HP: In The Magical World As An Extra

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Maurya070901

How tf can you be an extra if you are from the House of Black!!! Answer me author

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Orions

Before i tell you what i think of this Fanfic please note that there is only 7chapters at the time of writing this review. //\\There isn't really any translation since nothing can tell me that's one. -He updates everyday so 5/5. (Even if i know it's hard.) //\\The reason why i assign 4/5 to "Story Development"/"Character Design"/"World Background" is because all the 7 chapters are a copy of the fanfiction called "Harry Potter: Lost Son" (you can look for it on webnovel). While yes, it has been edited to be more... pleasing to read. //\\//\\ But it doesn't change the fact that the first few chapter are... well copy pasted with some editing and that's it. No change in the way the character speak or the response, nothing. //\\//\\ It's only in the last chapter 7, that the end of the chapter doesn't end the same way as the original version. So i hope the author will make the story more distinct than the "Lost Son" fanfic. //\\//\\ But Hey, it doesn't change the fact that the story is good. It would have been good if the author would have warned about it in the description of the story or at the beginning of the story.

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TheUltimateP1e

Yeaaaa, nah. This fanfic was really fun at first, until author just kept on putting theory after theory after theory about anything and everything into it, not confirming any, not sctually integrating them, but just assuming them to be true, and then just as self glazing of his "incredible" theories, confirmed most through the mfing talking hat. If you wanted to theory rant about fkng harry potter, then go on reddit. This story made an interesting and magical world into a boring and political driven bs.

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Humbuub

Too many words. So much ranting and it just dragged the pacing.

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DaoistPHfxL0

I don't like much, but sometimes I want to read something. I hope the author will not quit his job, as it always happens everywhere 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Wilder6

Has a good plot but I suggest you change the book title, no son of black, would be considered an extra in any book

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Varts

Well, I doubt a fan of the story would believe and trusting goblin at the first chance it got. Anyway did I tell you that the goblin here acts like an elf, with their servitude and all? Well cheers you're in for a treat if you are looking for something different than how the original race portrayed.

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WarLovingMortal

(5/5) I'm at 31 chp The Story is going decent for now. The MC is smart and I like that about him. I hope he remains smart. Keep up the good work 👍 (Will review again at chp100)

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applo43

I'm ready for the novel, and to see where it goes 🙂🙃😉

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jmmrr

dropped, one chapter smaller than the other full of talk and useless descriptions to fill sausage .................................................................

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FigDaddy

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DaoistDumbles

Well… Title is somewhat misleading, due to his ancestry There are some obvious grammatical mistakes Some plot holes/lore errors (some pretty annoying ones) Overall , solid writing, idea and fanfic + a nice read so far👍 Sadly, not one of my favs so far, as I like lore correctness Still, give it a try Dear author, keep up your efforts 👍👍 Unfortunately, I like the Loki ff way more

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Exo_Man

talking nonsense 😮‍💨 .

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Zinion

good novel so far, I just hope the author sticks to the side character, yeah hes a Black, so what technically bar Sirius all the other Blacks were side characters in the main story, so it does make sense to a point, my view is if he really is gonna be a side character, eg not putting his face smack bam in the middle of the main plot. if this happens Ill probably stop reading, but its been awhile since i have read an actual good HP fan fiction, so keep up the good work author, I look forward to see how you go. Ill consider being a patreon once i see how many updates your doing, I have a issue paying money then suddenly the author drops to 1 to 2 chapters a month,

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Sapoemsaboado

(I'm making the comment via Google translate, sorry for any mistakes) I really liked the story, but honestly, don't go by the title about him being an "extra" in the sense of staying isolated and getting strong (that's what I thought), It's more in the sense of giving importance to a character who was never important or even existed in the canon. If you're coming from the first direction, then I'll tell you that it's not exactly that, but I suggest you give it a chance.

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assad1830

talk about creativity and misleading, this work is the same as the one mentioned by the other review with extra steps.

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OverLitch

Cara eu tava gostando, mais o cara fazer aproximadamente 7 capítulos para uma viagem de trem e a seleção de casa, sendo que 3 capítulos já seria legal foi de mais para mim

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Tatenen

I liked it a lot inspite of the story's non lenghty stature. The story was on point looking for the plotholes i found nearly none. And the ones i found were due to the new added elements that weren't in the original books. All in all it was a good read i hope the writer continues the story.