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Joshua is a young man fresh out of college and preparing for medical school. After dropping his friend off at the airport and packing up he takes a road trip to Las Vegas to meet up with his family on vacation. On the way a weird ringing sound grabs his attention and before long take his consciousness. When he wakes up the world has changed, several people have disappeared, and dead miasma born creatures walk the streets. Will Joshua be able to survive his circumstances and figure out the mysteries of the strange occurrence?
This story will be PG-13 (didn't want to say general audiences considering some vivid imagery)
Slight Spoiler: (((As of Volume two this story will also be getting the system and exploration tags added on. So look forward to it.)))
I hope you all enjoy reading and leave a comment from time to time to tell me what you think.
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As a gift to myself for Christmas I have decided to join the shameless sect and give myself five stars. Seriously though I'm just starting out on this story and I'm enjoying writing it and seeing where things take me. Hopefully this helps me improve my skills and I get better the further along I get in the story. There are several things I have in mind for this novel, but I don't want to spoil anything so I'll keep that talk to myself for now. I hope you guys continue to read and support my book. Comments and critiques are welcomed, but try to be nice to each other in the comment section. Oh and yes even you exp. guys are welcome to come if you want. Thank you for your time.
I like the novel is nice to see an MC different from the rest one that was not a loser before everything went out of ****, volume 1 can feel somewhat overwhelming on some occasions but in general it is a great story, I hope from the heart that does not end abandoned c:
First of all excuse me if there are mistakes english is not my native language. What I can say about this story is that for now it is well written, the characters and the plot is well constructed. The fights are well described without being too surrealist so I like that. For finished I hope that the author continues like that both for the frequency of these updates and for the quality of its plot.
MC is Holy saint! Hero that saves damsel. Too soft. Too naive. This character would be perfect if MC was a 12 years OLD. After all knight in shining armor is the dream of all early ****'s dream. But for a big OLD man like him it doesn't suit his taste at all. I don't see any ability that stands MC out of the rest. He doesn't have any Idea of Online games. Nor is a nerd. All he is, is a muscle head with good combat power. But wheres the Cheat of MC? Cheats must be introduced in the first chapter in all fiction novels. Author intrudces to god level figures in the first chapter but doesn't tell How mc gonna dominate those figure in the future. This is just pure frustration/ I've already read till climax of this novel. But i dont see any ability that will help him become stronger than those god level figures.
Writing quality-5 Updating stability-5 Story development-3.5 Character design-2 World Background-5 Honestly the plot and world development are really good, but i just dont really like how the mc is a saint. im fine with nice MCs but this is just a little overboard.
Before I say my thought these are genre's that I think the author should add: Action, Adventure, Sword and magic, Guilds, Wars, Pets, Monsters, Game Elements, Evolution, Elves, Dwarves, Sci-fi, hidden gem and Hard-working protaganist. I Feel like more people will see and give this novel a chance with those tags attached to it.ย As I make this review I am currently at chapter 404 and this novel is amazing. This is one of the best novels I've read so far and I've lost count of how many I've read over the years (no I ain't old). ย Great main character, solid background in martial arts and combat in general; doesn't feel like Joshua's OP for no reason. The reasons why he's so strong is given to you straight up in a convincing and VERY realistic manner. All important fights are hard fought and never feel like an easy win from the get go. The way he interacts with other characters actually feels like he's talking to people and not subordinatesย or irrelevant extras that are there just to praise him. Amazing side characters, there has not been a single time where I felt like Joshua's friends, family or even (to my suprise) his first group of guild members have been a waste of space. They all play important roles and they always have a role, always being brought back into relevance. You really don't see that often in novels and I love it in this one. The world building in this novel is solid, as of right now you won't get any complaints out of me. I also look forward to how Joshua's guild interacts with the World Government guild and the other guilds around the world. TOP TIER NOVEL SO FAR!! KEEP IT UP!!!
I loved this story and all that goes with it! It was different than what I was expecting but it was still a great read. The one thing I would nitpick at while reading this all in a couple days, is the fights. Sometimes they just drag on and on! There is nearly 100 chapters of fighting and dungeon diving in less than 300 chapters.
The stories plot is original and interesting, although there are a few things that could be improved upon, such as grammer and character details. I find that there have been some consistent mistakes like when the author uses sense instead of since or when they use do when it should be due. The author also could describe the characters appearances in more detail because some times I find it hard to picture them. These are the main short comings of the story that i've found but besides that i've found everything else enjoyable such as the personality of the protagonist who is strong and reliable and the plot of the story. The giant monsters are really cool, especially the city bosses. ๐
Very good apocalypse novel so far the story and character developement have all been on point. It definitely has the potential to be one of the best novels of it's type I've read. Really looking forward to how it progresses.
The only thing i dont like is in the early story is that only female can become stronger through fights. But overall it a good movel.[img=recommend]
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Great read, story progresses at a steady pace overall. Sometimes it jumps a little forward when needed and goes into great details at others. No major grammar issues and a new twist to an old genre
Well written, coherent plot and pretty unique characters. Some very minor over-explanations along with MC being consistently overpowered. Well worth the read.
Is he going to be a hero to the end or will we see some hardships to harden him later on? Please answer me.
I liked this work, especially the first volume. The story is written in clear language. But in the second volume, I got bored reading descriptions of endless adventures in the dungeons. Thank you for your work, I look forward to further development of the story.
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A good story. Well written characters, good storyline. The MC isn't ridiculously overpowered and it's a nice twist that he's actually behind everyone else. Gave only 4 stars for the writing quality as the writer doesn't seem to know the difference between since and sense...but not that big a deal.
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This novel is really good, some people might find the first volume a little tedious to read. The chapters were long and filled with details. Also the development of the abilities didn't really start to after the 1st volume. If you found it tedious I still recommend you stick with it definitely won't be dissapointed.
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Starting the story has cost me but in the end I like it. The character development is very well done, none is wasted and forgotten, everyone contributes and is known about them. I like the story, especially the clues about the system, I have never seen the system come out in volume 2 XD, in general very happy with this novel.
This story isn't anything special,if anything is very below average! The MC is to much of a "hero",it's so stupid how much he wants to save people! Like I would understand if the where his family or close friends but no there legit just random people! In the first couple chapters there's this women who screams and when she screamed monsters came so people where naturally mad at her but the MC is like,"Hey! Leave that poor women alone! I'm a stupid simp who thinks this women is really hot and I'm a hero for everyone so do as I say!" Like the MC is just so frustrating about all that hero stuff! This doesn't really go with how the story is but I have to say this,there are like five or six reviews from one guy and there all five star reviews so that's tipping the scale in favor to the author a little to much. Sorry for the poor grammar,I kinda wrote this in a rush.