Death_to_all_2816

LV 4
2023-07-02 Bergabung Global
Lencana 5

Moments 102
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Death_to_all_2816
9 days ago
Posted

Good story but it needs some work I like the premise and the way it was handled

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Death_to_all_2816
11 days ago
Commented

Why only 38 more chapters?

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Death_to_all_2816
15 days ago
Posted

Love the story it has a good premise need some work but ok overall

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Death_to_all_2816
20 days ago
Posted

Great story premise love to see more just keep at it. This story has great potential

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Death_to_all_2816
28 days ago
Commented

If it is fire, bending should give him Shira abilities

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Death_to_all_2816
29 days ago
Commented

The book wasn't that bad. I would love to keep reading

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Death_to_all_2816
29 days ago
Posted

Great premise for a story. Would love to see more keep it up.

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Death_to_all_2816
1 months ago
Posted

The story is good Great premise needs some work on the pacing but I don't think it's a bad

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Death_to_all_2816
1 months ago
Posted

Great story premise would love to see more. Hope you keep writing.

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Death_to_all_2816
1 months ago
Posted

Love the story needs longer chapters great premise------------------///////-----------------