watch the full video of his crimes. I know my apology is not much, just ignore or report the comment that are disturbing you. I didn't read your novel but I want you to have a great future.
Thank u for takimg the time to create this book I've been looking for a book similar to God Of Games. Just a small question are u going to include the power to revive? cuz I feel like that would take away a lot from ur story. Since u can't really relish life without death.
Great work and a master piece. I just read a few chapter of this novel and I can say it’s unique and attention gripping. The author carefully gives vivid description of scenes and events which is totally refreshing and keeps one wanting more. Good job author. Keep it up.
Pretty short story so far so not much to comment on. Writing Quality (4.5/5 --> Rounds up to 5/5): There are slight grammatical mistakes, but there is nothing that impedes with my understanding of the storyline. Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to say. Story Development (4/5): I would honestly say that the beginning was a bit too repetitive in terms of how he wished he could have done differently or didn't live as boring of a life. I would have preferred to jump in the action so that it would have hooked me a bittt more, but this is mostly personal preference. Character Design (5/5): Lots of details sprinkled throughout. World Background (5): Many descriptions that help set the tone. Overall, good job!
This book is great and has a unique feel, the only real bad thing about it would be the spelling or missing letters other than that it is really good. Quick question, Are you still working on this story or are you dropping it?
Honestly I wasn’t expecting much from this novel at first. Though it has a lot, and I mean a LOT of spelling issues, the character development, individuality, and world backround are enough to let me ignore the other issues.
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This is the Almighty System maker!!! I've read a lot of unique systems novels here and this is one will be one of the top makers. Not only does it have a great unique plot, but every chapter is fascinating. I don't care if the system never ends. I want to read more about it
The first two chaps were interesting, to say the least, It's an interesting book where the mc himself is a system. It's interesting seeing how the mc grows from what he was in chapter 3 and so on, and how he would interact with his host. There are a few grammatical mistakes here and there in the beginning but that disappeared once his book got to the good parts. The only thing I would say I had a problem with was the repetitive beginning but that's not a problem anymore. The world-building is great, he gives a lot of details to help the reader understand. Can't believe he isn't pro yet,
I love it, the writing is great and its nice to a web novel with an original idea that is executed well. Worth a read and I look foward to more in the future.
I love the idea of beeing on the systems side of story development!!! at the same time I think there is much more potential to it. it's like a dungeon novel mostly writing about the adventurers. not the Dungeon/System itself. (sorry if I get understood as a Bulli:) - I know beeing an author is hard work, but only asking for good reviews and soft critic is also really hard on the readers.
It looks like the author is inspired by "I am the God of Games" but the story is still unique. Overall, I liked it and recommend it. The story quality is great and fun. But from time to time, he makes weird typos here and there.
im hoping i wont have to use fast passes on this because i cant afford coins and i only get like 3 fast passes a day D O N T D R O P.........
Hi guys, I'm here to say that The first 2 chapters are just me setting up the plot. The main stuff starts after, so do read through it.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!