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The 100: AllFather
4.33 (12 peringkat)
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A man Dies, and becomes transmigrated to the 100 universe, with the traditional system. This man will go on to become a legend and build a kingdom on this new earth
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the story was okay though the harem ruined a good bit and the fantasy creatures became too numerous. I could look beyond that for some fics but the script type writing style broke the camels back on this one
La historia es buena y me gusta el mc en su mayoria. El problema que tengo con el mc es que su personalidad no es estable, con esto quiero decir que no reacciona a las situaciones en base a su conosimiento, o como te lo presentan y termina reccionando en base a la trama original para encaminar la historia por lo que carece de originalidad y solo sigue la trama con un toque magico. Yo personalmente lo dejo si quiero ver the 100 lo voy a volver a ver y no leer un fic. Espaรฑol.
really good. love how you balanced the wishes with curses. can't wait for you to produce more chapters.
The Author needs to arrange the chapters by separating the Announcements from the real Chapters, that way it looks clean and organized. Also Author NEEDS introduce characters/Races with Proper LORE and History so it looks and feels consistent to read and understand.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Adorei a histรณria tem muito potencial, porรฉm as conversas sรฃo pouco desenvolvidas รฉ demora uma aceitaรงรฃo unilateral, tipo quando ele contou sobre a magia, mas tem muito potencial e eu adorei, espero que o autor continue atualizando
love the story one of the best The 100 start story i have read please keep it up
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it was good at first, but he is adding to many fantasy creatures it's like at chapter 2 only 4 then at chapter 5 there are 10 more magical beings