My Cursed life in Highschool DxD

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Nest0r

This is a really nice fanfic. I would say it's charming in its simplicity. Though it has quite many problems, the most notable being that it is too action-paced. Fighting to more fighting and even more fighting, with sparse character interactions, and when character interactions were about to begin, on the reader's side, two red flags were thrown, and *boom* even more fighting. Still, the fights are done quite well, so it isn't as bad as it could be. Even though character interactions are sparse, they are mostly well-written, though some of them resulted in fights and God, when you have so many figths already, and even in character interactions you add more fights... It's like those people who add 11 spoons of sugar to the tea. [SPOILERS BELOW] I liked him using weird words instead of swearing. Quite obviously it was something from his previous life, and I don't really know why he stopped. I mean probably as a sign he matured or maned up, like the whole girl cutting her long hair trope, but I don't consider drinking and swearing to be a sign of maturing, the same with cutting hair. Also, this is probably the worst character background I have ever seen. I mean, the only fine thing about that is that he didn't want to swear and used some interesting words instead. That was really nice and original. But all the other aspects of his background felt like somebody took the most brainless Turkey soap opera and added a femboy there just for it to gain a more 'modern' vibe. I was laughing so hard when his father decided to just randomly sign the document that in a lawyer's language would be translated with something like, "If life hits you with anything, your kids will be without anything to support their living.". Why he did that? Because he has enamored... Yeah, great reason... And later he was shameless enough to give advice to his son, who now had to work for three people. I pretty much took it as satire. There are many other quite weird things, some frustrating, some rather dumb. I mean, literally, the beginning was just a process of introducing characters to have them k*lled. The spirit of the sword and the guy who taught him the basics of fighting. The moment when Venelana gave him a warning and all that. With how much he was scared at that moment, I think he would just change schools instead. Why the plum would he just pay a year's rent? I mean, he literally was living in that room for a week or two, and just like that, he decided to pay a year's rent just to have the room in the same state when he will come back? The whole Grayfia thing was weird as pineapple. I think the author wrote in some comment that it was because she cared about her family immensely. That still doesn't explain why you would just get a guy the day after the fiasco and try to scare him. I mean, if she were caring so much, she would have a track record of thr*atening Riser whenever he was alone. And that's not mentioning that a maid wouldn't do something like that to her master's guest. While the plot twist of the blood river being the place where trihexa is sealed was good, randomly unrelasing him certainly plumming wasn't. When I thought the rushed pace would finally stabilize, it got multiplied instead. With even more fighting. It might be just me, but personally, I hate complicating the plot unnecessarily like that. The whole multiversum, world jumping, time jumping, and all that plums. I mean, if there was a need for this, wouldn't it be easier to just make the protagonist some nameless hero who would fight in the Record of Ragnarok with bare hands? And after that, let him hop worlds, because his wish would be something like "I want a place to belong." And finally, in DxD, he would find out that he is in fact a swordsman. Simple plot, but let's look for the positives. HIS WORLD WOULDN"T BE DESTROYED just so he could have a reason for world travel. Right now the author is very thorough in making every talk protagonist have last 15 minutes at maximum and characters he meets to cease existing in 1 week to 1 month from the first interaction. The Record of Ragnarok arc was quite nice, but I feel like the fights were too exaggerated, at least the second one. I mean, we already have lots of fights, so when those are also long... We are near a very dangerous border. Also, what about the whole learning the basics of blacksmithing? The MHA world looks promising. About my review, even though it is written in this kind of way, don't treat it like an attack. I'm just the kind of guy that can't stop complaining. Overall, I like this fanfic; if I didn't, I wouldn't be reading so far, and I plan to continue.

LV 5

akasuna123

plum thing is weird.........................

LV 4

Bilal_Arshad

The MC is wierd he wants to be a femboy when he has an awesome body and cries about it but to each their own. The MC also uses "Plum" for cursing which is very weird but you get used to it. Then he is EXTREMELY whiney and stupid, I mean his cursed sword thingy has to practically drag and beg for him to do anything. He also dislikes women, maybe trauma, that may be the reason for being femboy. So all in all it's good but not for me.

LV 3

jaro_onody

"What is this? cancer . I've seen more readable translations than this..............................................................................

