Percy Jackson: Forgotten Son Of Hades

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CopyPaste1

The grammar errors and the cringe is to much! .

LV 4

BobboLobbo

One of the most cringiest stuff I've ever witnessed. The MC is a typical loser who says he doesn't care about anything anymore and than cares and than losses the cared person and goes through his loser life in that way. This is the one of the most unfortunate reads of my life. Grammar left the chat in this book. Bye

LV 4

Knight087

Again one of the rare fanfictions which make people excited to read it and get their hopes down again. The Grammar is the worst of all, MTL is looking better in front of it. Lot of cringy stuff is inserted in the story. And for the love of God stop using dint instead of didn't.

LV 2

CharAznable

From the comments, it seems that for native English speakers, the grammar is bad. But I, I use Google translator to read, so I don't feel this problem, the story is good.

LV 10

JokerHighJack

The grammar and spelling are so bad. It takes away from the story. This needs to be corrected because it is such a hard read otherwise. Please fix it.

LV 1

Gabriel_Menard

I love this fanfiction. Maybe MC is too strong from the start, but I trust the author. The romance between Thalia and MC will be a challenge and slow considering the antagonism between Zeuz and Hadès and that between Thalia and Adès... I like this romance! I approve! The chapters are slow to come out (I think) but that's the author's pace so don't force him to write faster than he wants

LV 13

Old_Man_Sage

This story wants to make this elder hurl himself of a bridge. What is this. This elder can not take this cringe cliche.

LV 13

AshburnDz

Reading this was truly a terrible experience! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

LV 3

ONEROBABOVEALL

dint .

LV 4

mr_moi_tastic

The english isn't all that great but its bearable. Other then that the story is dark but interesting and the main character is realistic for what he's been through. My only hope is this doesn't get dropped and more people can get past the grammar issues.

LV 4

Khan00

I’m excited to see what you doo going forward and how you will develop the character so please dont drop it 😂 and can you at least have him pretend to care but other than that it’s already a good read

LV 14

ShadowScribe

Everyone is talking about the grammar which is a big issue but missing the part where the author messes up the PJO stuff. Misspelling names, different personalities from the source, and mechanics that would invalidate many of the issues demigods face in the source (ability to hide their scent).

LV 6

Kilaske

This is an awesome read and great time killer, so I don't know why it has such bad ratings. It might not be perfect, but it's also not that bad to get lower than 4.

LV 14

Alex_Boen

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LV 14

Alex_Boen

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LV 14

Alex_Boen

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LV 15

Thanksgiving

this is actually really well-thought-out in my opinion keep it up and thanks for the story mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

LV 14

Newcomer_scorpio

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LV 2

AsuraBor

I absolutely love Percy Jackson stories though the grammar is a little rough I feel that it gets the point across and does not truly harm the story because it is good.

LV 4

White_Fox_1647

an amazing story with a few grammar mistakes I don't understand why people want to give it a bad rating because it is amazing keep up the good work