Khan00

Thanks for the chapter and hope he goes down the pure blood rout at least as much as he can

Thank you for the chapters

I was gonna say there isn’t anything wrong with your story just a pain that we only get to vote 3 times a day with how many are out there and we read I’ll try and vote for yours a bit more often but keep up the good work

Thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter looking forward to the next

You didn’t do bad at all truthfully but maybe try and go through the thoughts and what they would say a little more like putting yourself in each of their shoes and writing what they might think and say from their and if you already are just keep up the good work and develop your writing slowly over the span of this story and any others in the future

Thank you for the chapter and if he hasn’t already found good people to help I’d be happy to

Please save them

Thanks for the chapter but with everything that has happened after every police shooting they are sent home till an investigation has been completed