LV 2

Damian_Gold

being honest i almost drop coz of the plum thing.......i think guy was high when thinking about that but its actually funny after you get used to it also author i think you're cooking something good as long as he doesn't join a peerage you won't burn it.........if you think that how will he get op then, make his sword be able to absorb the powers or stats of those he kills and the powers are his not the sword but overall it's a good ff

LV 11

Haymore

As a novel, it is alright. Grammar is good, story is ok, there is character progression for MC and so on. But it is not a DxD novel. MC hates breasts and women in general. If this fanfic would be in any other world it might even rate as a good story, but not in DxD.

LV 4

OneWound

Pretty good book so far, can't wait to see goe it goes. Author can you tell whether the mc will remain human or not (personally o want hin to trnain human butbuts up to you.)

Really Interesting story and quite different than most of the dxd fan novels I've read here on this platform. I hope you continue with this story cuz I for one am really enjoying this story and if request are taken then please don't let MC join any peerage or make him Azazle's fun subject tho you know better what to do with you own story but still

LV 3

Flavio_Scavone

Chapter 37 It Is really good right now, If you are able to get past the first 2 or so chapters, that are honestly quite of-putting, you will have an enjoyable read with a good MC. The story Is also includes a few original turns that I haven't really seen in other DxD fanfics so far, so original in fact, that It makes you wonder if the author has injected something before he started typing on his keyboard

LV 4

Juronoss

Overall, I enjoyed the story but there are some problems, mainly with the MC, one moment he is a cold blooded killer and the next a normal guy. At first, I thought it was him who became more mature but then 10 chapters after that he regressed to how he was, also the MC said he wouldn't kill those who don't attack and then become a hitman. I don't feel the growth of the MC neither in mentality or power. Also there is a problem of power scaling throughout the story. Good luck for the volume 2

LV 4

Boredford

hey if you're new to this ff don't let the negative review stop you from reading , the early chapter might be weird but it's worth it, i recommend to at least read up to 80 chapter 👍

LV 14

Kyle_Cochrane_3690

This story starts off rather excellent. Than dxd part of the book is amazing. Then you get blindsided with a multiverse saga that is essentially just the mc going through hard time after hard time, which I think if the only way you can develop your character is through suffering than you aren’t a great writer. The powerscaling makes no sense as well, we go from losing half our limbs to muzan then going par for par with post aizen saga ichigo, with no noted strength improvements.

LV 1

SlowWittedSong

It started out interesting, albeit with some hiccups in the plot that I could ignore, but after the events of Trihexa began, the story descended into some kind of stupid absurdity. from my point of view, the author should not have created an apocalypse in his home world out of nowhere (it was very a strange decision (I could have simply chalked it up to hallucinations and used it as a springboard for character growth), not to mention the fact that with such a character it was necessary to completely move away from canonical events and develop his story in the setting, like Slash / dog did. Let's add to this empty characters that don't evoke emotions + a strange decision with a child. author if you are reading this then know good stories in There aren't that many dxd settings, and many of them deviate completely from canon so their characters can breathe. and if you want to write something else based on dxd, then I hope you will make a more local story with an emphasis on the folklore of your home country where gg does not become some kind of super deicide, but builds interaction with the environment and grows with those around him

LV 14

stinkclaw

the start is annoying but gets better now my emotions hurt.

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The_WheelOfFortune

This shit is INSANELY wierd the mc was a femboy in his past life and he’s terrified of women. Not the best start but I’ll read until chapter 15 to see where this is going.

LV 4

Snake_Orc

This shit is beautiful. I don’t get people talking about the quality when I think it’s fairly readable, much better than any translation. I do kinda understand the to action packed but I like it. My one complaint would be it kinda just jumps around a bit but nothing crazy

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Nice eyes... Mc femboy... 🤢 [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

LV 4

ACHILLES

Okay I feel the fic might get better later on but as of now its hard to stay focused reading it. Nothing attracts the readers attention so far we go from the kuoh notes to him fighting, With no information how or why he started doing the fighting(Could've missed it as i was trying to skip the boxing or mma whatever he's doing as i feel no attchment to the mc.) other than that i think the story fine might come back to read later on idk

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Knax

This is one of the best fanfics i have read in a looooong time Thanks for the no Harem thing and normal human emotion its a Break From all the Crack i've bin Reading [img=strong][img=recommend]